Aasaan to nahin tha...lekin....!!!!!

by Talat on March 31, 2006, 09:17:04 AM
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Talat
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Dil ye pathar ka banana koi asaan to nahin tha
Door zindagi se jaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Ashkon ka samandar kahin aankhon me chupa hai
Qatre qatre ko chupana koi asaan to nahin tha

labon pe konon par jo muskurahat hai khili
Sang zakhmon ke muskurana koi asaan to nahin tha

Band palkon ke peeche jo chale aate hain manzar
Har raat yaadon me bitaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Bewafa naam hume jo de baithi hai ye dunya
Banana raakh par naya ashiaana koi asaan to nahin tha !!! sad5 sad5 sad5
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2006, 09:40:44 AM »
wah  amazing Talat...........  bahot  khoob..........

Maine  poocha  bhi nahi aur  usne  bataya bhi nahi
jakham  woh kya tha, mujhko  dikhaya bhi nahi

jaane  waalon  ko main kaise  rok  loon
woh chal diya, mere dil  ko  samajhaya bhi nahi

tujko paaya tha main sadiyon ki talash karne ke baad
toone  muh fer liye, tujhe theek se  dekha bhi nahi

aisa koi pal aa jaaye jise main rok loon humesha ke liye
waqt  rukta  nahi, dil  bhi  ab  sabhalta  nahi...:oops: :oops:
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2006, 10:44:58 AM »
superbb sis n Waheed...
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sanya310
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2006, 11:01:46 AM »
excellent talat!! good going waheed !

aaghosh mein tere simatne ki chaah thhi magar
tujhe toh paaney ki chaah har koi rakhta hai..
na mumkin sa ho gaya hai izhaar karna tumse jab
lafz nikalte nahi honton se, naahi kalam mera saath deta hai
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2006, 11:42:29 AM »
Gr8 Talat....waheed....n..sanya...!!!
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sanya310
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2006, 01:04:00 PM »
thnx salma..
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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2006, 01:26:29 PM »
woww Sanya tooo gud...

jisse chaha hai dil ki gehrayi se
jiski pooja ki hai
hardum jisse sochti hun
aakhein jisse dhoondti hai har jagah
mujhe pyar karna sikhaane wale
mera tujhse bichadna asaan to nahi tha
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*Anjum*
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2006, 01:45:44 PM »
SubhanaALLAH....talat too good
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2006, 01:58:05 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
excellent talat!! good going waheed !

aaghosh mein tere simatne ki chaah thhi magar
tujhe toh paaney ki chaah har koi rakhta hai..
na mumkin sa ho gaya hai izhaar karna tumse jab
lafz nikalte nahi honton se, naahi kalam mera saath deta hai


Shukriya........ Salma.....Sanya........Nikki........

wonderful  reply  Sanya........Nikki........

Na jaane  kabse  tera  intizaar  hai  mujhko
koi  bhi  lamha kahan ab karar  hai mujhko...............
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Bharat
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2006, 03:55:02 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Dil ye pathar ka banana koi asaan to nahin tha
Door zindagi se jaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Ashkon ka samandar kahin aankhon me chupa hai
Qatre qatre ko chupana koi asaan to nahin tha

labon pe konon par jo muskurahat hai khili
Sang zakhmon ke muskurana koi asaan to nahin tha

Band palkon ke peeche jo chale aate hain manzar
Har raat yaadon me bitaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Bewafa naam hume jo de baithi hai ye dunya
Banana raakh par naya ashiaana koi asaan to nahin tha !!! sad5 sad5 sad5



Talat,
Very nicely written........

Waheed, Sanya and Nikki.........
very good replies
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izhaarkeintzaarmein
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2006, 09:56:34 AM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
excellent talat!! good going waheed !

aaghosh mein tere simatne ki chaah thhi magar
tujhe toh paaney ki chaah har koi rakhta hai..
na mumkin sa ho gaya hai izhaar karna tumse jab
lafz nikalte nahi honton se, naahi kalam mera saath deta hai




behtareen sanya ji maja aa gaya
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sanya310
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2006, 06:28:06 PM »
thanx nikki waheed bharat and izharkeintezarmein!
nice one nikki and waheed!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2006, 09:18:15 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Dil ye pathar ka banana koi asaan to nahin tha
Door zindagi se jaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Ashkon ka samandar kahin aankhon me chupa hai
Qatre qatre ko chupana koi asaan to nahin tha

labon pe konon par jo muskurahat hai khili
Sang zakhmon ke muskurana koi asaan to nahin tha

Band palkon ke peeche jo chale aate hain manzar
Har raat yaadon me bitaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Bewafa naam hume jo de baithi hai ye dunya
Banana raakh par naya ashiaana koi asaan to nahin tha !!! sad5 sad5 sad5



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HumTum is back
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«Reply #13 on: April 02, 2006, 02:23:25 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Dil ye pathar ka banana koi asaan to nahin tha
Door zindagi se jaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Ashkon ka samandar kahin aankhon me chupa hai
Qatre qatre ko chupana koi asaan to nahin tha

labon pe konon par jo muskurahat hai khili
Sang zakhmon ke muskurana koi asaan to nahin tha

Band palkon ke peeche jo chale aate hain manzar
Har raat yaadon me bitaana koi asaan to nahin tha

Bewafa naam hume jo de baithi hai ye dunya
Banana raakh par naya ashiaana koi asaan to nahin tha !!! sad5 sad5 sad5



waah waah Talat Ji ....  bahoot khoob !!!  


Yah Daastan- e-ishq hai ya dard-e-dil ki bayaani hai
kis se kahoon ye haal-e-dil sab ki to yhi kahaani hai

Na mange dava na duaa zakhmon ki apni jubaani hai
Chot hamne dil pe khaayi hai wohi ulfat ki nisaani hai

Manzil meri tu ek nahi, manzil aage to aur bhi hai
Ruk jaye wo fana hai, chalti jaye wo zindagani hai

Jana kahin hai door par kyu dil me milne ki aas hai,
hai kaun jis ke dam se mere in saanso me ravani hai

Chnnd sanso ka ye hai basera aao mil ke do pal ji le
Ranjish-o-gham ke saye mai "HumTum" kyu zindgi bitani hai !!

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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #14 on: April 02, 2006, 02:40:37 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
thanx nikki waheed bharat and izharkeintezarmein!
nice one nikki and waheed!!


Shukriya  Sanya...........  ur  welcome...........
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