An attempt

by Beer on September 01, 2005, 01:17:26 AM
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this is attempted sher by me when i saw her for the first time, how's it?

Dekha tujhe toh
dil e justju ko rokna para
umidon ki shikhar se
aisa gira main, beimann
ke kafan e gum odna para..
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2005, 01:23:55 AM »
wah wah wah........not bad.......achaa hai!!!!!!! good work!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2005, 12:15:01 PM »
thanx isha...
its really encouraging.
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