ab khwaa.b unkaa naa khyaa.l hai,.....

by laaiba on December 03, 2012, 03:10:22 PM
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yeh hij.r bhi jaaN kaa vaBaa.l hai,  
bin uss k ab jeeNaa maHaa.l hai,

ay chaaRa gar tujhe ho yeh khaBar,..........
har jazBa  ab roobey zaWaa.l  hai,...

jab voh hi zeeSt say chaLaa gaYaa,..
to kab hisaaBey maa ho Saa. l hai

sab meh.v  dil   se  huYi  soO raTein
ab  khwa.b un kaa naa khYaa.l hai,.......

jab sab hi khad she dil se  mit  chukey,
toh dar.d  hai ab naa maLaa.l  hai,........

laaiba ali,

mahal means mushkil,
vabaal means azab
roo be zawal, mayyar ka ghatna
malal means dukh ,gham
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2012, 03:13:23 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2012, 03:44:00 PM »
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
Applause Applause
jab voh hi zeeSt say chaLaa gaYaa,..
to kab hisaaBey maa ho Saa. l hai
behatreen Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2012, 07:02:20 PM »
definately its rhythm is very gud.. but mujhe na kuch words samajh nahi aaye.. aap please bura mat maniiyega.. mujhe urdu aati nahi hai..
so aap mushkil words ko bata dijiye please.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2012, 07:10:31 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on December 03, 2012, 03:10:22 PM
yeh hij.r bhi jaaN kaa vaBaa.l hai, 
bin uss k ab jeeNaa maHaa.l hai,

ay chaaRa gar tujhe ho yeh khaBar,..........
har jazBa  ab roobey zaWaa.l  hai,...

jab voh hi zeeSt say chaLaa gaYaa,..
to kab hisaaBey maa ho Saa. l hai

sab meh.v  dil   se  huYi  soO raTein
ab  khwa.b un kaa naa khYaa.l hai,.......

jab sab hi khad she dil se  mit  chukey,
toh dar.d  hai ab naa maLaa.l  hai,........

laaiba ali,

nice,ma'am. ek iltejah hai. english kewordjis andaaz mein aap likhte ho padhne mein khasi dikkat hoti hai. lehaza, apne words ko aur asaan tarike se aur nornal andaaz mein likein.
thank you
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2012, 07:17:07 PM »
well dn... still some wud love to know meaning of some wrds.
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«Reply #6 on: December 04, 2012, 01:52:14 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: December 04, 2012, 06:13:50 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2012, 07:38:04 AM »
Bahot achha likha hai laaiba ji. Khas taur par ye lines bahot achhi lagin:
jab sab hi khad she dil se  mit  chukey,
toh dar.d  hai ab naa maLaa.l  hai

Daad pesh hai aur rau bhi.
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«Reply #9 on: December 04, 2012, 07:46:09 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2012, 07:55:18 AM »
[img]http://kya baat hai laiba jee umda peshkash hai, sabhi ashaar bohut khoob rahe dherroon daad qubool kareN[/font
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«Reply #11 on: December 04, 2012, 09:17:45 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #12 on: December 04, 2012, 10:17:15 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob laaiba jee
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«Reply #13 on: December 04, 2012, 10:35:14 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 03, 2012, 03:13:23 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanku ,........
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«Reply #14 on: December 04, 2012, 01:14:53 PM »
Quote from: mkv on December 03, 2012, 03:44:00 PM
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
Applause Applause
jab voh hi zeeSt say chaLaa gaYaa,..
to kab hisaaBey maa ho Saa. l hai
behatreen Applause


bohat shukria mkv ji,...........
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