DUA-E-GARIB (Nazam)... "MohaN"

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DUA-E-GARIB

Fizaaoon mein harash kaa pehraa thaa
          Har su mohabbat kaa rang gehraa thaa

Har taraf bahaar-e-ishq hee chhaai thee
        Gulon pe rangat-e-laal hee barmaai thee

Nazar bhi paigaam-e-ishrat de rahi thee
         Har khwaahish bhi karvaten le rahi thee

Dilon mein kuchh jawaani sii aayi thee
          Fizaa khushboo khushboo chhaai thee

Zamin pe thee mendakon kee tar.trahat
         Asman pe thee taaron kee tam.tamahat

Papiharaa koi nagmein gaa rahaa thaa
         Kahin chashmaa raag sunaa rahaa thaa

Sakoot-e-shab tilsam rang-o-boo thaa
             Taranam hee taranam harsu hee thaa

Dil.ko machaltii sadaa aarahii thee
            Musalsal ruhon ko tarhpaa rahin thee

Umeedon pe chhaai thee ek rawaangi
           Umangon mein samaai thee dewaangi

Auzaanon kee sadaaein aa.rahin thinh
             Duaaein dil se maangi jaa rahin thinh

Ibaadat mein koi khalal naa ho yaa rab
         Qayaamat tak hee banni rahe yeh shab

Khuda yeh sadaaein kahan suntaa hai
           MohaN dua-e-garib kahan suntaa hai

Surindar. N                      "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2016, 05:09:26 AM »
waah bohut khub likha hai sir bohut umdha
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2016, 06:13:28 AM »
DUA-E-GARIB

Fizaaoon mein harash kaa pehraa thaa
          Har su mohabbat kaa rang gehraa thaa

Har taraf bahaar-e-ishq hee chhaai thee
        Gulon pe rangat-e-laal hee barmaai thee

Nazar bhi paigaam-e-ishrat de rahi thee
         Har khwaahish bhi karvaten le rahi thee

Dilon mein kuchh jawaani sii aayi thee
          Fizaa khushboo khushboo chhaai thee

Zamin pe thee mendakon kee tar.trahat
         Asman pe thee taaron kee tam.tamahat

Papiharaa koi nagmein gaa rahaa thaa
         Kahin chashmaa raag sunaa rahaa thaa

Sakoot-e-shab tilsam rang-o-boo thaa
             Taranam hee taranam harsu hee thaa

Dil.ko machaltii sadaa aarahii thee
            Musalsal ruhon ko tarhpaa rahin thee

Umeedon pe chhaai thee ek rawaangi
           Umangon mein samaai thee dewaangi

Auzaanon kee sadaaein aa.rahin thinh
             Duaaein dil se maangi jaa rahin thinh

Ibaadat mein koi khalal naa ho yaa rab
         Qayaamat tak hee banni rahe yeh shab

Khuda yeh sadaaein kahan suntaa hai
           MohaN dua-e-garib kahan suntaa hai

Surindar. N                      "MohaN"



janaab qafiye aur radeef  kaa ehtamaam hota hai ghazal mein jo ki yahaan nahin hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2016, 03:47:42 AM »
waah bohut khub likha hai sir bohut umdha

bahut shukria Saahill Sahib.
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2016, 04:57:23 AM »

janaab qafiye aur radeef  kaa ehtamaam hota hai ghazal mein jo ki yahaan nahin hai Applause Applause Applause
Adil Sahib bahut shukria for correcting me, I hope you like it as a nazam.
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«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2016, 03:15:37 AM »
DUA-E-GARIB

Fizaaoon mein harash kaa pehraa thaa
          Har su mohabbat kaa rang gehraa thaa

Har taraf bahaar-e-ishq hee chhaai thee
        Gulon pe rangat-e-laal hee barmaai thee

Nazar bhi paigaam-e-ishrat de rahi thee
         Har khwaahish bhi karvaten le rahi thee

Dilon mein kuchh jawaani sii aayi thee
          Fizaa khushboo khushboo chhaai thee

Zamin pe thee mendakon kee tar.trahat
         Asman pe thee taaron kee tam.tamahat

Papiharaa koi nagmein gaa rahaa thaa
         Kahin chashmaa raag sunaa rahaa thaa

Sakoot-e-shab tilsam rang-o-boo thaa
             Taranam hee taranam harsu hee thaa

Dil.ko machaltii sadaa aarahii thee
            Musalsal ruhon ko tarhpaa rahin thee

Umeedon pe chhaai thee ek rawaangi
           Umangon mein samaai thee dewaangi

Auzaanon kee sadaaein aa.rahin thinh
             Duaaein dil se maangi jaa rahin thinh

Ibaadat mein koi khalal naa ho yaa rab
         Qayaamat tak hee banni rahe yeh shab

Khuda yeh sadaaein kahan suntaa hai
           MohaN dua-e-garib kahan suntaa hai

Surindar. N                      "MohaN"

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2016, 09:21:02 AM »
Waaaaaah waaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2016, 03:34:08 AM »
Waaaaaah waaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Rangila Jee.
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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