ai falak yeh batla de kya quSoor tha mera ?

by mistufer on June 02, 2009, 04:11:23 PM
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #15 on: June 02, 2009, 11:11:37 PM »
Excellent Nira ji,really very nice and beautiful. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #16 on: June 03, 2009, 09:06:15 AM »
Nira ji behad khubsurat aur dard se lipta hua ... ek kadwi sachai ko bayan karta hua hai aapka ye na....bahut pasand aaya...gud work.. Applause Applause Applause

ek bewa ki taklifon ka kissa kya karega koi bayan.....
wo to gili lakdi me dum tod rahi chingari si ta umra jalti bujhti rati hai......
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mistufer
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«Reply #17 on: June 06, 2009, 01:20:01 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 02, 2009, 11:11:37 PM
Excellent Nira ji,really very nice and beautiful. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

madhu ji

aapko pasand aayi rachna
shukriya
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mistufer
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«Reply #18 on: June 06, 2009, 01:21:08 AM »
Quote from: @kaash on June 02, 2009, 11:24:49 PM
Waah bahot khoob Nira ji,behad acha likha hai aapne,har pankti me dard apna ehsaas lie tha,very awesome creation,congrats for such an awesome poem

kaash ji
dard ka ehsaas aapko pasand aaya
aapki shukrguzaar hoon
nira
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mistufer
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«Reply #19 on: June 06, 2009, 01:22:55 AM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on June 03, 2009, 09:06:15 AM
Nira ji behad khubsurat aur dard se lipta hua ... ek kadwi sachai ko bayan karta hua hai aapka ye na....bahut pasand aaya...gud work.. Applause Applause Applause

ek bewa ki taklifon ka kissa kya karega koi bayan.....
wo to gili lakdi me dum tod rahi chingari si ta umra jalti bujhti rati hai......

aapne mehsoos kiya jaana ki
yeh sachai kitne hadh takh kasht deti hai
mera likhna safal hua.
nira
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