dil ki baat

by Prateek Mardia on May 20, 2008, 11:33:50 PM
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kabhi koi kisi se
keh ne nahi paya
apne dil ki baar poori
kabhi bhool jaata he
kabhi sahas nahi juta paata he
kabhi dil ke bhavo ko
sahi shabd nahi mil paate
kabhi koi aur majboori
dil ki baaten
sada reh jaati he
adhoori!

      (N/M)_
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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2008, 11:35:26 PM »
Very nice.. Applause

Thanks for sharing with us such nice lines Prateek Ji.. icon_smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2008, 11:37:23 PM »
kisi shabdkosh main wo shabd nahi paaya
koi bhi shabd, meri chaht ko wo arth na de paaya
Socho main hi rah gai mere teri chaht
meri chaht ko wo ashiana na mil paaya
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2008, 11:38:31 PM »
Wow.. Absolutely Beautiful lines Pooja di.. Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2008, 11:39:33 PM »
Nice sharing Prateek Ji. Good one Pooja !
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2008, 11:48:53 PM »
shukriya mahiya ji,celmira ji.

Quote from: Pooja on May 20, 2008, 11:37:23 PM
kisi shabdkosh main wo shabd nahi paaya
koi bhi shabd, meri chaht ko wo arth na de paaya
Socho main hi rah gai mere teri chaht
meri chaht ko wo ashiana na mil paaya
.

mera aage continue ka koi vaada nahi he aapki tarah...bus ek try kar raha hu,pooja ji.

khoj rahi kyon shabdon ko tum
nayanon se priy keh daalo
jo nahi samajhte bhaavo ko
unke aage antar ke kyon put kholo!
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2008, 11:52:45 PM »
Thanks Mahiya and Celmira!!

Prateek ji app aise he try karte rahe... bahoot acha likha hai apne!!

waise nayano ki bhasha Khumar-e-Ishaq mai chalati hai.. hum shayri-e-dard main hai is waqat!!

pyar hi nahi jab humare liye
wo koi bhi ada kaise samjh payege
Nayano ki baat to lagati hai bahoot door
humare sadharan shabdo ko bhi wo ansuna kar jayege
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2008, 11:59:29 PM »




waise nayano ki bhasha Khumar-e-Ishaq mai chalati hai.. hum shayri-e-dard main hai is waqat!!

jub ek taraf khumar-e-ishq ho aur ek taraf shayari-e-dard toh fir sub kuch he shayari -e-dard hua na!


itni jaldi nahi socha jaata aapki tarah.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2008, 12:03:58 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 20, 2008, 11:48:53 PM
shukriya mahiya ji,celmira ji.
.

mera aage continue ka koi vaada nahi he aapki tarah...bus ek try kar raha hu,pooja ji.

khoj rahi kyon shabdon ko tum
nayanon se priy keh daalo
jo nahi samajhte bhaavo ko
unke aage antar ke kyon put kholo!

Bahut khoob Prateek ji... Applause

Quote from: Pooja on May 20, 2008, 11:52:45 PM
Thanks Mahiya and Celmira!!

Prateek ji app aise he try karte rahe... bahoot acha likha hai apne!!

waise nayano ki bhasha Khumar-e-Ishaq mai chalati hai.. hum shayri-e-dard main hai is waqat!!

pyar hi nahi jab humare liye
wo koi bhi ada kaise samjh payege
Nayano ki baat to lagati hai bahoot door
humare sadharan shabdo ko bhi wo ansuna kar jayege

Nice Reply Pooja di...

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 20, 2008, 11:59:29 PM



waise nayano ki bhasha Khumar-e-Ishaq mai chalati hai.. hum shayri-e-dard main hai is waqat!!

jub ek taraf khumar-e-ishq ho aur ek taraf shayari-e-dard toh fir sub kuch he shayari -e-dard hua na!


itni jaldi nahi socha jaata aapki tarah.


Giggle

Bilcul sahi kaha aapne..  Thumbs UP
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2008, 12:09:47 AM »
Prateek ji, mai soch kar nahi likhati, likh kar sochati hu ki kaya likha gaya!! sahi kaha jab tak ishaq main khumar nahi atta.. tab tak shayri main dard nahi atta!!

Thanks Mahiya, ajj apki kalam kyun ruki hue hai..

dil ki baato ko, khud dil nahi samjh paata
ladta hai ussi se, jis ke bin nahi rah paata
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2008, 12:17:45 AM »
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pyar hi nahi jab humare liye
wo koi bhi ada kaise samjh payege
Nayano ki baat to lagati hai bahoot door
humare sadharan shabdo ko bhi wo ansuna kar jayege


Poore 15 minute lage,kuch nahi bana-shayri e-dard mein funny shayri bun gayi he-please aap pudh kar delete zarror zaroor kar dijiyega yahan se.

jub tum nayanon se baat karo
to mujhko lagta ghoor rahi ho
jub baaton ka tumne liya sahaara
to bus taana he tumne maara.

(plz delete after reading)
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2008, 12:20:41 AM »
Good going Pooja and Prateek Ji !
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2008, 12:23:50 AM »
prateek ji taana shabd apka, apki lines ko funny se bacha kar dard mai le ayya.. app koshish karte rahe..

Mere taano main bhi tera hi baana
tere bin kaha, maine ab jaana
mere dil ki jab tu jaane
phir jaanbujh kar kyun bana anjaana!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2008, 12:25:00 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 21, 2008, 12:09:47 AM
Prateek ji, mai soch kar nahi likhati, likh kar sochati hu ki kaya likha gaya!! sahi kaha jab tak ishaq main khumar nahi atta.. tab tak shayri main dard nahi atta!!

Thanks Mahiya, ajj apki kalam kyun ruki hue hai..

dil ki baato ko, khud dil nahi samjh paata
ladta hai ussi se, jis ke bin nahi rah paata


Aisa nahin ki dil ki baaton ko dil samajh nahin paata..
Lekin phir bhi haal-e-dil sabse toh kaha nahin jaata,
Hum bhi baithe hai mehfil mein jo ho ke bezubaano se,
Soch rahe hai ye sheesha hai, Dobaara joda nahin jaata..
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: May 21, 2008, 12:27:08 AM »
wah kay abaat hai Mahiya.. bahoot khoob!!

Toot chuka yah sheehsa,
khud ko, khud ki kirchan se bachate hai
jab bhi karta hai koi apne Gumo ki baatein
Ansoo meri ankhon mai uske aa jaate hai
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