Aasmaan aaj phir se roya hai......

by Just_Hate_Love on January 09, 2005, 06:52:19 AM
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Aasmaan aaj phir se roya hai,

Nakaam aashiqon ke haar me ek aur moti piroya hai,

Koi to bataaye kahaaan mera mehboob khoya hai,
 
Mohabbat ki kabr main mera yeh pyaar soya hai.

 :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2005, 06:54:13 AM »
Nice1 Just_Hate_Love...
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2005, 09:12:36 AM »
very nice justhatelove
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2005, 04:10:50 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Aasmaan aaj phir se roya hai,

Nakaam aashiqon ke haar me ek aur moti piroya hai,

Koi to bataaye kahaaan mera mehboob khoya hai,
 
Mohabbat ki kabr main mera yeh pyaar soya hai.

 :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

barish ko kaho ke rukh jaye,
angan me tere samundar na banaye,
jo ayega tera meheboob wapas,
usse dekh kar woh kahi rukh na jaye!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2005, 07:20:53 AM »
Thnx all. And nice one Meenaji.
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2005, 07:30:41 AM »
"Aansoo ko bahut samjhaya tanhayi mein aaya karo,
mehfil mein hamara mazaak naa uraya karo.
is par aansoo tadap kar bole,
itne logon mein aapko tanha paate hai isliye chale aate hai.


nm
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2005, 07:36:15 AM »
Nice one Amit.
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #7 on: January 10, 2005, 07:41:10 AM »
thnx  JHL ji
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sandhaya
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«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2005, 07:42:45 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Aasmaan aaj phir se roya hai,

Nakaam aashiqon ke haar me ek aur moti piroya hai,

Koi to bataaye kahaaan mera mehboob khoya hai,
 
Mohabbat ki kabr main mera yeh pyaar soya hai.

 :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

barish ko kaho ke rukh jaye,
angan me tere samundar na banaye,
jo ayega tera meheboob wapas,
usse dekh kar woh kahi rukh na jaye!


good acha likha hai aap dono ne

barish tuh mahhobat ki panah hoti hai
barish main hi tuh mahhobat javan hoti hai
mat roko hone do barish ko
ki barish tuh pyar karne walon ki jaan hoti hai
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: January 10, 2005, 07:48:13 AM »
Aap ne bhi bahoot achchha likha hai Sandhyaji.
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sandhaya
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2005, 07:48:41 AM »
Quote from: "amit_is_always_cool"
"Aansoo ko bahut samjhaya tanhayi mein aaya karo,
mehfil mein hamara mazaak naa uraya karo.
is par aansoo tadap kar bole,
itne logon mein aapko tanha paate hai isliye chale aate hai.


nm

good amit ji

humne dil ko lakh samjaya ki har wakt unhe yaad karna chod de
dil ke har kone se aawaj aai yaha tuh har ssan main vo base hai tuh kya saan lena chod do.


humne dil ko lakh samjaya ki har wakt unhe yaad karna chod de
dil ke har kone se aawaj aai ki VE SUDAIYA(PYAR MAIN PAGAL)
yaad tuh unhe kiya jata hai jinhe hum bhul jate hai
phir main unhe kaise yaad karun jinhe maine kabhi bhulaya hi nahi
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2005, 07:51:54 AM »
kyun lagta hain pal,
kisi ko apna bananay main.
fir kyun lagti hain sadiyan ,
unhey bhulanay main.
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sandhaya
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«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2005, 07:52:33 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Aap ne bhi bahoot achchha likha hai Sandhyaji.


thank u just hate love
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2005, 08:15:31 AM »
U r most welcome Sandhyaji.
Barish tuh mahhobat ki panah hoti hai
Barish main hi tuh mahhobat javan hoti hai
Mat roko hone do barish ko
Ki barish tuh pyar karne walon ki jaan hoti hai
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #14 on: January 10, 2005, 08:21:27 AM »
nice work just hate love

yeh jaan hoti hain per jaan leti bhi hain,
kisi ko banati hain to kisiko tabah kar deti hain.
fark to ankhon main barish main nahin,
yeh kisi ko hasati hain to kisi ko rula deti hain.
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