....~~ay kaash~~....

by HumTum on April 04, 2005, 10:21:47 AM
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HumTum
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Kehta hai ye dil ay kaash!
MaiN bhi ek shayar hota

Shairy ke bal par mere paas
Har ek zakhm ka marhum hota

Ho jaata rehaa har dukh se
Har pal dil araam mein hota

Aur keh deta jo kehna hai
Phir marne ka ghum na hota

Kehta hai ye dil ay kaash!
Main bhi ek shayar hota


HUmTum
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vitasta
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2005, 10:30:40 AM »
wow that is a nice one!!
par aap to already ek shayar hain,
oops correction-bahut acche shayar hain to phir yeh sab to aap kar hi sakte hain.......
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HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2005, 10:38:39 AM »
Quote from: "vitasta"
wow that is a nice one!!
par aap to already ek shayar hain,
oops correction-bahut acche shayar hain to phir yeh sab to aap kar hi sakte hain.......


Shukriya Vitasta.....


Gazal mein bandish-e-alfaz hi nhi kaffi "HumTum"
khoon-e-jigar bhi chahiye asar ke liye  sad5


HumTum
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2005, 05:06:15 PM »
both poems r really very gud. 2nd wali to sabse zada pasand ayi mujhe!!!

lafzo ke pich us dard ko bhi pad lena aye dost,
jise yeh puri ghazal piroyi gayi hai!

 :D
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rohit30002
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2005, 12:58:47 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Kehta hai ye dil ay kaash!
MaiN bhi ek shayar hota

Shairy ke bal par mere paas
Har ek zakhm ka marhum hota

Ho jaata rehaa har dukh se
Har pal dil araam mein hota

Aur keh deta jo kehna hai
Phir marne ka ghum na hota

Kehta hai ye dil ay kaash!
Main bhi ek shayar hota


HUmTum



again great humtum aap bahut accha likhte hain
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HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2005, 01:06:25 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
both poems r really very gud. 2nd wali to sabse zada pasand ayi mujhe!!!

lafzo ke pich us dard ko bhi pad lena aye dost,
jise yeh puri ghazal piroyi gayi hai!

 :D


Meena ji aap ka bahut bahut shukriya adaa karta hoon
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2005, 01:07:31 PM »
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Quote from: "HumTum"
Kehta hai ye dil ay kaash!
MaiN bhi ek shayar hota

Shairy ke bal par mere paas
Har ek zakhm ka marhum hota

Ho jaata rehaa har dukh se
Har pal dil araam mein hota

Aur keh deta jo kehna hai
Phir marne ka ghum na hota

Kehta hai ye dil ay kaash!
Main bhi ek shayar hota


HUmTum



again great humtum aap bahut accha likhte hain


Shikriya Rohit ji
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2013, 01:18:40 AM »
Nice.......
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