Dard ka wo pal

by Pooja on November 24, 2008, 10:15:38 PM
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Veeran is dil main, ajj bhi basera hai
Teri yaadon ka dard ghanera hai

Betabi magar ab kahin dhal si gai
Zakhmo ka dard ajj bhi bathera hai

Hosh-o-hawas ajj bhi ho jaate hai goom
Teri bewafai ka kahan  koi sawera hai

Khayal tere aye to kaha phir koi hosh hume
Dard ka wo pal, ajj bhi wahi thehra hai….
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pankshivam
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2008, 02:25:28 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 24, 2008, 10:15:38 PM
Veeran is dil main, ajj bhi basera hai
Teri yaadon ka dard ghanera hai

Betabi magar ab kahin dhal si gai
Zakhmo ka dard ajj bhi bathera hai

Hosh-o-hawas ajj bhi ho jaate hai goom
Teri bewafai ka kahan  koi sawera hai

Khayal tere aye to kaha phir koi hosh hume
Dard ka wo pal, ajj bhi wahi thehra hai….


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Nice lines Pooja ji
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aye dost ye kiske gam ka zindgi pe pehra hai
Usse yaad karte ho jo jasbato se behara[deaf] hai...

Dekho jara zindagi bahut khubsurat hai,
Har taraf baharo ka Mausam har taraf khushiyo ka rang gehara hai...



~Pank~
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2008, 03:45:54 AM »
Beautiful work Pooja
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2008, 05:35:01 AM »
Nice One Pooja Ji

Dard se bhara dil mein kaise milega jagha humein
Dard ke phool bhi khilte hain aaj bhi us jahan mein
Un phoolon ko bikher do to kuchh jagha mil jayega
Zakhm kaise bhi ho kuchh roz mein hi bhar jayega
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2008, 06:19:10 AM »
Quote from: pankshivam on November 25, 2008, 02:25:28 AM

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Nice lines Pooja ji
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aye dost ye kiske gam ka zindgi pe pehra hai
Usse yaad karte ho jo jasbato se behara[deaf] hai...

Dekho jara zindagi bahut khubsurat hai,
Har taraf baharo ka Mausam har taraf khushiyo ka rang gehara hai...



~Pank~

bahoot bahoot shukaria Pank. apne apni yah post edit kyun ki. Crying.
jo delete kar diya wo bahoot acha likha tha apne.....

apki yah line mujhe behad achi lagi hai:

Usse yaad karte ho jo jasbato se behara[deaf] hai..
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2008, 06:20:00 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 25, 2008, 03:45:54 AM
Beautiful work Pooja

bahoot bahoot shukaria SG
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2008, 06:21:17 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 25, 2008, 05:35:01 AM
Nice One Pooja Ji

Dard se bhara dil mein kaise milega jagha humein
Dard ke phool bhi khilte hain aaj bhi us jahan mein
Un phoolon ko bikher do to kuchh jagha mil jayega
Zakhm kaise bhi ho kuchh roz mein hi bhar jayega


KUCH ZAKJAM UMARBHAR JAATE NAHI
KYUN LOG APNA WADA NIBHATE NAHI
PAYAR KE BADLE CHAHA THA SIRF PAYR
ITANI SI BAAT KYUN SAMJH PAATE NAHI
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k.shael
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2008, 06:27:16 AM »
WAH  Applause WAH  Applause  WAH  Applause

BEHAD PYARA AUR DARD KO BAYAN KARTA AAPKA YE KALAM BHI DIL ME UTAR GAYA
POOJA DIDI,

KHUDA KARE AAP TA-UMAR U HI LIKHTI RAHE AUR HAM U HI AAPKO PADTE RAHE...
BY. K.SHAEL
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2008, 06:30:43 AM »
 Thankyou ! SHALLY....APKI KALAM BHI KAM KAMAL KI NAHI HAI...Intzaar rahta hai ki app likhein aor hum parre Hats off to you!
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joy3902
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2008, 07:04:48 AM »
very nice shayari, i likt it
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2008, 04:05:28 PM »
Thanks Joy.. Apka Yoindia main sawagat hai!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2009, 11:22:07 PM »
Quote from: pankshivam on November 25, 2008, 02:25:28 AM

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Nice lines Pooja ji
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aye dost ye kiske gam ka zindgi pe pehra hai
Usse yaad karte ho jo jasbato se behara[deaf] hai...

Dekho jara zindagi bahut khubsurat hai,
Har taraf baharo ka Mausam har taraf khushiyo ka rang gehara hai...



~Pank~

Khud ka khud ke khayalo pe pehra hai
apne zajbaato main dil thehra hai

Bewafa to kab se ja chuka zindagi se meri
har taraf bas issi dard ka sehra hai
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pankshivam
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2009, 11:44:15 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on February 06, 2009, 11:22:07 PM
Khud ka khud ke khayalo pe pehra hai
apne zajbaato main dil thehra hai

Bewafa to kab se ja chuka zindagi se meri
har taraf bas issi dard ka sehra hai
Very Nice Poojaji
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2009, 11:50:00 PM »
Shukaria Pank ji!!
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Asghr
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«Reply #14 on: February 07, 2009, 02:15:46 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on November 24, 2008, 10:15:38 PM
Veeran is dil main, ajj bhi basera hai
Teri yaadon ka dard ghanera hai

Betabi magar ab kahin dhal si gai
Zakhmo ka dard ajj bhi bathera hai

Hosh-o-hawas ajj bhi ho jaate hai goom
Teri bewafai ka kahan  koi sawera hai

Khayal tere aye to kaha phir koi hosh hume
Dard ka wo pal, ajj bhi wahi thehra hai….

MERE DIL MAIN JIS KA BASERA THA,WO MERA NA THA LOTERA THA
AS USUAL POOJA JI LOVELY POETRY.ASGHR Applause Applause Applause
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