~:: Dil mein lekar Tumhari yaad chaley ::~

by nirbhay on May 02, 2006, 09:17:58 AM
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Dil mein le kar tumhari yaad chaley
Baag-e-aalam se na muraad chaley
Aab fakat ye hai muda.ha mera
Baksh dey tu dil-o-housla mera
Dil mein le kar tumhari yaad chaley
Bag-e-aalam se na muraad chaley
Aansu kabhie tumhein bhi chubhein
To chupkey se do char baha lena
Tasvir mein meri kabr kii gale lagaa lena
Dil mein le kar tumhari yaad chaley
Bag-e-aalam se na muraad chaley
Guncha-e-dil mere ko kuch pilaa jaana
Fhool qurbat pe do char tumbhi charaa jaana
Dil mein le kar tumhari yaad chaley
Baag-e-aalam se na muraad chaley…
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2006, 09:39:46 AM »
Bohat Achey Nirbhay...
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2006, 10:05:27 AM »
ohhhhhhhhh awesome i like this!!!!!!!VERY DUD NEER
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2006, 10:08:31 AM »
Bohat Shukriya Aryaan bhai & Rosh...
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2006, 10:31:26 AM »
wah kaya baat hai Neer!! bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2006, 10:51:15 AM »
great NEER bahi.....
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2006, 10:51:35 AM »
Behadd Shukriya didi!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2006, 11:18:31 AM »
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!

Bbahut hi sundar likha hai aapne Nirbhay........

with best wishes

ranju
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2006, 12:06:55 PM »
Thanks So very much Vikas bhai & Ranjana!and i expect from you all to do write sumthing in your words also!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2006, 01:12:33 PM »
The Style Guru Says....


Oye Chote, Kamaal kar ditta yaar.....


Will give u an answer soon!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2006, 05:04:20 PM »
Thnx Bhai, likho yaar koi to aapne sath bhi itna bhi bura nahi likhtey!! :smile:
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2006, 05:43:26 PM »
In yaadon ke karwan ko lekar, hum jayen to jayen kahan,
ab to koi apna bhi nahi, sabhi paraye hain yahan....
apne dil ki haalat hum batayen bhi to batayen kisko,
ab to dil bhi apna nahi raha, yeh bhi samajhta hai kahan....
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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2006, 07:10:22 PM »
wah wah !!

na zameen apni, na jigar apna, na apna koi aasman
darbadar ke humrahi, kiss our jaayein aaur jaayein kiske yahan?
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«Reply #13 on: May 02, 2006, 07:49:36 PM »
The Style Guru Says......


Chote, u write so exclusive that u dont need any1 2 b with u.....


Phir bhi Arz hai,

Na Zameen ki chah hai mujhe Na aasmaan ki,
Dekh li hain humne nigahen saare zahaan ki,
Tumse hai ishq mujhe tum mujhe na bhoolna,
Teri khatir laga du main baazi apni jaan ki,
Tu ek baar keh de tujhe pyaar hai mujhse,
Phir parwah nahi mujhe kisi katl-e-aam ki......
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«Reply #14 on: May 02, 2006, 10:58:39 PM »
Wow urs 2 a exclusive one!! BIg b!!
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