***Diljala***

by Meena on February 09, 2005, 06:06:12 PM
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Meena
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Khwab kuch aisa toota ke ankh me chubne laga,
Zakhmo se pani ki jagha khoon behene laga,

Reeth hai yaha shareer ko jala dene ki lekin,
Bin jale mai to aab raakh bane laga,

Zindagi tujhe shayad meri wafa raas na ayi,
Jo yeh “Diljala” maut ko apna kehne laga!
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HumTum
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2005, 06:14:34 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Khwab kuch aisa toota ke ankh me chubne laga,
Zakhmo se pani ki jagha khoon behene laga,

Reeth hai yaha shareer ko jala dene ki lekin,
Bin jale mai to aab raakh bane laga,

Zindagi tujhe shayad meri wafa raas na ayi,
Jo yeh “Diljala” maut ko apna kehne laga!



just mind blowing.... no words to explian....
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2005, 06:18:15 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya!!!!!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2005, 09:17:23 PM »
wah kaya baat hai!!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2005, 02:15:46 AM »

Zindagi tujhe shayad meri wafa raas na ayi,
Jo yeh “Diljala” maut ko apna kehne laga!
     wah, bohat khoob Meena.......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2005, 02:47:33 AM »

Iss se pehle keh kaheen waQt na dhal jaye mera
Phir kisi raat ke aangan mein bikhar jaaun main
Meri aankhon mein jo hai aag, jalaa de mujh ko
Mere seene mein dharakta huwa dil thamm jaye
Meri baanhein jo uthi hain, woh na shall ho jayein
ShauQ-e-manzil na kaheen choote kinaaron ki tarha
Toot jaaun na kaheen apne sahaaron ki tarha
Iss se pehle keh kaheen khaab na bikhraein mere
Iss se pehle ke meri rooh, mera sath na de
Mere mehboob mujhe apni mohabbat de de.....
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2005, 05:12:44 AM »
very heart touching words meena ji!!!!!
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lost_soul
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2005, 02:58:29 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Khwab kuch aisa toota ke ankh me chubne laga,
Zakhmo se pani ki jagha khoon behene laga,

Reeth hai yaha shareer ko jala dene ki lekin,
Bin jale mai to aab raakh bane laga,

Zindagi tujhe shayad meri wafa raas na ayi,
Jo yeh “Diljala” maut ko apna kehne laga!


wow gr8 1....alfaaz nhi hai apke tareef k liye.....par ek baat puchni thi...."zakhmo se pani..."  samja nhi
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thycreator
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2005, 03:08:32 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Khwab kuch aisa toota ke ankh me chubne laga,
Zakhmo se pani ki jagha khoon behene laga,

Reeth hai yaha shareer ko jala dene ki lekin,
Bin jale mai to aab raakh bane laga,

Zindagi tujhe shayad meri wafa raas na ayi,
Jo yeh “Diljala” maut ko apna kehne laga!


Wah meena ji...kya likha hai....

Diljale ki ye dastaan sun ke aankh bhar aayi,
Jane kitne issi daur se gujare hai jeevan mein,
Wah re khuda teri khudai ki kya mai misal du,
Dilwale hi sada toot ke bikhare hai jeevan mein.
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2005, 03:59:57 PM »
Wah!! meena aryaan n creator !! Nice work happy9
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thycreator
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«Reply #10 on: February 10, 2005, 04:03:59 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Wah!! meena aryaan n creator !! Nice work happy9


Thanx talat ji...... tongue3
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: February 10, 2005, 04:08:18 PM »
wowoowow!!!! Good work Meena, Aryaan and thycreator ji!!!!! Bahoot khoob!!!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #12 on: February 10, 2005, 04:14:51 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
wowoowow!!!! Good work Meena, Aryaan and thycreator ji!!!!! Bahoot khoob!!!!!


Thanx Pooja ji........ tongue3
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: February 10, 2005, 04:28:55 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
wah kaya baat hai!!!!!


thank u  kuddiye!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: February 10, 2005, 04:29:15 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Zindagi tujhe shayad meri wafa raas na ayi,
Jo yeh “Diljala” maut ko apna kehne laga!
     wah, bohat khoob Meena.......


shukriya ji shukriya!!!

 :D
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