---- /// Aaj bhi meri maa roti hai /// ----

by klaskar on April 22, 2010, 06:16:07 PM
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Darasal main kuch aur likhne ki koshish kar raha tha kuch aur hi ban gaya. Jo main likhna chah raha tha agar wo ban paaya to baad me pesh karunga. Is kavita me maine us ladki k baare me likha hai jisne apne janam se hi apni maa ko rote dekha hai aur aaj tak ro rahi hai uski maa...

jis din main is duniya me aayi,
roti hui aankhen thi meri maa ki,
ghum k nahi wo khsuhi k the aansun,
aankhen tab nam thi meri maa ki,
us din se roti hai meri maa,
aaj bhi nam aankhen hain uski,

bachpan me mujhe chalna sikhaya,
maa ne hi maa kehna sikhaya,
mujhe agar kabhi chot lag jaati,
tab meri maa ki aankh bhar aati,
dard se tab meri maa roti thi,
aaj bhi nam aankhen hain uski,

jab padhne ko college jaana tha,
aur rehne mujhe hostel jaana tha,
maa ki gili aankhon ne mujhko,
us roz bhi rokna chaha tha,
us din meri maa royi thi,
aaj bhi nam aankhen hain uski,

jis din main bani thi dulhan,
tha mujhko duje ghar jaana,
saath apni maa ka chhodke,
tha ek naye ghar ko apnana,
us din meri maa royi thi,
aaj bhi nam aankhen hain uski,

sochti hoon kabhi kabhi main,
kya uska aansu se hai naata,
aaj main usse dur hoon itna,
tab bhi meri maa roti hai,
janam se mere roti rahi hain,
aaj bhi aankhen nam hain uski,

aaj main tere paas nahi hoon,
maa pochhle aaj aansu tu apne,
ek roz mujhe bhi to hai maa banna,
par chahti nahi hoon main yu rona,
ye baat sun k maa fir royi thi,
aaj bhi aankhen nam hain uski...
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2010, 06:21:02 PM »
 tearyeyed very touching poem
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2010, 06:31:41 PM »
shukriya Shalini ji in shabdon k pichhe chhipe dard ko mehsus karne k liye...!!!

Quote from: shalini emmanuel on April 22, 2010, 06:21:02 PM
tearyeyed very touching poem
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2010, 10:45:58 PM »
Vry sad ... vry painful, Vry vry emotinal!!!!!!!!!
Gud work ..
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2010, 10:50:23 PM »
Thanx a lot Neel ji...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 22, 2010, 10:45:58 PM
Vry sad ... vry painful, Vry vry emotinal!!!!!!!!!
Gud work ..
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2010, 04:05:19 AM »
Bahut khoob Kapil
Lagta hai ki har shabd dard mein bhigoya hua hai
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2010, 04:21:13 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji,dil ko chu gayi aapke  kavita.Maa beti ke rishto ko aapne mahesoos karke bahut khoobsurti se likha.excellent icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2010, 05:37:13 AM »


      Ek baar fir kuch naya or bahut achha likha hai klaskar ji.padh k achha laga.
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«Reply #8 on: April 23, 2010, 06:40:50 AM »
Wah kya baat hai        Klaskar ji.....Aapne toh sach me ruladiya...

Janam sey meri bidaai tak
Maa tujko rote hi dekha har waqt
meri khushi mein mere gam mein
Maa tujko rote hi dekha har waqt
ye tere aansu jo baras rahe hai Maa har waqt
ye maalik se duaey maang rahi mere liye har waqt....

               "MAA TUJHE SALAAM"
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2010, 08:33:21 AM »
Bahut khoob Cara ji,very touching lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2010, 08:34:37 AM »
Bahut khoob Cara ji,very touching lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2010, 01:16:18 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji.... !!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 23, 2010, 04:05:19 AM
Bahut khoob Kapil
Lagta hai ki har shabd dard mein bhigoya hua hai
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2010, 01:40:43 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... maine bas ek chhoti si koshish ki thi... maa beti k us rishte ki gehraayi ko to bas wo dono hi samajh sakte hain aur unke us dard ko wo hi mehsoos kar sakte hain... main shukraguzaar hoon aapka ki aapne waqt diya meri kavita ko aur ise pasand kiya...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 23, 2010, 04:21:13 AM
Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji,dil ko chu gayi aapke  kavita.Maa beti ke rishto ko aapne mahesoos karke bahut khoobsurti se likha.excellent icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2010, 01:49:41 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji... kuch naya karne ki koshish karta hoon kabhi kabhi aur agar aap jaise paathak mil jaate hain to himmat milti hai kuch aur naya likhne ka... bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji..!!!

Quote from: tamanna.pt on April 23, 2010, 05:37:13 AM

      Ek baar fir kuch naya or bahut achha likha hai klaskar ji.padh k achha laga.
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2010, 02:21:05 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji.... mera maksad aapko rulane ka nahi tha... bas kuch alag likhne k iraade se maine ye kavita likha hai...

aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: cara on April 23, 2010, 06:40:50 AM
Wah kya baat hai        Klaskar ji.....Aapne toh sach me ruladiya...

Janam sey meri bidaai tak
Maa tujko rote hi dekha har waqt
meri khushi mein mere gam mein
Maa tujko rote hi dekha har waqt
ye tere aansu jo baras rahe hai Maa har waqt
ye maalik se duaey maang rahi mere liye har waqt....

               "MAA TUJHE SALAAM"
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