BHool ja~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 27, 2009, 11:19:30 AM
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khushi huyi dekhkar tera ghar abaad hai
jo mit gaya ise banane mein ab tu usko bhool ja

dekh raunakein hai yahan har Zarre aur deewar mein
kiski mehfil oojad gayi ab tu usko bhool ja

chen laaya hoon main bhar kar jholi main
kiski aankh mund gayi ab tu isko bhool ja

saara sehar hai dekhta kii tere ghar mein aab hai
kiska ghar hai jal gaya ab tu isko bhool ja

teri doli hai ooth chuki tu apne sapno mein reh abhi
kiski maiyaat hai ja rahi ab tu isko bhool ja
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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2009, 11:22:15 AM »
nice post
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2009, 11:24:44 AM »
Bahoot khoob Salil ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2009, 11:27:43 AM »
Nice One Salil Bhai, Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2009, 11:56:54 AM »
khushi huyi dekhkar tera ghar abaad hai
jo mit gaya ise banane mein ab tu usko bhool ja

dekh raunakein hai yahan har Zarre aur deewar mein
kiski mehfil oojad gayi ab tu usko bhool ja

chen laaya hoon main bhar kar jholi main
kiski aankh mund gayi ab tu isko bhool ja

saara sehar hai dekhta kii tere ghar mein aab hai
kiska ghar hai jal gaya ab tu isko bhool ja

teri doli hai ooth chuki tu apne sapno mein reh abhi
kiski maiyaat hai ja rahi ab tu isko bhool ja


Bahut hi umda salil ji   Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2009, 12:57:47 PM »
nice thought
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2009, 01:39:02 PM »
Attractive, very nice, Salil Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2009, 01:47:59 PM »
nice post
Bahoot khoob Salil ji Applause Applause Applause
Nice One Salil Bhai, Bohat Achche,.
thanks darakhshaan and azeem bro........
salma dear aap bahut dino baad aaye
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2009, 01:49:29 PM »
Behatareen likha hai Salil aapne  Applause Applause

Bahut hi umda salil ji   Applause Applause
nice thought
Attractive, very nice, Salil Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
thanks kaash , vikas bhai, sidra, sarvesh
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2009, 07:42:14 PM »
Bahaut acha likha hai bhai...
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2009, 02:16:15 AM »
very very nice sallil ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2009, 03:44:24 AM »
thanks darakhshaan and azeem bro........
salma dear aap bahut dino baad aaye

Ji thoda hectic schedule hai or exams bhi hai to waqt nahi mil pata Thumbs UP


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Jab mera aks is zamane ko phir nazar ayega,
Zarra zarra bhi karta hai intezaar meri tarah,
Mehfilon me phir wahi karwaan nazar ayega!

Inshallah!


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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2009, 07:41:48 AM »
Bohot Khoob Salil Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2009, 08:09:36 AM »
khushi huyi dekhkar tera ghar abaad hai
jo mit gaya ise banane mein ab tu usko bhool ja

dekh raunakein hai yahan har Zarre aur deewar mein
kiski mehfil oojad gayi ab tu usko bhool ja

chen laaya hoon main bhar kar jholi main
kiski aankh mund gayi ab tu isko bhool ja

saara sehar hai dekhta kii tere ghar mein aab hai
kiska ghar hai jal gaya ab tu isko bhool ja

teri doli hai ooth chuki tu apne sapno mein reh abhi
kiski maiyaat hai ja rahi ab tu isko bhool ja


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Wonderfull salil bro ...bohat khoob .... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2009, 07:57:56 AM »
Bahaut acha likha hai bhai...
very very nice sallil ji. Applause Applause Applause
raheem bhai and laila dear thanks a lot
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