dil ki baat

by Prateek Mardia on May 20, 2008, 11:33:50 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 21, 2008, 12:30:41 AM »
pooja ji and mahiya ji,

behatareen jaa rahe aap dono aaj ki shaam.

Prateek.
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Talat
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«Reply #16 on: May 21, 2008, 12:32:17 AM »
Bohot khoob Mahiya and Pooja !
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Shikha12
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«Reply #17 on: May 21, 2008, 12:33:44 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 21, 2008, 12:27:08 AM
wah kay abaat hai Mahiya.. bahoot khoob!!

Toot chuka yah sheehsa,
khud ko, khud ki kirchan se bachate hai
jab bhi karta hai koi apne Gumo ki baatein
Ansoo meri ankhon mai uske aa jaate hai


Thanks Prateek ji, Celmira and Pooja di..

Bahut khoob kaha aapne.. Pooja di.. icon_smile


Laakh kirchon se humne bachaaya khud ko,
Ghaav har baar naya pahuchaaya khud ko..
Rone ko dil jo kiya ghabra ke tanhaai mein,
Geet apna hi gungunaa kar sunaaya khud ko..
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Pooja
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«Reply #18 on: May 21, 2008, 12:34:45 AM »
Prateek ji apke request ki thi ki app koshish karte rahe.... chahe do lines hi sahi..

Celmira ab yah na kahna ki do line ke liye bhi deemag kaam nahi kar raha !!!

App dono ka shukaria apko meri tukbandia pasand aai Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: May 21, 2008, 12:37:57 AM »
wah wah kaya baat hai Mahiya!! bahoot khoob..

ussi ke dard main ussi ko gungunate hai
kaya kahe kis kis tarah se khud ko rulate hai
her ek shabd uska chubhta hai nashtar ki tarah
phir bhi na jaane kyun, ussi ka intzaar kiye jaate hai
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«Reply #20 on: May 21, 2008, 12:43:13 AM »
Aap log itna achcha likh rahe hain ki alfaaz bhi nahin mil rahe mujhe Usual Smile
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #21 on: May 21, 2008, 12:43:31 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on May 21, 2008, 12:25:00 AM

Aisa nahin ki dil ki baaton ko dil samajh nahin paata..
Lekin phir bhi haal-e-dil sabse toh kaha nahin jaata,
Hum bhi baithe hai mehfil mein jo ho ke bezubaano se,
Soch rahe hai ye sheesha hai, Dobaara joda nahin jaata..


Dil ko apne sheesha mut buna
aur bun hi gaya he to
dard shabdon me na jhalka
holene de ehsaason ko
ehsaason se rubaru
dard mein bahut sakoon he
abhi to hua he shuru!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #22 on: May 21, 2008, 12:44:55 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 21, 2008, 12:37:57 AM
wah wah kaya baat hai Mahiya!! bahoot khoob..

ussi ke dard main ussi ko gungunate hai
kaya kahe kis kis tarah se khud ko rulate hai
her ek shabd uska chubhta hai nashtar ki tarah
phir bhi na jaane kyun, ussi ka intzaar kiye jaate hai

Thanks again Pooja di..  notworthy
Is waqt kuch nahin soojh raha, jo likh rahi hoon, shayad sach hi hoga..  DOH
Neways... Bahut achha reply kiya aapne bhi...  Applause


Jinke intezaar mein humne saanson ko thaame rakha hai,
Wohi kehte hai "Zara Samjhaaiye, Kya wafa mein rakha hai?"
Yeh halat hai ab ki jawaab hai, lekin hoth kapkapaaye se,
Isliye Akhiri waqt mein humne naam unka "khuda" rakha hai...
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: May 21, 2008, 12:46:39 AM »
wah prateek ji.. bahoot khoob!!

dard humko, humare rubaru he to karata hai
her ek din, kuch zakhmo ki yaad dilata hai
kuch to humse bhi hua hoga galat raah-e-zindagi main
warna koi insaan, itna to nahi kisi insaan ko rulata hai
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«Reply #24 on: May 21, 2008, 12:48:52 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 21, 2008, 12:43:31 AM
Dil ko apne sheesha mut buna
aur bun hi gaya he to
dard shabdon me na jhalka
holene de ehsaason ko
ehsaason se rubaru
dard mein bahut sakoon he
abhi to hua he shuru!


Waah.. Bahut khoob likha hai Prateek ji.. Applause

Ye Dard apna jab ho jaata hai,
Sakoon sach mein bahut aata hai...
Ehsaas toh marr chuke hai kab ke,
Kaun bhala murdon ko jagaata hai...
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Pooja
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«Reply #25 on: May 21, 2008, 12:50:28 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on May 21, 2008, 12:44:55 AM

Jinke intezaar mein humne saanson ko thaame rakha hai,
Wohi kehte hai "Zara Samjhaaiye, Kya wafa mein rakha hai?"
Yeh halat hai ab ki jawaab hai, lekin hoth kapkapaaye se,
Isliye Akhiri waqt mein humne naam unka "khuda" rakha hai...

wah bahoot khoob Mahiya..

Kabhi zindagi to kabhi zalaalat usmain najar aii
Pyar ki hud, phir bhi na kabhi mujhe samjh aaii
Mita kar mujhe jameen mai kahin dafan karne wala
Kyun ajj bhi dil ne uski murat, asmaan mai hai sajaii
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Pooja
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«Reply #26 on: May 21, 2008, 12:52:43 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on May 21, 2008, 12:48:52 AM

Ye Dard apna jab ho jaata hai,
Sakoon sach mein bahut aata hai...
Ehsaas toh marr chuke hai kab ke,
Kaun bhala murdon ko jagaata hai...

Mar kar bhi nahi marta
Pyar wo ahsaas de jaata hai
Mout ki is tadpdahat main
Phir bhi ek sakoon atta hai
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #27 on: June 06, 2008, 01:21:59 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 21, 2008, 12:52:43 AM
Mar kar bhi nahi marta
Pyar wo ahsaas de jaata hai
Mout ki is tadpdahat main
Phir bhi ek sakoon atta hai


mout deti he sakoon
woh bhala kub tadpaati he
yeh zindgi ki he pravarti
seene mein aag lagaati he

Prateek
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syednaami
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«Reply #28 on: June 08, 2008, 02:39:41 AM »
Prateek Mitr,,,

Yadi jo kavita dhoonde mile veh bhale aap ki na ho parantu us ka aanand to kuchh anubhavi sa hota hai...
kadaachit aap aisa samjhen ki main aap ke kavitaon ko padhta nahin... par jab aapki kavitaen mujhse khud aakar takrati hain to dil ke aarpar ho kar astitva khol deti hain....

Dhanyavaad
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #29 on: June 08, 2008, 12:56:07 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on June 08, 2008, 02:39:41 AM
Prateek Mitr,,,

Yadi jo kavita dhoonde mile veh bhale aap ki na ho parantu us ka aanand to kuchh anubhavi sa hota hai...
kadaachit aap aisa samjhen ki main aap ke kavitaon ko padhta nahin... par jab aapki kavitaen mujhse khud aakar takrati hain to dil ke aarpar ho kar astitva khol deti hain....

Dhanyavaad

 bhai syeednaami ji,

shukriya..aapki drishti gharibon ke ghar padti-rehti he.Komal he kavitaayen..yadi aapse takraaye bhee to sambhaal lijiyega...aisa maaniyega..ki phool pheka he aapki taraf!!takaraye to khusbhu de ke jaayega!!
sada aapkai hausla afzahi ka shukrguzaar,

Prateek
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