Aap to, bas deikhtey rahiye!

by abdbundeli on August 05, 2008, 11:39:17 AM
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'Aap to, bas deikhtey rahiye; wahaan ham jaayengey:
 Baarha bhi tum pukaarogey, naheen aa paayengey!'

                             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2008, 11:44:08 AM »
Nice one.... Usual Smile
but second line kuchh jyada clear nahi huyi..
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2008, 01:51:01 PM »
natural ji,
Wahaan jaa kar, naheen suntaa hai koyee bhi, pukaaroun ko!
Zamaanaa deikhtaa rahtaa hai, yoon hee, gam key maaroun ko!
Samajh mein aa gayee hogee, yeh pooree daastaan, ab to;
Hamain maaloom hai, ham ney pukaaraa hai hazaaroun ko!!
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