Ab aa bhi jaaao !!!!!!!

by Talat on April 14, 2005, 05:41:30 PM
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«Reply #555 on: May 31, 2005, 11:46:36 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"

waah ....

mere sabr ka na le imtihaan  meri Khamoshi ko sadaa na de
jo tere bagair jee na sakay, use jeenay ki to duaa na de
wo tadap jo shola-e-jaam me thi mere tan badan se liye gaye
jo bujha sakey to bujha ise, na bujha sakey to hawaa na de !!



Thanks Humtum !! and Very Nice !!!

Meri zubaan hai khamosh magar dil awaaz deta hai
Pukaarti hoon tujhe har pal main kya sunaai deta hai ?
Tadap tadap kar har lamha mera basar ho raha hai
Dheere dheere wajood mera pighal ke khatm hota hai!!!
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«Reply #556 on: May 31, 2005, 11:49:35 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
tareef uski ki jaati hai jo kabil-e-tareef ho
aree Talat sis aur Hum tum.... tum dono to unique ho..

bahut hi acha likha hai aap dono ne...really maza aa gaya padhkar...


kaise dhoondungi main usse haath mein diya lekar, jab raasta toofano ka hai
dil mein umeed jala rakhi hai bas milne ki, chahe saath viraano ka hai...


Shukriya Nikki !! ... thanks a lot !!!!!

Toofano main nikle hain hum dhoondne usko
Jiske ka naam-o-nishaan ki bhi khabar nahin
Dil magar kehta hai mil jaayega ek din woh
Magar ab mujhe is dil pe raha yaqeen nahin!!!
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«Reply #557 on: June 01, 2005, 12:22:31 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
tareef uski ki jaati hai jo kabil-e-tareef ho
aree Talat sis aur Hum tum.... tum dono to unique ho..

bahut hi acha likha hai aap dono ne...really maza aa gaya padhkar...


kaise dhoondungi main usse haath mein diya lekar, jab raasta toofano ka hai
dil mein umeed jala rakhi hai bas milne ki, chahe saath viraano ka hai...


Shukriya Nikki ji ...... bahot khoob likha hai ....

yun tabahee ka jashan mana laitay hain
palkon main sitaron ko saja laitay hain
tum to apnay thay zra haath bharaya hota
gair bhe doobnay walon ko bacha laitay hain !!
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«Reply #558 on: June 01, 2005, 12:24:54 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Quote from: "HumTum"

waah ....

mere sabr ka na le imtihaan  meri Khamoshi ko sadaa na de
jo tere bagair jee na sakay, use jeenay ki to duaa na de
wo tadap jo shola-e-jaam me thi mere tan badan se liye gaye
jo bujha sakey to bujha ise, na bujha sakey to hawaa na de !!



Thanks Humtum !! and Very Nice !!!

Meri zubaan hai khamosh magar dil awaaz deta hai
Pukaarti hoon tujhe har pal main kya sunaai deta hai ?
Tadap tadap kar har lamha mera basar ho raha hai
Dheere dheere wajood mera pighal ke khatm hota hai!!!


Waah ....

daulat-e-dard ko duniya se chupa kar rakha
ye gumaan na tha aansoo samandar ban jayeinge
Zindagi aur pecheeda hoti gayee waqt ke saath
Kaun kehta hai, zakhm waqt ke saath bharjayeinge !!

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«Reply #559 on: June 02, 2005, 12:12:45 AM »
har baar humne chaha ki chupa len ghum dunya se
jaane kyun magar yeh aansu rukte hi nahin hain
jaante hain ki logon ke haathon me khanjar hain
ye jaan ke bhi hum apna zakhm khol ke rakhte hain!!!
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«Reply #560 on: June 02, 2005, 05:50:33 AM »
Ik na ik rooz to rukhhsat karta
Mujh say kittni hi muhabbat karta

