....~~Death~~....

by HumTum on March 17, 2005, 01:53:53 PM
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I held the knife so close to my heart.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried,
Didn't realize what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
Covered in blood, pulled myself up, in tears scribed:

"To those who don't care, to those who can't see,
Never Give up always thrive to be free."
Didn't know how many people would later cry.
"Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way."

Friend at the door, ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry, otherwise I would.
In tears, looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me,
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.


HumTum
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2005, 02:17:24 PM »
very nice Hum Tum.....
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HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2005, 02:24:54 PM »
Shukriya Nikki ji .....
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diva
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2005, 02:34:55 PM »
really nice u just write too well
keep writin
GOD BLESS U
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: March 17, 2005, 02:45:19 PM »
Quote from: "diva"
really nice you just write too well
keep writin
GOD BLESS you


Diva ji..... Aap jassey dostooN ka sath milta hai to likhney ka hounsla badtha hai... teh dil se aap sab ka Shukrguzar HooN......
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: March 18, 2005, 03:30:58 PM »
bohot ache hum tum ji!!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: March 18, 2005, 08:30:55 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
bohot ache hum tum ji!!

 :D


Thanku ji thanku ....
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sanya310
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«Reply #7 on: March 18, 2005, 08:50:07 PM »
wahhh very nice Humtum ji!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2005, 09:49:20 PM »
pal pal yah saans chali
til til her umind mari!!!

pal pal usse chaha maine
pal pal meri chahat mari!!!!

us ek pal mai jab kuch kahna chaha
bas us ek pal ki hi yaad rahi!!!

hans kar bola "mai hi to nahi bas is duniya mai"
kaise kahati, is pal se, ab duniya hi na rahi!!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: March 19, 2005, 07:25:45 AM »
wahhhhhhhhhh poojaaaaaaa! beautifull!!!!!!!!!

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Nino
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«Reply #10 on: March 19, 2005, 09:20:45 AM »
Wah Wah pooja
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #11 on: March 19, 2005, 09:28:02 AM »
"silent love is a silent death
which turns my life into hell
there is a silence in my life
no one comes knock at my door and bell

I know I am not that lucky one
to have all your love
I got inside only pain and happiness inside is none
so I decided to go far away from you my love

I hope you will remember me when I left
I do not want to live longer anymore
and I do not want you to be upset
remember onething that I am only yours

now I want to quit this game of life
so much pain inside
I do not want to hide
and I do not want to lie

when dying in the arms of sorrow
I am whispering your name
your sweet memory appears in my mind
and your vission is hazing
when my eyes fills with water



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