Dil nhi karta...

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Uski yade bhulane ko dil nhi karta,
uske nishan mitane ko dil nhi karta,
ab tou akele mein muskurane ko dil nhi karta,
do chaar bate tou kar lete hai logo se tanhai mitane ko...
mgr kisi k kareeb jane ko dil nhi karta...... sad11
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2009, 09:56:20 AM »
hmmmmmm
niklo ae dost adheron se ub, ujaalon me aakar dehko...
hain sub hee dost tumhaare yahan, inka pyaar paakar dehko.

milega sukun dil ka boje halka karle tu,
aaj ya tho naya jeewan jeele ya ek hee baar marle tu!


nice lines,
yuntho hum aapko jaante nahi, magar meri baat par ghore karna~
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2009, 07:49:05 PM »
Nice and excllent Geet JI Applause Applause Applause

and good reply AD Ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2009, 08:17:37 PM »
Wow Geet Bahut Hi Khooooooooob Likha hai.. Chand Alfaazon me apne dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan kiya hai aapne.. Applause


Sidraah sis tumne Bhi Kamaal Likha hai.. Applause



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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2009, 08:19:36 PM »
Uski yade bhulane ko dil nhi karta,
uske nishan mitane ko dil nhi karta,
ab tou akele mein muskurane ko dil nhi karta,
do chaar bate tou kar lete hai logo se tanhai mitane ko...
mgr kisi k kareeb jane ko dil nhi karta...... sad11


aha... bahut khoobsurati se likha hai aapne Geet... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2009, 08:31:20 PM »
Wow Geet Bahut Hi Khooooooooob Likha hai.. Chand Alfaazon me apne dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayan kiya hai aapne.. Applause


Sidraah sis tumne Bhi Kamaal Likha hai.. Applause



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thank u bhaiyya
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2009, 04:26:10 PM »
hmmmmmm
niklo ae dost adheron se ub, ujaalon me aakar dehko...
hain sub hee dost tumhaare yahan, inka pyaar paakar dehko.

milega sukun dil ka boje halka karle tu,
aaj ya tho naya jeewan jeele ya ek hee baar marle tu!


nice lines,
yuntho hum aapko jaante nahi, magar meri baat par ghore karna~


thnx anjaan ji main apki baato pe zarur gaur karungi..aur rahi baat na jaan'ne ki tou jiske dil mein mhbt hoti vo kabhi kisi se anjaan nhi hote...aap mujhe bhi apna dost hi smjhiye...
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2009, 04:27:14 PM »

thnx alot rishi ji,mann ji aur roja ki...
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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2009, 05:25:36 PM »

thnx anjaan ji main apki baato pe zarur gaur karungi..aur rahi baat na jaan'ne ki tou jiske dil mein mhbt hoti vo kabhi kisi se anjaan nhi hote...aap mujhe bhi apna dost hi smjhiye...

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