chhoot gaya sab

by sanya310 on June 13, 2005, 02:13:44 PM
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dil dukhaya maine bhi tumhara haina
par pyar mein badlaa to nahi hota hai
hamesha kyun galat samajhte hain sab mujhe
mera bhi dil hai, dard mujhe bhi hota hai

kaanp uthti hai nas nas, tumhare hoton se aisi batein sunkar
ek pal mein sabkuch kho jaata hua nazar aata hai
ek tum hi the, jiske liye sab sehte aarahe hain
tumne jo galat samajhliya, ab nahi nahi saha jaata hai

kehte ho tum ghusse mein kuch bhi keh gaya main
par sach to ye hai bilkul sach kaha hai tumne
kyunki ghusse mein dil ki har ek baat bahar nikaalkar
sab saaf saaf keh diya hai tumne

sab chhootta dikhayi de raha hai,
tum badal rahe ho main badal rahi hoon
shayad ab kabhi wo din na aaye
mere raaste pe kya main akele chal rahi hoon?
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bond
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2005, 02:27:24 PM »
waaaaaah...bahut achha SANYA..........

na badalne ki kasme maine bhi khayin thi aur tumne bhi
dard jo aaj tumhe mila hai kisi ko diya hai dard tumne bhi
waqt ke saath humne kabhi bhi badalna na chaha,na badlenge
fir dard dekar dard ki raah kyun pakad li yu aaj tumne bhi
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2005, 02:29:06 PM »
wonderfull n very sad Sanya.....is everything ok sis?Huh?
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husain52
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2005, 02:37:55 PM »
bohot khoob sanya ji

Tumhaare ghum nigaahoN meiN basaa ke
Nazar aate nahiiN rustay wafaa ke

KahaaN baitha hai tuu chhup ke nazar se
Merii palkoN meiN chingaari chhupa ke

Jalaa baithay uunhiN ke vastay ghar
Chaley woh aaj bhi humse apna daaman bachaa ke
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bond
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2005, 02:47:01 PM »
bahut achhe husain........................................... .........
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sanya310
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2005, 03:03:08 PM »
Quote from: "bond"
waaaaaah...bahut achha SANYA..........

na badalne ki kasme maine bhi khayin thi aur tumne bhi
dard jo aaj tumhe mila hai kisi ko diya hai dard tumne bhi
waqt ke saath humne kabhi bhi badalna na chaha,na badlenge
fir dard dekar dard ki raah kyun pakad li yu aaj tumne bhi


waqt ke saath tum yun badaltey jaa rahe ho
kyaa wahi purane tum ko paa sakungi wapas?
itni door aayi hoon tumhare saath is safar mein
kya lagta hai tumhe main jaa sakungi wapas?
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2005, 03:04:37 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
dil dukhaya maine bhi tumhara haina
par pyar mein badlaa to nahi hota hai
hamesha kyun galat samajhte hain sab mujhe
mera bhi dil hai, dard mujhe bhi hota hai

kaanp uthti hai nas nas, tumhare hoton se aisi batein sunkar
ek pal mein sabkuch kho jaata hua nazar aata hai
ek tum hi the, jiske liye sab sehte aarahe hain
tumne jo galat samajhliya, ab nahi nahi saha jaata hai

kehte ho tum ghusse mein kuch bhi keh gaya main
par sach to ye hai bilkul sach kaha hai tumne
kyunki ghusse mein dil ki har ek baat bahar nikaalkar
sab saaf saaf keh diya hai tumne

sab chhootta dikhayi de raha hai,
tum badal rahe ho main badal rahi hoon
shayad ab kabhi wo din na aaye
mere raaste pe kya main akele chal rahi hoon?


mujhe pata hai koi majboori teri bhi hogi ,....
jo tune dhukhaya mera dil,.....
nahi to jo gire us waQt teri aakh se aansu,...
wo nahi girte bagar dukhai aapna dil,...
logo ka kya hai wo to kehte rehenge,....
or tum chaho hume hum to bus tumhe hi chahenge,....
wo kahi jo maine batain wo bhi jhuti hai sanam,...
taki mujhe thukrane ka na lage tumhe koi gam,...
bus dua merte hai tum khush hi rehna,....
na mai badla hu na tum badal rahi ho,...
bus aapney ye halat badal gaye hai,....
raste aalag hua hai aabhi to kya,...
door dekho humari manzile mil rhi hai,...
humara  pyar mil raha hai,.......
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sanya310
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2005, 03:05:55 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
wonderfull n very sad Sanya.....is everything ok sis?Huh?


thanx nikki sis....aaj ka din bohot kharaab hai...
sab koi na koi shikayat kar rahe hain...
kabhi kabhi lagta hai bas bohot ho chuka! par phir sochti hoon,
main thodi kisika dil dukha sakti hoon!
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sanya310
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2005, 03:07:51 PM »
Quote from: "husain52"
bohot khoob sanya ji

