Dil pukarta raha -Panna 5:Shayri-E-Dard

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Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #60 on: May 31, 2008, 01:36:44 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 31, 2008, 01:32:29 AM

wah kaya baat hai... magar last line main app khud hi apna sath chor gaye...

But thanks Amit ji, apki lines bahoot himmat deti hai!!!

wo hi nahi apna to uska gum bhi apna kyun kare
ussi ki raahon per chal kar, her us pal ko khud se juda kare
tanha hai, uski yaadon ke sath, tanha hai uski yaadon ke bin
phir kyun na khud ko tanha, khud ki tanhaai se kare

Ur welcome Pooja ji....... Usual Smile

Aye pyaar dekh liye maine har rang tere,
Har roop mein tere toh bas ruswai hai,
Mil jaye muhabbat ye naseeb kab mere,
Har ek hal mein haasil hame tanhai hai..


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Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #61 on: May 31, 2008, 01:41:02 AM »

wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Amit ji!!

Teri tanhaai main bhi kaha tanhaai hai
her taraf is tanhaai ne teri tasveer dikhai hai
khawab-o-khayalo ke jharokho se jhanke beete pal
sukh-dukh ke palo ne, mehfil sajai hai


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Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #62 on: May 31, 2008, 10:54:21 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 30, 2008, 11:08:23 PM

Thanks Pooja di, Amit and Sonia..

Good Reply Amit..
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari taraf se..

Tumhare kuch khat puraane aaj almaari se nikal aaye,
Shabd har ek jinka tha, anginat armaanon ko sajaaye...
Beete lamhon ki yaad tabassum si palkon par bikhraaye,
Daaman thaam tanhaai ko mere kamre tak kheench laaye..

wow simply superb Mahiya


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Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #63 on: June 02, 2008, 12:38:36 PM »

Thanks a Lot... Pooja Di, Amit and Sonia notworthy


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Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #64 on: June 02, 2008, 12:39:06 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 30, 2008, 11:33:02 PM

Dil ko apne hum kuch dino se samjha rahe hai
Gum-e-halaat se kahin door le ja rahe hai
ek yug beeta, jinki hai chand yaadein dil main
khud ko khud he un yaadon se uljha rahe hai!!!

Yun Kisi ki yaadon mein khud ko, uljhaaye jo rehte hai,
Apne armaanon ko dulhan jaisa, sajaaye wo rehte hai..
Sabse yahi kehte hai ki bus, ab intezaar aur naa hoga,
Phir bhi hardam nazar raasto par, tikaaye wo rehte hai...


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Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #65 on: June 02, 2008, 12:42:08 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 30, 2008, 11:08:23 PM

Quote from: thycreator on May 31, 2008, 12:59:15 AM

wo wo......another sixer.....form mein ho aaj aap.... Winking

Aaj phir mere khayalon pe jaise cha gaya koi,
Muddaton bad bhi apni yaad yun dilaa gaya koi,
Wo apni muhabbat mere dil mein jinda rakhegi,
Apne kiye uss waade ko phir nibha gaya koi....

Waah... Bahut khoob...
Last two lines are especially very very beautiful..

My Try:

Woh khayaal koi bann kar kabhi yun dil mein simat jaaye,
Woh muskaanon mein dhal kar kabhi in labon par chhaye..
Kehte hai bhool jao, aur bin humare bechain bhi rehte hai,
Dekho is nazm tak bhi wo hume dhoondhte hue chale aaye..


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Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #66 on: June 02, 2008, 12:45:59 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on May 30, 2008, 11:20:38 PM

Thanks Pooja di..

Aap bhi agar kuch likh dete, toh saath humara ho jaata,
Diary ke pannon par phir se kalam humara leharaata..
Kuch tukdon mein banti yaadein, adhoori si mulakaate,
Dil shayari mein keh jaata, bojhil mann halka ho jaata!!!

Quote from: thycreator on May 31, 2008, 01:14:58 AM

Ha ha ha.......jawab ke liye majboor karne ka accha andaaz hai... tongue3

Didi ne saath de diya.....chalo hum bhi bina mange dene ki koshish karte hain............. tongue3

Hazaron nashtar jaise dil mein chubhte jaate hai,
Uski yadon ke diye ab toh mujhe jalate hai,
Aye khwabon-khayalon mujhe tanha hi rehne do,
Tumhari mehfil ke shor ab na sahe jaate hain..

Bahut Bahut Shukriya..Saath dene ka..
Aur bahut khoobsurat koshish lagi aapki...

Tumhari nazar-e-inayat ki kami bhi ginvaana nahin chahti,
Dil ko ab in behroopi nakaabon se behlaana nahin chahti..
Tumhare saath bhi tanha hi khud ko paati hoon hardam,
Par tumhe chhodh ke, tanha tumhe banaana nahin chahti..


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Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #67 on: June 03, 2008, 01:13:40 AM »

Quote from: Mahiya on June 02, 2008, 12:39:06 PM

bahoot khoob Mahiya!!

Kabhi hum dil ko kabhi dil hume sajhata hai
bas issi tarah yah waqat niklata jaata hai


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