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k.shael

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~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« on: September 23, 2008, 12:09:23 PM »

KUCH U PILANA SAQI HAME AAJ KI DIL
KE SARE GAMM LABO PE DHALAK AAYE,
MERI WAFAYE USKI JAFAO KE KISSE
RO-B-RO HO JAYE,

U TO KABHI BHARI MEHFIL ME UNHE
SHARAMSAR NA KIYA, PAR AAJ KUCH
AISA SAATH DE KI HAR WAFFA MERI
UNKI BEWAFAI KA PARDA GIRAYE,

KUCH U ALFAAZ NIKLE DIL SE MERE
KI HAR ZARA-ZARA SEHAM JAYE, WO
GAM DENE WALA BHI CHALKTE AANSOO
ROK NA PAAYE,

AAJ YE DEEWARO-DAR BHI SUNENGE
PAK MOHABBAT KI DARD BHARI KAHANI
KUCH DARD NAYE TO KUCH CHOTE PURANI,

MEHFIL ME LOGO KI AANKH NA BHAR AAYE,
DHYAN RAKHNA KISI KA DIL NA TOOT JAYE,
SUNA RAHE HAI DARD APNE DEKHNA KAHI
KISI AUR KO DARD NA HO JAYE,

KUCH U PILANA SAQI HAME KI AAJ SAB GAMM
AANKHON SE CHALAK JAYE,
AAJ ROYE WO MERE SAMNE AUR HAM GAMO
KE SAATH MUSKURAYE…

BY. K.SHAEL


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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #1 on: September 23, 2008, 12:17:20 PM »

AUR HUM GAMMON KE SAATH MUSKARAAYE...
bahoot khoob likha shally.....


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honeyrose

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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #2 on: September 23, 2008, 01:39:09 PM »

very nice creation shally...


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #3 on: September 23, 2008, 02:04:25 PM »

SHUKRIYA SANJEEV BROTHER,
& HONEY DIDI...
BY. K.SHAEL


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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #4 on: September 23, 2008, 02:21:52 PM »

Shally,

Kya baat hai ! Aaj Jaam ka daur shuru kar diya Usual Smile

Tumhare is kalam par ek ghazal yaad aa gayi

La pila de saakiya
Paimana paimane ke baad
Hosh ki baatein karoonga
Hosh mein aane ke baad

Very Good


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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #5 on: September 23, 2008, 02:48:56 PM »

Bilkul theek kaha aapne, jab Dil tutta hai to to log maikhane ki taraf hi jate hain hello2


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Hashimoto

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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #6 on: September 23, 2008, 03:00:58 PM »

YUN TO BETARTEEB SHAYARI HAI SHAYAD AZAD NAZM HAI, PAR MATLAB NIKLE AISA NAHIN MEHSOOS HO RAHA.

BUT GOOD TRY AND TRY TO LEARN MORE.

HASHIM


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #7 on: September 23, 2008, 03:11:27 PM »

SHUKRIYA...
RAJBIR JI,
RAJ JI & HASHIMOTO JI,
BY. K.SHAEL


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #8 on: September 24, 2008, 12:45:09 PM »

HASHIMOTO JI, MEIN KOSHISH
KAROONGI AUR BHADIYA LIKHNE
KI THANX FOR UR KIND ADVISE,
BY. K.SHAEL


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Re: ~~"DARD LABO PE AAYE"~~

« Reply #9 on: September 25, 2008, 01:09:57 AM »

IT'S NOT ABOUT HOW AND WHAT TO WRITE, IT'S ABOUT LEARNING AND CATCHING POETRY PROPERLY.
IT'S A CRITIQUE NOT AN ADVICE. TAKE IT EITHER POSTITIVE OR NEGATIVE.

HASHIM