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« on: May 20, 2005, 10:53:58 PM » |
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dekha jo aaine mein aaj khud ko phir se tanha paaya
dard had bad gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere ashkon ko dekh kar aashman mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha jo chand ko to usko bhi apne saath rota hua paaya.........
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tushar_4u_im
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« Reply #1 on: May 20, 2005, 11:03:12 PM » |
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dekha jo aaine mein aaj khud ko phir se tanha paaya
dard had bad gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere ashkon ko dekh kar aashman mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha jo chand ko to usko bhi apne saath rota hua paaya......... sachhe dost ki to yahi nishani hoti hai,.. dost kaisa bhi ho usse aapnio dosti pani hoti hai,... bus do dosto me ek batt anjani hoti hai,.. k sabse alag har dost ki kahani hoti hai,.... |
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Meena
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« Reply #2 on: May 20, 2005, 11:10:25 PM » |
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dekha jo aaine mein aaj khud ko phir se tanha paaya
dard had bad gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere ashkon ko dekh kar aashman mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha jo chand ko to usko bhi apne saath rota hua paaya......... wah wah waheed!!!!! :D |
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« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2005, 04:24:51 AM » |
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Wah! Bohat khoob Waheed & Tushar..........
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« Reply #4 on: May 21, 2005, 04:19:48 PM » |
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bahot khoo waheed ji.....
yunhi likhtre rahiye.....
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« Reply #5 on: May 21, 2005, 05:54:03 PM » |
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dekha jo aaine mein aaj khud ko phir se tanha paaya
dard had bad gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere ashkon ko dekh kar aashman mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha jo chand ko to usko bhi apne saath rota hua paaya......... wah waheed,bohat dino baad entry maari hai,very nice. bohat khoob tushar. |
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« Reply #6 on: May 21, 2005, 05:57:25 PM » |
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dekha jo aaine mein aaj khud ko phir se tanha paaya
dard had bad gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere ashkon ko dekh kar aashman mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha jo chand ko to usko bhi apne saath rota hua paaya......... wah waheed,bohat dino baad entry maari hai,very nice. bohat khoob tushar. thX nidhi ji,...... meherbani |
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« Reply #7 on: June 24, 2005, 10:08:32 PM » |
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thanxxxxxxxxx meena........nidhi.............aryan........aman........very nice tushar..................
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« Reply #8 on: June 25, 2005, 05:26:37 PM » |
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dekha jo aaine mein aaj khud ko phir se tanha paaya
dard had bad gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere ashkon ko dekh kar aashman mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha jo chand ko to usko bhi apne saath rota hua paaya......... Kya baat hai waheed saahab |
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« Reply #9 on: June 25, 2005, 05:43:41 PM » |
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bahut ache waheed n tushaar
ghum ger mila aapka to hum kabil bane jine ke
warna tanha-e-zindagi se hum to nirash ho chale the
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« Reply #10 on: June 25, 2005, 05:45:39 PM » |
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bahut ache waheed n tushaar
ghum ger mila aapka to hum kabil bane jine ke
warna tanha-e-zindagi se hum to nirash ho chale the You too gr8 samnoj |
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« Reply #11 on: June 25, 2005, 06:04:03 PM » |
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bahut ache waheed n tushaar
ghum ger mila aapka to hum kabil bane jine ke
warna tanha-e-zindagi se hum to nirash ho chale the You too gr8 samnojthanx rohit |
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« Reply #12 on: June 25, 2005, 06:33:43 PM » |
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dekha jo aaine mein aaj khud ko phir se tanha paaya
dard had bad gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere ashkon ko dekh kar aashman mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha jo chand ko to usko bhi apne saath rota hua paaya......... wah waheed bahi kya baat hai ............. bohot khoob ......... bohot hi acha likha hai aapne |
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« Reply #13 on: June 25, 2005, 10:57:45 PM » |
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dekha jo aaine mein aaj khud ko phir se tanha paaya
dard had bad gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere ashkon ko dekh kar aashman mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha jo chand ko to usko bhi apne saath rota hua paaya......... wah waheed bahi kya baat hai ............. bohot khoob ......... bohot hi acha likha hai aapne bahot bahot shukriya ..........hussain bhai..............  |
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