dil hi dil main

by chaitali on June 21, 2008, 09:55:40 PM
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chaitali
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hazaroin sawaal dil main
hazaroin hasratain dil main

dil ka bahri hona to laazmi hain yaaroin
bhaar jo hai dil pe....


itni uthal puthal dil main
itne shoor ha dil main

dil ka kaya kasoor hain yaaroin
bhaar jo hai dil pe....


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syednaami
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2008, 02:10:46 AM »
Very beautiful...
Really a touching poetry... Very nice...
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Muhammed
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2008, 09:40:54 AM »
Bahot hi Khub Likha Hai Aapne,
soulful,
Dil Bhari Ho ne K Pichhe Aankho Ka Kasoor Hai.
Shaayad.
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syednaami
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2008, 02:52:17 AM »
Raza Sahib,,, Dil hai na,,, kya kya dard hain bas likh ke sukoon aaye to likhna chaahiye...
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Muhammed
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2008, 09:47:52 AM »
Syednaami Saab
Sahih Hai,
Bilkool Durast Farmaya Aapne.

 
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syednaami
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2008, 02:10:18 AM »
Raza Saahib buhat shukriya... zarrah navaazi...

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chaitali
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2008, 11:51:54 AM »
Syednaami saahab shukriya. Glad you liked it.
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chaitali
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2008, 12:07:40 PM »
Muhammed sahib ankhoin ko nahi is safar ko kasorwaar tharahiye to shayaad teer nishane par lage Winking
Thanks for appreciating and bonding with it.
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Sonia01
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2008, 08:15:15 PM »
Chaitali jee bahut accha likha hai aapne.  Applause
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chaitali
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2008, 08:22:15 PM »
Khushi huyi jaan ke ki aapko pasaand aaya Usual Smile
thank u !
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2008, 03:50:39 PM »
Bohot khoob Chaitali
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syednaami
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2008, 08:47:07 PM »
Syednaami saahab shukriya. Glad you liked it.

Dil hi dil men,,
socha tha kabhi,,
Aaj dekh raha hun,,
Jo sach hua abhi,,
Par phir bhi,,
Yeh jo unse doori,,
Tadpaa rahi mujhe,,
Jaanta hun mitegi,,
Ek din zaroor,,
Did hi dil men,,
Daba deta hun majboori..


|Syed Naami|

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Chaitali ji,,, aap aage bhi likhiye...
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2008, 08:52:47 PM »
nice chaitali and Sami!
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syednaami
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2008, 12:49:24 AM »
Shukriya Pooja jee,,, thanks so much...
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