Chain pana chahti hu...Geet...

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Ae dil main tujhe smjhana chahti hu,
vo nhi aayega ye batana chahti hu,

jab rishte azmaye hai dhokha khaya hai,
aaj sirrf kismat azmana chahti hu,

merra dard bhadhta hi jata raha hai,
ab dawa nhi dua ka khazana chahti hu,

ab tou ye mehez ek lafz ban k reh gya hai,
ki main bhi kisi k sath ye jivan bitana chahti hu,

merri fariyado mein tou kayi naam bas chuke hai,
ab shayad main kisi ki duao mein ana chahti hu,

mujhe ek farishte ki zarurat hai,
jisko main apne saare gum sunana chahti hu,

merre dil ki awaz kho gyi hai kahiin,
zara sa so k kisiki agosh mein ab chain pana chahti hu.........


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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 12:55:48 AM »
kya baat hai geet ji... khubsurat peshkash

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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 12:58:31 AM »
Shukriya intezar ji..
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2011, 01:29:09 AM »
BBL jee Aadaab!

Bahut dil ko chhu lene wale ahsaas kahe hai aapne..
Aapki faryaad Allah kabul kare aameen... Usual Smile

Is dilfareb kalaam par dil se daad kabul kijiye..
Lkhati rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye ,
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 01:31:58 AM »
Daad kubul hai parwaz ji..duao k liye shukriya allah apko khush rakhe...
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2011, 10:55:15 AM »
wah wah wah Bahut pyari Kavita.
kamaal hai kamaal hai
umda rachna Geet ji.
daad dil se.
be happy always
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2011, 03:44:50 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2011, 06:25:05 PM »
merri fariyado mein tou kayi naam bas chuke hai,
ab shayad main kisi ki duao mein ana chahti hu,

merre dil ki awaz kho gyi hai kahiin,
zara sa so k kisiki agosh mein ab chain pana chahti hu.........

ye lines meri halat bayan kar gai geet..fir ek bar ..dil ki feel tumne keh di..thnx re...
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2011, 10:11:30 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya nirala ji,romeo ji aur kasak ji..
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2011, 11:05:06 PM »
BAhut Umda Likha Hai Aapne Geet Ji Excellent
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2011, 11:24:54 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya rishi ji aur shihab ji...
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2011, 11:35:33 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2011, 11:39:30 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: March 07, 2011, 12:26:22 AM »


Ae dil main tujhe smjhana chahti hu,
vo nhi aayega ye batana chahti hu,

jab rishte azmaye hai dhokha khaya hai,
aaj sirrf kismat azmana chahti hu,

merra dard bhadhta hi jata raha hai,
ab dawa nhi dua ka khazana chahti hu,

ab tou ye mehez ek lafz ban k reh gya hai,
ki main bhi kisi k sath ye jivan bitana chahti hu,

merri fariyado mein tou kayi naam bas chuke hai,
ab shayad main kisi ki duao mein ana chahti hu,

mujhe ek farishte ki zarurat hai,
jisko main apne saare gum sunana chahti hu,

merre dil ki awaz kho gyi hai kahiin,
zara sa so k kisiki agosh mein ab chain pana chahti hu.........





acha likha aapne geet ji..


yaad kar rahi ho aur bhool jaana chahti ho
dil ko samjha kar akhir kiya jatana chahti ho

rishte nibhaye jate hain per aazma rahi ho tum
uspe yeh shart bhi ki sirf wafa paana chahti ho

baat karti ho akele hi bitana hai jivan
per sukun kisi ki aagosh me paana chahti ho

kaisa gam hai kaisi hai uljhan batao tum hame
keh jaati ho kuch aur magar kuch aur kehna chahti ho.


samir"dilse"
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«Reply #14 on: March 07, 2011, 12:57:39 AM »

acha likha aapne geet ji..


yaad kar rahi ho aur bhool jaana chahti ho
dil ko samjha kar akhir kiya jatana chahti ho

rishte nibhaye jate hain per aazma rahi ho tum
uspe yeh shart bhi ki sirf wafa paana chahti ho

baat karti ho akele hi bitana hai jivan
per sukun kisi ki aagosh me paana chahti ho

kaisa gam hai kaisi hai uljhan batao tum hame
keh jaati ho kuch aur magar kuch aur kehna chahti ho.


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Bahut shukriya samir ji aur behad khubsurat alfazo mein apne sawalat puch daale..Usual Smile
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