Bezuban Dard...!!!

by Delicate_Doll on September 20, 2007, 07:03:08 PM
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Bezuban sa ye dard,thehar kyun nahi jata.
Halat-e-bayan,kaha kyun nahi jata.

Mere iss dard ka hamdard kyun nahi aata.
koun apna,koun paraya,pehchan kyun nahi pata.

Dard ke galiyon mein,isko raah kyun nahi milta.
tanhaiye mein ashkon ko, rok kyun nahi pata.

Iss tute dil pe,wafa ka marham kyun nahi lagata.
Bezuban sa ye dard,tehra kyun nahi jata..!
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2007, 08:43:21 PM »
Salma

Bahut achche !

So nice to see you back after a long time.

Keep coming !
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2007, 04:42:57 PM »
Very nice Salma,

Congratulations ! Usual Smile Good to see you back !
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2007, 07:02:09 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB SALMA...BAHHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2007, 06:58:54 AM »
wah salma ... bahut acha laga tumhe yaha dekh ker

tumne bahut acha likha hai

isi trah likhte rahna
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2007, 09:39:15 AM »
milne ki koi surat, koi bahana hi nahi hai
aur tere shahar me mera aana jana bhi nahi hai
kahan talash karu tujhe, kahan per dhundu
mujhko to maloom tera thikana bhi nahi hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2007, 10:00:39 AM »
Sam bro

Too good ! wah kya likha hai !

Last 2 lines are superb =D>
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2007, 10:05:28 AM »
thanx Big B
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2007, 10:33:02 AM »
nice work salma Usual Smile kafi din tumhari likha padne ko mila
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2007, 10:33:49 AM »
nice work salma Usual Smile kafi din tumhari likha padne ko mila
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2007, 10:39:07 AM »
salma di awesome work as usual...barso hue apki kalam pade....dil khush hogaya

and sam babu tussi to ho hi great awesome lines

Mein talashti hu apne pyaar ko
apne Bichde hue us yaar ko

Koi hawa ka jhonka wo yaadein chura gaya
mein talashti hu un chand lamho k ikrar ko

Jo har shaam gawai de mohobbat ki
mein talasthi hu apne us dildar ko

Jiski nazron mein hume khuda dikhta tha
mein talashti hu wahi aitbaar ko

Sugaat mohobbat ki kahin duriyan na hon
Jahan Chaht k phool khilaye the khabi
Mein talashti hu apne Khoye sansaar ko......

~Roshni~
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2007, 11:19:11 AM »
Roshu

Wah ! wah ! wah ! Awesome =D> =D> =D>

Keep going :arrow:
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«Reply #12 on: September 30, 2007, 04:36:31 PM »
Bohat khoob Salma & Roshni...
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«Reply #13 on: October 01, 2007, 11:48:43 AM »
bahut ache roshni
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«Reply #14 on: October 09, 2007, 12:53:31 PM »
Raj-Beer jee : Thanks a lot

Talat Jee : Thanks a lot n thanks for d welcome

Khwaish jee : Thanks a lot

Ma3 : Thanks tarif k liye,mohabbat sab shika deti hai jo na kabhi shyari ki abcd jaante hain wo bhi shikh jaate hain n nice one

Shahid : Thanks a lot
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