tu roti hai to lagta hai !!!

by sarfira on January 19, 2012, 01:39:27 AM
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teri aankhon ki, panghat pe, nishaani chor aaya hoon
jo rashmeN thi, woh sari mai, bhula kar laut aaya hoon--

tu pagli thi, jo dil apna, sahej ke rakh nahi payee
ki jhatke me, teri umeed ke sheeshe, mai saare tod aaya hoon--

tu roti hai, to lagta hai, baras raha kahin baadal
tujhe khabar nahi lekin, tere sang apni, muskurahat mai chor aaya hoon--

bewafa hoon mai sangdil hoon, yad rakhna magar itna
jo saanseN thi lamhon ki, guzaar kar ab kafan mai orh aaya hoon--
!!
!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2012, 08:15:16 AM »
kya bat hai sf ji wah
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2012, 09:14:32 AM »
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this is very unusual(mere tareef ka tareeka).. this is becoz u have have really touched my heart..very emotional..
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2012, 10:24:16 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2012, 02:26:07 PM »
dard ki intehaan h0 gayi saahill ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2012, 02:35:08 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wha dilfareb peshkash hai ,,,sarfira sahab
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2012, 04:17:28 PM »
Quote from: saahill on January 19, 2012, 08:15:16 AM
kya bat hai sf ji wah
thnx
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2012, 04:18:25 PM »
Quote from: saahill on January 19, 2012, 08:15:16 AM
kya bat hai sf ji wah
thnx
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2012, 04:23:05 PM »
thanx Mkv ji
ye mene Dr. Viswas ji ki ek kavita ki dhun pr likha tha
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this is very unusual(mere tareef ka tareeka).. this is becoz u have have really touched my heart..very emotional..
Vaah sarfira ji Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2012, 04:38:38 PM »
Quote from: sarfira on January 19, 2012, 01:39:27 AM
teri aankhon ki, panghat pe, nishaani chor aaya hoon
jo rashmeN thi, woh sari mai, bhula kar laut aaya hoon--

tu pagli thi, jo dil apna, sahej ke rakh nahi payee
ki jhatke me, teri umeed ke sheeshe, mai saare tod aaya hoon--

tu roti hai, to lagta hai, baras raha kahin baadal
tujhe khabar nahi lekin, tere sang apni, muskurahat mai chor aaya hoon--

bewafa hoon mai sangdil hoon, yad rakhna magar itna
jo saanseN thi lamhon ki, guzaar kar ab kafan mai orh aaya hoon--
!!
!!

acha hai sarfira ji per aisa aap ne kyon kiya kya majburi hai...!
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«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2012, 05:02:00 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on January 21, 2012, 04:38:38 PM

acha hai sarfira ji per aisa aap ne kyon kiya kya majburi hai...!
thanx Seba ji--
wesa maine esa islie kia q ki mai Sarfira hoon tongue3
whi krta hun jisse mere alawa sabhi ka faida ho !!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2012, 05:07:29 PM »
Quote from: sarfira on January 21, 2012, 05:02:00 PM
thanx Seba ji--
wesa maine esa islie kia q ki mai Sarfira hoon tongue3
whi krta hun jisse mere alawa sabhi ka faida ho !!!

acha to batao kise fyada hua icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2012, 07:58:12 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on January 21, 2012, 05:07:29 PM

acha to batao kise fyada hua icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
hahaha
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