Tumhaare ghum nigaahoN meiN basaa ke
Nazar aate nahiiN rustay wafaa ke

KahaaN baitha hai tuu chhup ke nazar se
Merii palkoN meiN chingaari chhupa ke

Jalaa baithay uunhiN ke vastay ghar
Chaley woh aaj bhi humse apna daaman bachaa ke



thanx hussain, nice one

chhupne chhupaane ka khel khatm karo ab
jo chahiye bas ab tum bol do
itne dard  diye ke bas bhi karo ab!
aaj saare ke saare raaz khol do
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sanya310
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2005, 03:18:22 PM »
Quote from: "tushar_4u_im"
Quote from: "sanya310"
dil dukhaya maine bhi tumhara haina
par pyar mein badlaa to nahi hota hai
hamesha kyun galat samajhte hain sab mujhe
mera bhi dil hai, dard mujhe bhi hota hai

kaanp uthti hai nas nas, tumhare hoton se aisi batein sunkar
ek pal mein sabkuch kho jaata hua nazar aata hai
ek tum hi the, jiske liye sab sehte aarahe hain
tumne jo galat samajhliya, ab nahi nahi saha jaata hai

kehte ho tum ghusse mein kuch bhi keh gaya main
par sach to ye hai bilkul sach kaha hai tumne
kyunki ghusse mein dil ki har ek baat bahar nikaalkar
sab saaf saaf keh diya hai tumne

sab chhootta dikhayi de raha hai,
tum badal rahe ho main badal rahi hoon
shayad ab kabhi wo din na aaye
mere raaste pe kya main akele chal rahi hoon?


mujhe pata hai koi majboori teri bhi hogi ,....
jo tune dhukhaya mera dil,.....
nahi to jo gire us waQt teri aakh se aansu,...
wo nahi girte bagar dukhai aapna dil,...
logo ka kya hai wo to kehte rehenge,....
or tum chaho hume hum to bus tumhe hi chahenge,....
wo kahi jo maine batain wo bhi jhuti hai sanam,...
taki mujhe thukrane ka na lage tumhe koi gam,...
bus dua merte hai tum khush hi rehna,....
na mai badla hu na tum badal rahi ho,...
bus aapney ye halat badal gaye hai,....
raste aalag hua hai aabhi to kya,...
door dekho humari manzile mil rhi hai,...
humara  pyar mil raha hai,.......



nice tusshar
chuna hai tumne ye alag raasta kaunsa
hamari raahein to ek hi thi...
beech raaste mein mujhe aise kyun chhod gaye
hamari manzilein bhi to ek hi thi...
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nikki
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2005, 03:24:36 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
Quote from: "nikki"
wonderfull n very sad Sanya.....is everything ok sis?Huh?


thanx nikki sis....aaj ka din bohot kharaab hai...
sab koi na koi shikayat kar rahe hain...
kabhi kabhi lagta hai bas bohot ho chuka! par phir sochti hoon,
main thodi kisika dil dukha sakti hoon!


u r rite sis......mera din bhi kharaab hi guzra hai aaj...mood off sad5
yeh sab to chalta hi rehta hai, cheer up...buddy...........
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2005, 03:27:46 PM »
nice tusshar
chuna hai tumne ye alag raasta kaunsa
hamari raahein to ek hi thi...
beech raaste mein mujhe aise kyun chhod gaye
hamari manzilein bhi to ek hi thi...[/quote]

manzil to ek thi magar raste na jane kyu juda ho gaye,...

thode samay k liye hum dono kho gaye,....

ik mor jo maine dekha tha tumhe magar,...

aawaz di tumko magar tum meri bat na sun sake,....

socha kabhi na kabhi tumhare pass aaker kahunga,....

aaj mauka mila hai mai kehker hi rehunga,....

ji raha hu tumhare liye bus tumse pyar hai,...

tumse milne ko tarapta raha hu dil bhi aab toi bekarar hai,...

hume bus sirf tumse tumse pyar hai,.......
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2005, 03:30:05 PM »
gud work sanya, very touchy poem!! :D

bond ji, husain ji aur tushar bohot acha likha!!!

 :D
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bond
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2005, 03:41:21 PM »
thanx MEENA JI.....................................

jab kabhi tera naam lete hain
dil se ham intaqaam lete hain

meri barbaadiyon ke afasane
mere yaaron kaa naam lete hain

bas yahi ek jurm hai apanaa
ham muhabbat se kaam lete hain

har qadam par gire par siikhaa
kaise giratoon ko thaam lete hain

ham bhatak kar junuun ki raahon mein
aql se intaqaam lete hain
NM
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2005, 03:42:54 PM »
wah bond ji!!!!!!!!

"bas yahi ek jurm hai apanaa
ham muhabbat se kaam lete hain

har qadam par gire par siikhaa
kaise giratoon ko thaam lete hain "


great lines!!!!!!!
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