~Door Jate huye~:Shayri-E-Dard

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~Door Jate huye~

« on: November 29, 2008, 04:53:04 PM »

Beet jayegi ye zindagi shayad abb usse bhulate huye...
Yaad bankar rahegi tasveer uski muskurate huye...
Chahat rahi ek lamha jeene ki sath usake,
Sau baar mar raha hun aaj usse door jate huye...

~Pank~


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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2008, 06:04:33 PM »

Very well said Shivam


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pankshivam

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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2008, 06:12:50 PM »

Shukriya Sajid Sahab!!!


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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #3 on: November 29, 2008, 07:33:07 PM »

pank ji. bahut khoob Applause


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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2008, 07:41:04 PM »

Quote from: pankshivam on November 29, 2008, 04:53:04 PM

Bohat Badhiya Pank Ji,.

Chahat Apni Bhi Thi Ke Us Se Doori Na Ho,.
Hum Dono Ke Beech Koi Majboori Na Ho,.

Khuda Ko Jaane Kya Manzoor Tha, Maloom Nahi,.
Ya Phir Usne Chahat Ki, Ke Meri Duaa Poori Na Ho,.

_________________________-Jaanasheen-


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honeyrose

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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #5 on: November 29, 2008, 08:04:34 PM »

Bohat khoob pank ji

Bohat khoob Azeem bhai...


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #6 on: November 29, 2008, 08:13:17 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 07:41:04 PM

Dilwale apni duao me asar rakhte hain
Milne ki ummeed aur fitrat me apni sabar rakhte hain
Q itne pareshaan aap aaj nazar aate hain azeem
Aap ghayel nahi shayer hain aap dil jeetne ka hunar rakhte hain

-sg-


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pankshivam

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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #7 on: November 29, 2008, 09:46:21 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 29, 2008, 08:13:17 PM

Shukriya Honeyroseji!!!
Shukriya Jaanasheenji !!!
Shukriya Taheer Khaja !!!
Shukriya Sajid Sahab !!!


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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #8 on: December 01, 2008, 01:01:23 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 29, 2008, 08:13:17 PM

Great Bhaijaan,.

Dil Jeetne Ka Hunar Humne Kho Diya,.
Shayaari Karte Karte Jab Main Ro Diya,.

Ab Duniya Samajhti Hai Kamzor Mujhe,.
Dene Lagi Hai, Gham Kuch Aur Mujhe,.

"Sajid" Roshan Sitaara Hai Mehfill Ka,.
"Azeem To, Patthar Hai Veeraan Ki Manzil Ka,.

Yunhi "Sajid" Duniya Ko Ujaala Dena,.
Aur Logon Ko Mere Haal, Ka Ishaara Dena,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-


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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #9 on: December 01, 2008, 01:19:28 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 01, 2008, 01:01:23 PM

Great Bhaijaan,.

Dil Jeetne Ka Hunar Humne Ho Kho Diya,.
Shayaari Karte Karte Jab Main Ro Diya,.

Ab Duniya Samajhti Hai Kamzor Mujhe,.
Dene Lagi Hai, Gham Kuch Aur Mujhe,.

"Sajid" Roshan Sitaara Hai Mehfill Ka,.
"Azeem To, Patthar Hai Mohabbat Ki Mazil Ka,.

Yunhi "Sajid" Duniya Ko Ujaala Dena,.
Aur Logon Ko Mere Haal, Ka Ishaara Dena,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-

Milta rahe aap logo ka sath bs itani duaa karte hain...
Dhadak jaye kisi ke gam me dil to vahi kehalata hai,
Varna Dil toh pathhar ke bhi huaa karte hain...
Dekhe hai zamane me lakh Shayar hamne,
Par bahoot kam log hain jo dilo ko chhua karte hain ...

Shukriya Sajid Sahab!!!
Shukriya Jaanasheenji!!!
Aap Sabhi Logo ka Tahe Dil se Shukriya!!!


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Re: ~Door Jate huye~

« Reply #10 on: December 01, 2008, 01:43:46 PM »

Quote from: pankshivam on December 01, 2008, 01:19:28 PM

U Are Welcome,.
And Nice One Again,.

Saath Hain Hum Tumhare, Tumhe Manzil Tak Pahoonchaayenge,.
Manzil Ki Khushi Paakar Kahin Bhool Na Jaana, Hum Tumhe Na Bhool Paayenge,.

Har Khushi Meri Tumse Hi Jurdi Hai "Jaan",.
Tum Jo Rooth Jaao, To Beshaq, Marr Jaayenge,.

Dil Ko Choo Jaaye Waisi Shayari To Nahi Aati,.
Lekin Dheere Dheere, Apna Haal Aapko Sunaayenge,.

Sunkar Mera Haal, Shayad Aapke Dil Se Aaah Nikle,.
Shayari Ko zariya Banaakar, Aapke Dil Mein Bas Jaayenge,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-


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