aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai ......

by HumTum on February 07, 2005, 06:06:02 PM
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aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai

vaadaa kar ke ye kaun aayaa nahii.n
shahar me.n aaj raushanii kam hai

jaane kyaa ho gayaa hai mausam ko
dhuup ziyaadaa hai chaa.Ndanii kam hai

aa_iinaa dekh kar Khayaal aayaa
aaj kal un kii dostii kam hai

tere dam se hii mai.n mukammal huu.N
bin tere tera '***' kam hai...........  (NOT MINE)


Please write not mine when writing other people's work!!!!!!!

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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2005, 07:10:40 PM »
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! esp the last 2 lines!!!!!!!

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2005, 08:09:50 PM »
very nice HumTum....
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2005, 09:48:27 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! esp the last 2 lines!!!!!!!

 :D



Shukriya Meena ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2005, 09:48:51 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
very nice HumTum....


Thanks Aryaan....
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