saahil ki tadap

by salil2002 on September 28, 2008, 02:02:21 PM
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har saans mein hai chhupi huyi koi awaz
har saans kii aahat ko koi kya jaane
in aankhon main bas jagah hai toh nami kii
in aankhon k soonepan ko koi kya jaane
mitaya ja nahi sakta woh beeta hua kal
oon yaadon kii chubhan ko koi kya jaane
shor karta rehta hai samandar door reh kar bhi
'Saahil' ki tadap ko koi kya jaane
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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2008, 02:19:18 PM »
 Applause Applause
bahoot khoob salil ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2008, 02:24:32 PM »
shukriya
kii sunate hai darde dil
aur log daad dete hai
mere har aansu se log
ittefaaq rakhte hain
hai shayad dil inka bhi toota hua
nahin toh jahan mein kise yaad rakhte hain
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«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2008, 02:31:01 PM »
nice again salil

naye shayar, naye ashar par dard purana raha,
daad bhi lage chot si, khoob ye fasana raha,
kuch to baat hai salil tujhme, suna hai,
teri mahfilon me diljalon ka aana jana raha,
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«Reply #4 on: September 28, 2008, 04:36:22 PM »
har saans mein hai chhupi huyi koi awaz
har saans kii aahat ko koi kya jaane
in aankhon main bas jagah hai toh nami kii
in aankhon k soonepan ko koi kya jaane
mitaya ja nahi sakta woh beeta hua kal
oon yaadon kii chubhan ko koi kya jaane
shor karta rehta hai samandar door reh kar bhi
'Saahil' ki tadap ko koi kya jaane


shukriya
kii sunate hai darde dil
aur log daad dete hai
mere har aansu se log
ittefaaq rakhte hain
hai shayad dil inka bhi toota hua
nahin toh jahan mein kise yaad rakhte hain


Bohot Khoob Salil... Applause aaj bohot din baad nazar aaye aap
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«Reply #5 on: September 28, 2008, 04:38:45 PM »
nice again salil

naye shayar, naye ashar par dard purana raha,
daad bhi lage chot si, khoob ye fasana raha,
kuch to baat hai salil tujhme, suna hai,
teri mahfilon me diljalon ka aana jana raha,


Nice lines Sanjeev  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2008, 02:09:40 PM »
sanjeev and talat thnks for appreciating me
aur talat aap ius  baar kuch likh ka nahin gaye[:x]
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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2008, 02:21:13 PM »
har saans mein hai chhupi huyi koi awaz
har saans kii aahat ko koi kya jaane
in aankhon main bas jagah hai toh nami kii
in aankhon k soonepan ko koi kya jaane
mitaya ja nahi sakta woh beeta hua kal
oon yaadon kii chubhan ko koi kya jaane
shor karta rehta hai samandar door reh kar bhi
'Saahil' ki tadap ko koi kya jaane



shukriya
kii sunate hai darde dil
aur log daad dete hai
mere har aansu se log
ittefaaq rakhte hain
hai shayad dil inka bhi toota hua
nahin toh jahan mein kise yaad rakhte hain



Salil ji,
sahi kaha aapne...

Dard mein bhi daad milne lagti hai, lekin dard ko itni bakhubi bayaan karne ka fann bhi har kisi ko naseeb nahin hota..
Bahut khoobsurat andaaz mein aapne apne dard ko bayaan kiya hai..
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2008, 02:22:21 PM »
nice again salil

naye shayar, naye ashar par dard purana raha,
daad bhi lage chot si, khoob ye fasana raha,
kuch to baat hai salil tujhme, suna hai,
teri mahfilon me diljalon ka aana jana raha,


Kya khoob kaha aapne.. Bahut laa-jawaab.. Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2008, 06:51:59 PM »
Muskurahat main chupe ghum koi kya jaane,
Palkon ki larzishain koi kya pehchaane,
Kanpte haathon main thaami hui ye yaadain,
Har qadam deti hain saath, koi kya maane !!
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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2008, 08:40:10 PM »
kya baat hai talat aap sach main lajawaab ho
hats off to u
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2008, 09:09:31 PM »
har saans mein hai chhupi huyi koi awaz
har saans kii aahat ko koi kya jaane
in aankhon main bas jagah hai toh nami kii
in aankhon k soonepan ko koi kya jaane
mitaya ja nahi sakta woh beeta hua kal
oon yaadon kii chubhan ko koi kya jaane
shor karta rehta hai samandar door reh kar bhi
'Saahil' ki tadap ko koi kya jaane


Bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2008, 09:14:48 PM »
shukriya roza ji

kii chup reh kar saahil ne ehsaan kiya hai
  magar na jaane lehron ne kaise dard ko pehchaan liya hai
woh daud kar aati hai simatne ko meri baahon mein
  magar rooh ne bhi kya kissii ko kabhi thaam liya hai
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«Reply #13 on: October 02, 2008, 09:56:08 PM »
shukriya roza ji

kii chup reh kar saahil ne ehsaan kiya hai
  magar na jaane lehron ne kaise dard ko pehchaan liya hai
woh daud kar aati hai simatne ko meri baahon mein
  magar rooh ne bhi kya kissii ko kabhi thaam liya hai

Good 1 again Salil ji.... Keep flowing
 
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«Reply #14 on: October 02, 2008, 11:03:27 PM »
wah re shahil bahut khoob hai tera haal
teri ye tarap kar degi tujhe behaal  Applause

Itna soonapan jhalakti hai in aankhon mein
Kis qadar toota hai ye dil koi kya jaane
Rah rah kar uthti hai dard seene mein
Kitni tarap hai yahan usse koi kya jaane
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