doston is line ko padiye jara

by salil2002 on May 02, 2009, 07:49:52 AM
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salil2002
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doston ek line deemaag main aayi hai chahta hoon aap sab bhi oose pade aur apna apna khayal uske saath pesh kare




sheeshe se todte hai hum apna dil, tum kyun ilzaam lete ho
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Sadia Raja
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2009, 07:53:14 AM »

v.nice MashaAllah...


sheesha to hota hi tootne k liye hai, phir yeh ilzam kesa aur shikayat kesi..!!!
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Sadia Raja
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2009, 07:55:23 AM »
aur jahan tak dil ki baat hai, dil kabhi apna nahi hota
wo to kisi aur ki amanat hoti hai jo hame sonp di hoti hai... Usual Smile
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k.shael
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2009, 07:58:37 AM »
Kya hogi halat mere dil ki tere jaane ke baad,
Aaine pe pathar gira ke dekhna...

Shally.
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Sadia Raja
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2009, 08:02:35 AM »
gr8 very nice shally..!!!
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k.shael
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2009, 08:16:16 AM »
gr8 very nice shally..!!!

Shukriya Sadiya Ji,

Shally.
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2009, 10:41:30 AM »
Salil Ji aapka khayal bada achchha laga
Mubarak ho

Shally Ji aapka jawab to lajawab hai
Bahut bahut mubarak ho

SARVESH RASTOGI
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k.shael
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2009, 10:45:58 AM »
Salil Ji aapka khayal bada achchha laga
Mubarak ho

Shally Ji aapka jawab to lajawab hai
Bahut bahut mubarak ho

SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh Ji,

Aapne pasandh kiya.

Shally.
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partap
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2009, 10:51:51 AM »
Khush kismat ho jo todte ho sise se dil ,
Yanhan to naseeb hoti hai bahut muskil,
roj sota hun bas phank dhul ke katare ,
door sise ke par hoti hai sise ki mahafil !!

Partap , New Delhi.

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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2009, 10:56:48 AM »
Mein aaine ki tarah ho dekhoge mujhe to khud ko hi paoge,
Todoge mujhe to khud bhi toot kar choor choor ho jaoge...

Shally.
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2009, 11:06:19 AM »
Sheese se todte hain hum apna dil,tum kyun ilzaam lete ho..
dono ki kismat me hai tut kar bikharana, tum yun hi muft me kyun badnaam hote ho
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salil2002
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2009, 12:25:21 PM »
Mein aaine ki tarah ho dekhoge mujhe to khud ko hi paoge,
Todoge mujhe to khud bhi toot kar choor choor ho jaoge...

Shally.

Khush kismat ho jo todte ho sise se dil ,
Yanhan to naseeb hoti hai bahut muskil,
roj sota hun bas phank dhul ke katare ,
door sise ke par hoti hai sise ki mahafil !!

Partap , New Delhi.


Salil Ji aapka khayal bada achchha laga
Mubarak ho

Shally Ji aapka jawab to lajawab hai
Bahut bahut mubarak ho

SARVESH RASTOGI
Kya hogi halat mere dil ki tere jaane ke baad,
Aaine pe pathar gira ke dekhna...

Shally.

v.nice MashaAllah...


sheesha to hota hi tootne k liye hai, phir yeh ilzam kesa aur shikayat kesi..!!!
aur jahan tak dil ki baat hai, dil kabhi apna nahi hota
wo to kisi aur ki amanat hoti hai jo hame sonp di hoti hai... Usual Smile


sadia ji, shally , partap ji bahut achche............sabne bahut achcha likha magar aap logon ne theek se samjha nahin is thread main jo pehli line di huyi ka uski agli line likhna thi
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salil2002
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2009, 12:26:43 PM »
Sheese se todte hain hum apna dil,tum kyun ilzaam lete ho..
dono ki kismat me hai tut kar bikharana, tum yun hi muft me kyun badnaam hote ho
bahut achche jannat aapne theek se pada aur ........ek bahut hi ummda sher nazar kiya uske liye shukriya
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angel4u
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2009, 01:18:04 PM »
Bahut khoob salil, a nice thread, baaqi sabne bhi bahut achha likha hia. ...


sheeshe se bikhar gaye hia khwaab mere kirchi kirchi banke,
thokaro se nahi, ye toote hai teri nazuk si bewafayi se...
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Roja
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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2009, 01:33:24 PM »
Bahut khoob salil, a nice thread, baaqi sabne bhi bahut achha likha hia. ...


sheeshe se bikhar gaye hia khwaab mere kirchi kirchi banke,
thokaro se nahi, ye toote hai teri nazuk si bewafayi se...

Nice thread... Bahut accha likha esp JJ dear and Angel  Thumbs UP
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