Chal diye................!!!!!!

by Talat on April 12, 2006, 03:09:20 PM
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Talat
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Chal diye nayi zindagi ki aor hum
Puraani yadon ko kafan pehna kar

Khabar hai ab laut ke na aayenge
Nayi raahon ke ho gaye musafir

Bojhal se qadam, aankhon me nami
Bhar na paaye, zakhm aise hain dil par

Jaane kya rang ab dikhayegi zindagi
Kya chupa hai haathon ki lakeeron par

Kaise samjhaayen apni in aankhon ko
Hote nahin hain poore khwaab aksar !!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2006, 03:11:59 PM »
Talat

Aise nahi kehte sad5

Rajbir
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sweety pie
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«Reply #2 on: April 12, 2006, 03:19:46 PM »
Talat....it got my eyes wet...!! :cry:
Lovelly
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2006, 03:22:53 PM »
Very Nice & Very Touchy Talat........
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2006, 03:25:01 PM »
Bohot shukriya Majid....Rajbir sad5 sweety pie ... and Aryaan....!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2006, 03:43:55 PM »
Nice Talat!!!

Zindagi hai, her pal naya safar dikhaati hai
Kabhi payaar to kabhi dhoko se sahlaati hai

Her kadam per, himmat ek nai de jaati hai
Jitney milty hai dukh, utni hi himmat bhi de jaati hai

Kabhi gila, kabhi shikwa, kabhi shikayat lub per atti hai
Nikal jaata hai her ek waqat, ant (last) mai yahi baat juban per atti hai!!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2006, 03:48:36 PM »
Pooja

Bahut  sahi kaha

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Meena is back
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2006, 04:56:53 PM »
wah wah talat and pooja....too gud both!!!

zindagi kis maud pe kada kar degi yeh kisne jana hai,
jo hota hai acha hi hota hai, yeh humne mana hai,
purani yadon ko apni takat man kar aage bado aye dost,
inhe naye jazbaato se chod kar, banega ek naya fasana hai!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2006, 06:34:47 PM »
Wahhh bohat khoob TalaT.....wonderful Pooja ji....bohat sahi likha aapne bhi n meena sis too.
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2006, 06:45:43 PM »
Very Nice Talat n too good Pooja JI!!!!!!!!

Talat Yaaar jaisa hum chahte hai jindgi hamesha waise nahi chalti, Jindgi to chalti rahti hain apni raah par hamein toh bas saath dena hota hain.
aur hum hamesha wahi jate hai jaha yeh le jaati hai.........
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«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2006, 02:33:03 AM »
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nirbhay
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«Reply #11 on: April 13, 2006, 03:29:07 AM »
Zindagi bhar mein karenge
gustakhian bass ek baar
Yaaron tum to paidal chalna
hum chalenge janazhe pe sawaar
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«Reply #12 on: April 13, 2006, 04:08:04 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Chal diye nayi zindagi ki aor hum
Puraani yadon ko kafan pehna kar

Khabar hai ab laut ke na aayenge
Nayi raahon ke ho gaye musafir

Bojhal se qadam, aankhon me nami
Bhar na paaye, zakhm aise hain dil par

Jaane kya rang ab dikhayegi zindagi
Kya chupa hai haathon ki lakeeron par

Kaise samjhaayen apni in aankhon ko
Hote nahin hain poore khwaab aksar !!!


Talat aise nahi karte na? bilkul nahi.........

zindgi se kaya gila zindgi se kaya shikwe
dukh agar kabhi diye bhi to kaya
khushiyan kam to nahi di
bhul kyon jate ko unko dur ka na sahi
pal do pal ka saath to diya kabhi kabhi

Chahe kitna bhi dur le jaye ye zindgi
lautne ki raha kabhi band hoti nahi
har subha nayee ummeed laati hai
sham hote hote yaaden gehrati hai
ho sake to band palko se dekh lena
milnege hum tume wahin kahin....

Talat Take care.

and very nice all.......
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #13 on: April 13, 2006, 05:08:20 AM »
chal diye hum tera shehar chod ker.........
na aab rahega mera yaha koi nishan.....
na der per hogi aab tere dua koi ......
na rukega aab koi tere der pe karwaan.......
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: April 13, 2006, 07:13:00 AM »
Pooja..aapki baat ne huasla diya !!! Nice reply !!

Meena...bohot achcha likha sis ..zindagi aisi hi hai !!

Shukriya Nidhi.....!!

Touchy...thanks...aapki baat dil chu gayi !!

Vikas....thanks a lot Vikas...bohot achcha likha tumne...and thats inspiring !!!

Aryaan...Nirbhay and Tushar....bohot achcha likha..nice ones from you !!!!

Thanks alot friends  !!!
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