!!!..Chhoo le jo rooh ko..!!!

by nashwani on December 25, 2013, 10:55:53 PM
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Phir se nazar, wo manzar nahi aata,,
Bhulne ka bhi hame hunar nahi aata..


Sath sath chalte rahe hai ham apke,,
Khabar ho apko, ye nazar nahi aata..

Apne kadmo.N ke nishan hi chhod jate,,
Tay karna, tanhai me safar nahi aata..

Kaun kehta dobara hamsafar nahi aata,,
Choo le jo rooh ko, wo asar nahi aata..

Pata agar bata dete apna aap kabhi,,
Nazar wo firta dar-ba-dar nahi aata..

Apka zikr, shauk nai 'deevane' ka, bas,,
Labo.N par koi aur swar nahi aata..!!! Ñ

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«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2013, 11:07:29 PM »
bahut bahut khoob Ashwani jee.....
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«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2013, 11:19:13 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2013, 11:45:16 PM »
wahhhhhhhhh kYa Khoob lIKHA HAI bhai!!!1mast..
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«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2013, 11:59:40 PM »
BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB.............
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2013, 12:40:15 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2013, 01:30:10 AM »

Nashwaani Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... Gazab ke umdaa khayaal bayaaN kiye haiN aapne... behad khoob aur gehre ahsaas O khayaal rahe sabhi sher ke...

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2013, 02:22:35 AM »


Phir se nazar, wo manzar nahi aata,,
Bhulne ka bhi hame hunar nahi aata..


Sath sath chalte rahe hai ham apke,,
Khabar ho apko, ye nazar nahi aata..

Apne kadmo.N ke nishan hi chhod jate,,
Tay karna, tanhai me safar nahi aata..

Kaun kehta dobara hamsafar nahi milta,,
Choo le jo rooh ko, wo asar nahi aata..

Pata agar bata dete apna aap kabhi,,
Nazar wo firta dar-ba-dar nahi aata..

Apka zikr, shauk nai 'deevane' ka, bas,,
Labo.N par koi aur swar nahi aata..!!! Ñ


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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2013, 03:36:56 AM »
Bahoot khub Sir,
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2013, 04:52:12 AM »
Bahut  knoob,nashwaniji.teesra sher aur maqte par merit khususi daad.
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2013, 06:22:45 AM »
Phir se nazar, wo manzar nahi aata,,
Bhulne ka bhi hame hunar nahi aata..

Sath sath chalte rahe hai ham apke,,
Khabar ho apko, ye nazar nahi aata..

Apne kadmo.N ke nishan hi chhod jate,,
Tay karna, tanhai me safar nahi aata..

Kaun kehta dobara hamsafar nahi milta,,
Choo le jo rooh ko, wo asar nahi aata..

Pata agar bata dete apna aap kabhi,,
Nazar wo firta dar-ba-dar nahi aata..

Apka zikr, shauk nai 'deevane' ka, bas,,
Labo.N par koi aur swar nahi aata..!!! Ñ

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wah wah wah bohut hi umda
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2013, 06:41:42 AM »
really ..very nice...true feelings....truely expressed
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«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2013, 07:40:49 AM »


Phir se nazar, wo manzar nahi aata,,
Bhulne ka bhi hame hunar nahi aata..


Sath sath chalte rahe hai ham apke,,
Khabar ho apko, ye nazar nahi aata..

Apne kadmo.N ke nishan hi chhod jate,,
Tay karna, tanhai me safar nahi aata..

Kaun kehta dobara hamsafar nahi aata,,
Choo le jo rooh ko, wo asar nahi aata..

Pata agar bata dete apna aap kabhi,,
Nazar wo firta dar-ba-dar nahi aata..

Apka zikr, shauk nai 'deevane' ka, bas,,
Labo.N par koi aur swar nahi aata..!!! Ñ

Wha wha bhut khub dil ko choo gay ap kay alfaj
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2013, 08:43:44 AM »
Nashwani boht khoob boht gehraa!! Good job!! One from me as well

Mohobbaton ka hisaar tha na adawaton ka shumaar tha
Kabhi zaat us ki azab thi kabhi rooh ka who qarar tha
Tu bhi door hai main bhi door hoon kyun alag hue raste
Meri chahton ka guraiz tha ya teri ana ka hisaar tha!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2013, 09:14:52 AM »
Phir se nazar, wo manzar nahi aata,,
Bhulne ka bhi hame hunar nahi aata..

Sath sath chalte rahe hai ham apke,,
Khabar ho apko, ye nazar nahi aata..

Apne kadmo.N ke nishan hi chhod jate,,
Tay karna, tanhai me safar nahi

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