Sub ruttien aakar chalee jateen
Mousamien ghumm bhee to hijjrat karta

Meray lehhjay main gharoor aya thaa
Ussko haq thaa kay shikayat karta

Aur uss say kuchh na rahee bass
meray piyaar ki izzat karta
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«Reply #561 on: June 11, 2005, 04:21:39 PM »
wowwow!!! Great!!!!!!! Superb!!! written Talat ji!!! Marvellous!!! Keep it up!!
Others are also working nicely!!! waaah!! :D
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«Reply #562 on: June 11, 2005, 04:27:11 PM »
Bohot bohot Shukriya Arunji............... !!! aap ko parhe bhi zamana ho gaya yahan !!!! happy9
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«Reply #563 on: June 13, 2005, 01:53:12 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Ye udaas din ye udaas shaam
Kat ti nahin, ab tum aa jao
Mere aansu awaaz dete hain
Kya unhe tum sun rahe ho ?
Akeli rahguzar pe khadi hoon
Shayad tum yahan se guzro
Ye mere adhure se khwaab
Inko le ke main kahan jaaon
Meri zindagi guzar gayi saraab me
Maine kya paya, tumhi batao
Khwaab dhal gaye aansu ban kar
Bohot hua ab tum aa bhi jaao !!!


woowwwwwwwwww talat ji bahut khoobbbbbbbb
keep it up
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«Reply #564 on: June 13, 2005, 02:32:59 PM »
good work all

dekha hain main ne khud ko
tumhari aankh se baraste hue
mere bina meri yaad me
mere liye taraste hue

dekha hai main ne khud ko
tumhari aankh me uchakte hue
mere intezaar me
meri rah ko takte hue

dekha hai main ne khud ko
tumhari aankh me rahte hue
apna sab kuch bhool ker
mere liye sajte hue

dekha hai main ne khud ko
tumhari aankh me mahakte hue
meri justaju me apne
khawabo ko pirote hue

dekha hai main ne khud ko
dekha hai main ne khud ko
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«Reply #565 on: June 13, 2005, 02:40:03 PM »
wowwow!!! :D  samnoj ji!!!bahut dilkash,
Behtareen aur Khoobsoorat lines hain!!!
Very Nice!!!!!! :D
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«Reply #566 on: June 13, 2005, 06:06:28 PM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
good work all

dekha hain main ne khud ko
tumhari aankh se baraste hue
mere bina meri yaad me
mere liye taraste hue

dekha hai main ne khud ko
tumhari aankh me uchakte hue
mere intezaar me
meri rah ko takte hue

dekha hai main ne khud ko
tumhari aankh me rahte hue
apna sab kuch bhool ker
mere liye sajte hue

dekha hai main ne khud ko
tumhari aankh me mahakte hue
meri justaju me apne
khawabo ko pirote hue

dekha hai main ne khud ko
dekha hai main ne khud ko



waah
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«Reply #567 on: June 14, 2005, 01:45:46 PM »
Quote from: "sharmaarunkumar"
wowwow!!! :D  samnoj ji!!!bahut dilkash,
Behtareen aur Khoobsoorat lines hain!!!
Very Nice!!!!!! :D


thanx sharma ji n nishi
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«Reply #568 on: July 04, 2005, 12:06:42 PM »
Quote from: "khushiiiii"
Quote from: "Talat"
Ye udaas din ye udaas shaam
Kat ti nahin, ab tum aa jao
Mere aansu awaaz dete hain
Kya unhe tum sun rahe ho ?
Akeli rahguzar pe khadi hoon
Shayad tum yahan se guzro
Ye mere adhure se khwaab
Inko le ke main kahan jaaon
Meri zindagi guzar gayi saraab me
Maine kya paya, tumhi batao
Khwaab dhal gaye aansu ban kar
Bohot hua ab tum aa bhi jaao !!!


woowwwwwwwwww talat ji bahut khoobbbbbbbb
keep it up


Thanks a lot Khushii !!!! Usual Smile

Bohot achche Sam !!
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«Reply #569 on: July 04, 2005, 02:36:01 PM »
sabne bohot hi achha likha hai....bohot khoob!talat!!!
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