Dil pukarta raha

by thycreator on May 26, 2008, 09:58:13 PM
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thycreator
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«Reply #30 on: May 29, 2008, 05:53:58 PM »
Quote from: Roja on May 29, 2008, 02:09:04 AM
Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai sonia.... Bahut hi accha likhne lagi ho.
Arre dear kahan chupa rakhi thi yeh khoobiyan....  Applause bahut khoob  Applause
God Bless

Mohtarma......aap kab likhengi.....Huh? sad5
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«Reply #31 on: May 29, 2008, 10:02:13 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on May 27, 2008, 10:57:18 PM
Umda jawab de kar man mohit kar diya aapne, aise hi rachnaon ka aanand baant-te rahiya.... wah

Bahoot bahoot shukaria meri ikhi kavita ko pasand karne ke liye!! Apki sarahna ka bahoot bahoot shukaria!!
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«Reply #32 on: May 29, 2008, 10:04:59 PM »
Quote from: thycreator on May 28, 2008, 09:51:10 PM
Good one Pooja ji....apne meri kavita se line lekar usko naye mayane de diye....bahut khoob...Usual Smile

Kuch pal ko chal padte hai hum, tham jaate hain,
Yaad aate hai beete pal, pair ye jam jaate hain,
Kahin phir se na ho kissa wahi bewafai ka,
Sochte bhi hai gar ye bat, sehem jaate hain...

seham seham kar bhi himmat khatam nahi hoti
intzaar ki umeend kyun khatam nahi hoti
ansoo ki kuchu boondein hai ya hai yah samunder
kyun ankhon ki yah barsaat khatam nahi hoti..
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Sonia01
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«Reply #33 on: May 30, 2008, 03:05:56 AM »
Quote from: thycreator on May 29, 2008, 05:53:58 PM
Mohtarma......aap kab likhengi.....Huh? sad5

Mai likhti na...  tongue3 likhu na? sad7
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thycreator
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«Reply #34 on: May 30, 2008, 06:29:49 AM »
Haan toh likhiye kuch toh yahan jiska main jawab dun phir...tongue3
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Shikha12
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«Reply #35 on: May 30, 2008, 07:29:25 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 29, 2008, 10:04:59 PM
seham seham kar bhi himmat khatam nahi hoti
intzaar ki umeend kyun khatam nahi hoti
ansoo ki kuchu boondein hai ya hai yah samunder
kyun ankhon ki yah barsaat khatam nahi hoti..

Woh aayeinge toh harr intezaar khatam ho jaayega,
Dard is dil ka bhi zara madham madham sa ho jaayega..
Aankhon ki barsaat thamm naa jaaye aise mein kahin,
Haqiqat milan ki nahin toh phir koi bharam ho jaayega..
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Pooja
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«Reply #36 on: May 30, 2008, 02:36:01 PM »
wah.. bahoot khoob MAHIYA!!!
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Sonia01
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«Reply #37 on: May 30, 2008, 02:52:17 PM »
Quote from: thycreator on May 28, 2008, 10:00:01 PM
Kya bat hai........sahi ja rahi ho....Winking

Na kissi ki muhabbat ne, na judaai ne,
Na mara hai humko kissi ki bewafai ne,
Khud ke hathon hi hum lute gaye yahan,
Kyu laga baithe hum ye dil aashnai mein...sad5


Khokar paya hai tumhe, aab judayi ki baat na karna
Mai jab jab tumhe yaad karu, tum samne mere aa jana
Apne aapko yu saza na do sanam, manzil dhur nahi
Her saal meri, guzarti hai tere hi yaadon main
Her din nikalta hai, liye huye tera hi naam .... love9
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Pooja
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«Reply #38 on: May 30, 2008, 02:56:09 PM »
nice lines Sonia
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thycreator
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«Reply #39 on: May 30, 2008, 04:35:22 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 29, 2008, 10:04:59 PM
seham seham kar bhi himmat khatam nahi hoti
intzaar ki umeend kyun khatam nahi hoti
ansoo ki kuchu boondein hai ya hai yah samunder
kyun ankhon ki yah barsaat khatam nahi hoti..

Wah pooja ji............bahut acche...

Chahat ho jahan bhi, dard-e-dil saath hota hai,
Mehboob jo bichade toh gum din-o-raat hota hai,
Kehte hain jisse muhabbat rolati toh hai bahut,
Aankhen chalak pade jo khoon-e-jajjbat hota hai...
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thycreator
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«Reply #40 on: May 30, 2008, 04:42:01 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on May 30, 2008, 02:52:17 PM

Khokar paya hai tumhe, aab judayi ki baat na karna
Mai jab jab tumhe yaad karu, tum samne mere aa jana
Apne aapko yu saza na do sanam, manzil dhur nahi
Her saal meri, guzarti hai tere hi yaadon main
Her din nikalta hai, liye huye tera hi naam .... love9

Oh my God......sonia.....aap toh har din pehle se accha likh rahi ho....aur kehti ho likhna nahi aata....tongue3

Thama hai jo tera haath, toh na haath chodenge,
Teri aankhon se dil mein utar ke dilon jodenge,
Teri kashish ke hum kayal hue jate hai dilbar,
Tera jo saath ho toh hum har dukh ka muh modenge...tongue3
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«Reply #41 on: May 30, 2008, 04:45:57 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on May 30, 2008, 07:29:25 AM
Woh aayeinge toh harr intezaar khatam ho jaayega,
Dard is dil ka bhi zara madham madham sa ho jaayega..
Aankhon ki barsaat thamm naa jaaye aise mein kahin,
Haqiqat milan ki nahin toh phir koi bharam ho jaayega..


Too good mahiya......specially the last line is a killer...Winking

Milan ki aisi hui bat mujhe judaai yaad aa gayi,
Mere mehboob se chahat ki wo khudai yaar aa gayi,
Kehte hain dard mein bhi ishq ka alag andaz hai,
Mehfil mein bhi baith kar hame tanhai yaad aa gayi...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #42 on: May 30, 2008, 04:47:15 PM »
Quote from: thycreator on May 30, 2008, 04:42:01 PM
Oh my God......sonia.....aap toh har din pehle se accha likh rahi ho....aur kehti ho likhna nahi aata....tongue3

Thama hai jo tera haath, toh na haath chodenge,
Teri aankhon se dil mein utar ke dilon jodenge,
Teri kashish ke hum kayal hue jate hai dilbar,
Tera jo saath ho toh hum har dukh ka muh modenge...tongue3

Gurujee yeh sab kamal Aap/Pooja di/Celmira/Mahiya jaise shayron ka kamal hai jee. mai kuch b nahi aap logon ke samne  notworthy  notworthy

Jane kya baat thi tujhme, yeh dil diwana ban gaya
Baat toh kuch nahi thi magar afsana ban gaya
Teri aankhon main itni masti thi yaara
Jisme doobkar tum ab dunia se begana ban gaya  Giggle
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Pooja
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«Reply #43 on: May 30, 2008, 04:50:18 PM »
wah wah wah bahoot khoob Amit ji sabhi reply ek se bard kar ek diye hai apne...

Sonia bahoot acha likh rahi hai app!!
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Sonia01
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«Reply #44 on: May 30, 2008, 05:10:25 PM »
Thank Pooja di
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