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Author Topic: Bohot dushwaar hai jeena.....!!!!  (Read 1101 times)
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« on: November 14, 2008, 08:49:46 AM »

Bohot din baad kuch likha hai...Pasand aaye to likhna, na aaye to bhi likhna ...!!!
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« Reply #1 on: November 14, 2008, 09:12:04 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 14, 2008, 08:49:46 AM
Bohot din baad kuch likha hai...Pasand aaye to likhna, na aaye to bhi likhna ...!!!

Pyaaraa-saa sundar-saa saaf-suthraa kalaam hai! Bahut achchhaa lagaa!
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« Reply #2 on: November 14, 2008, 09:46:15 AM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on November 14, 2008, 09:12:04 AM
Pyaaraa-saa sundar-saa saaf-suthraa kalaam hai! Bahut achchhaa lagaa!
                                          - abd bundeli

Isse behtar kya taareef ho sakti hai....Aaj kai din baad, balki ek lambe arse ke baad koi poori poem likhi hai....aap ne bohot hauslaafzaai ki...These words from you mean a lot and a lot to me, Abd Ji

Tah-e-dil se shukriya  notworthy
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« Reply #3 on: November 14, 2008, 10:04:50 AM »
Celmira ji!
Aap kitnee achchhee/khushnumaa baateyn karteen hain!! Bahut achchhaa lagtaa hai! 
 Shukriyah!                                       - abd bundeli
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« Reply #4 on: November 14, 2008, 01:34:31 PM »
Celmira Ji aap ne bahut hi sundar kalaam likha hai
Yeh to dil ko choo deti hai
Kitna dard umarta hai
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« Reply #5 on: November 14, 2008, 04:37:12 PM »
ohh beauty....the pen spoke the hearts words and the ink rote the soul's blood..hope that made sense...anwyays amazing work...

 
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« Reply #6 on: November 14, 2008, 08:09:13 PM »
Waah....bohot dinon baad likha, magar lagta hai itne donon mashq-e-sukhan jaari raha, tabhi to itna umda likha aapne, or phir ye ash'ar asardaar kyun na hon? dil se jo aah nikalti hai asar rakhti hai.

Ye chand ash'ar jo meri nazar mien haqeeqaton par mabni hai, celmira ji ki nazar karta hun.

Us aah-e-naatawaN ka asar be-panah tha
Jo zulm seh raha tha wo dil be-gunah tha

Khud jal ke sab ki raah mein ki roshni magar
Kam zarf ki nigah mien wo gard-e-rah tha

Jo misl-e-khaar khatka hai, chashme-husood mein
Wo sab se khoob tha yahi uska gunah tha
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« Reply #7 on: November 15, 2008, 02:35:47 AM »
 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB BAHUT PYARA AUR BAHUT
HI SIMPLE SA DIL KO CHOONE WALA KALAM
LIKHA HAI AAPNE...
2 GOOD CELMIRA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #8 on: November 15, 2008, 07:59:34 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on November 14, 2008, 08:09:13 PM
Waah....bohot dinon baad likha, magar lagta hai itne donon mashq-e-sukhan jaari raha, tabhi to itna umda likha aapne, or phir ye ash'ar asardaar kyun na hon? dil se jo aah nikalti hai asar rakhti hai.

Ye chand ash'ar jo meri nazar mien haqeeqaton par mabni hai, celmira ji ki nazar karta hun.

Us aah-e-naatawaN ka asar be-panah tha
Jo zulm seh raha tha wo dil be-gunah tha

Khud jal ke sab ki raah mein ki roshni magar
Kam zarf ki nigah mien wo gard-e-rah tha

Jo misl-e-khaar khatka hai, chashme-husood mein
Wo sab se khoob tha yahi uska gunah tha

Sayyid Randeri ji!
Bahut-bahut achchhey! Kyaa hi naayaab sougaat nazar ki hai aapney!! WaaH! It has delighted me! She deserves acclaims! She possesses a real poetic heart with-in her self! And you, Mr Randeri, are destined to be a poet of eminence!
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« Reply #9 on: November 15, 2008, 08:07:49 AM »
nahayat hi khoobsurat likha hai ap ne Celmira
bohat bohat bohat khoob..!!! Usual Smile
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« Reply #10 on: November 15, 2008, 11:05:31 AM »
Wah wah bohat dino ke baad aapke shayari padhne mili humen
Celmira sis amazing work done by you ... Applause Applause


Sayyid ji aapne bhi kamal ka jawab diya hai .... Applause Applause
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« Reply #11 on: November 15, 2008, 10:56:39 PM »
Abd ji or honey ji himmat afzai or izzat afzai ke liye dil se shukar guzar hun, bohot bohot shukriya aap hazarat ke is ikhlas or is muhabbat ke liye.
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« Reply #12 on: November 17, 2008, 09:31:39 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on November 14, 2008, 08:49:46 AM
Bohot din baad kuch likha hai...Pasand aaye to likhna, na aaye to bhi likhna ...!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Yo Par Aate hi aapka likha padha..

sach maaniye, aapne bahut khoobsurti se aur saral akhsaro mein itni khobbsurat poetry likhi hai..bahut ache Applause Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #13 on: November 17, 2008, 09:35:41 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on November 14, 2008, 08:09:13 PM
Waah....bohot dinon baad likha, magar lagta hai itne donon mashq-e-sukhan jaari raha, tabhi to itna umda likha aapne, or phir ye ash'ar asardaar kyun na hon? dil se jo aah nikalti hai asar rakhti hai.

Ye chand ash'ar jo meri nazar mien haqeeqaton par mabni hai, celmira ji ki nazar karta hun.

Us aah-e-naatawaN ka asar be-panah tha
Jo zulm seh raha tha wo dil be-gunah tha

Khud jal ke sab ki raah mein ki roshni magar
Kam zarf ki nigah mien wo gard-e-rah tha

Jo misl-e-khaar khatka hai, chashme-husood mein
Wo sab se khoob tha yahi uska gunah tha


Wah Wah Wah!!! Randeri saheb, bahut bahut khoob Clapping Smiley

Randeri saheb, aap bahut kam likhte ho, par jab bhi likhte ho, khoob likhte ho Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #14 on: November 17, 2008, 10:45:11 AM »
Bohat Khoob Celmira Ji,.
Sayyid Bhaijaan,.
Nice One,.
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