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«Reply #585 on: July 04, 2005, 05:26:16 PM » |
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Thanks Waheed....Humtum.......!!! and nice both !!!
Apne zakhm ko logon se chupana seekho
Aankhain nam kar ke muskurana seekho
Har dil main itni hain ghum ki parchaiyaan
Unke zakhmon pe marham lagana seekho !!!
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«Reply #586 on: July 04, 2005, 05:26:40 PM » |
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excellent work Talat..............Hum Tum..........
yahan har kisi ke aankhon mein ask hai
hum kise apne dil ki dastaan sunaayen
har koi dard mein dooba dikhayee de raha hai
ai Khuda hum apni kasti ko paar kaise lagayen thanx waheed !! |
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«Reply #587 on: July 04, 2005, 05:29:10 PM » |
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Thanks Waheed....Humtum.......!!! and nice both !!!
Apne zakhm ko logon se chupana seekho
Aankhain nam kar ke muskurana seekho
Har dil main itni hain ghum ki parchaiyaan
Unke zakhmon pe marham lagana seekho !!! khoob kha Talat ji ....
ghum haske basaa hai hum mein
dard kushi se ragon mein daud raha hai
umang jagaa hai bey umeed jeevan ka
bikhar jaane ka honsla bad raha hai !!
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«Reply #588 on: July 04, 2005, 05:35:35 PM » |
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Thanks Humtum......and well said again !!!!
Kyun zindagi ko dushwaar bana lete hain hum
Aur bas kisi ke intezaar main jiye jaate hain
Aur bhi ghum hote hain mohabbat ke siwa
Hum ek ishq ke naam pe zindagi lutaate hain !!
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«Reply #589 on: July 04, 2005, 05:39:23 PM » |
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whi to Talat ji ....
iss dil ko aaj tak bhalaa kaun samjha paya hai
gar samjha letey to yun bezaar na hotey hum
ker letey gar bevfaai hum bhi ussii ki trah
to mehboob se milney ko aaj beqraar na hotey hum!!
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«Reply #590 on: July 04, 2005, 05:42:11 PM » |
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hmmmm
Ankhon main kisi ke intezaar ke diye jalte hain
Ashq nahin in main khoon-e-jigar niaklte hain
Paanv hain zakhmi raah-e-ishq main chal kar
Aksar nange paanv hum sehra me nikalte hain!!
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«Reply #591 on: July 04, 2005, 05:46:41 PM » |
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waah waah ... Talat ji ...
hum kaise karein kisi se, haal apna bayaan,
hothon par daraarein aa gayee, rishton ki tarah!
dil ne kitna samjhaya, mat nibhao itni wafa,
dost phir bhi milenge tumhe, dushman ki tarah !!
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«Reply #592 on: July 04, 2005, 05:56:09 PM » |
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Waah ji waah !!!!
Kuch sitamgar mile hume yahan to kuch mile hain apne bhi
Zakhm diye hain kisi ne to dene waale hain marham bhi
Wafa ke naam pe jab bhi ye dil bewafai karta hai yaad
Rok lete hain khud ko ki hain kuch log apno se barh kar bhi !!!!
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«Reply #593 on: July 04, 2005, 06:08:08 PM » |
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kya khoob kha Talat ji ...
na balda dil mera na badle zazbaat mere
kismat-e- Sihya,ne na Badle Haalat mere
huyi mud'daat tumhari duniya chorre huye
magar aajtak bhi vohi hain sawalaat mere
khafa hum aapse hai ya gilah kudh se hai koyi
es kashmkash mein dabe hai kahi jawabaat mere !!
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«Reply #594 on: July 04, 2005, 06:09:22 PM » |
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Waah ji waah !!!!
Kuch sitamgar mile hume yahan to kuch mile hain apne bhi
Zakhm diye hain kisi ne to dene waale hain marham bhi
Wafa ke naam pe jab bhi ye dil bewafai karta hai yaad
Rok lete hain khud ko ki hain kuch log apno se barh kar bhi !!!! gud work talat  and humtum |
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«Reply #595 on: July 04, 2005, 06:14:26 PM » |
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u guys r amazing.....kitna acha likhte ho aap dono....Talat n Humtum......................carry on .....
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«Reply #596 on: July 04, 2005, 06:19:39 PM » |
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nice work talat............................................ ....
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«Reply #597 on: July 04, 2005, 06:56:49 PM » |
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BAHUT KHOOB.....sabne bahut achha likha hai...................
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«Reply #598 on: July 04, 2005, 07:55:24 PM » |
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THanks Nishi....Nikki...Waheed and Bond......!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #599 on: July 04, 2005, 07:56:46 PM » |
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wah wahhh talat !!! aur baaki sab !!! kya khoob shayri ho rahi hai!!! :D
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