Dunia se pyar chupa rakha hai

by Pooja on January 17, 2008, 09:00:52 PM
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Pooja
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Teri tasveer ko dil mai saja rakha hai
Humare payar ko dunia se chupa rakha hai

Atte ho bahoot yaad her pal is dil ko
Ansuo ko apne ander hi daba rakha hai

Mangi thi judai khud hi, Magar
Tumko kaha khud se juda rakha hai

Msuhkil hai bahoot tere dil se wapis anna
Iss liye yah zalim nakab laga rakha hai

Teri tasveer ko dil mai saja rakha hai
Humare payar ko dunia se chupa rakha hai!!

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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2008, 10:29:52 PM »
Simply Beautiful, PoojaJi.
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2008, 10:31:31 PM »
shukaria Ravi ji!!
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sagar_0777
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2008, 05:05:59 AM »
Zakhm itne gehre hain, Izhaar kya karein,
Hum khud nishana ban gaye, waar kya karein,
Mar gaye hum, magar khuli rahi aankhen,
Ab is se zyaada, unka intezar kya karen….
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2008, 06:53:34 AM »
Simply Beautiful... Pooja Di... Usual Smile

Nice Reply Sagar...
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faiiz_76
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2008, 11:23:40 AM »
very nice pooja ..
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alka sharma
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2008, 01:30:46 PM »
very nice pooja ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2008, 02:55:20 PM »
nice lines sagar ji.
Thanks Shikha, afiz and Alka!!

dil ko nahi hasrat ab mil jaane ki
bas ik umind hai tere lout ane ki
judai ki tasveer abhi bhi yah dil bana na paya hai
jab bhi dekha khud ko tere sung hi paya hai
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thycreator
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2008, 01:24:32 AM »
Teri tasveer ko dil mai saja rakha hai
Humare payar ko dunia se chupa rakha hai

Atte ho bahoot yaad her pal is dil ko
Ansuo ko apne ander hi daba rakha hai

Mangi thi judai khud hi, Magar
Tumko kaha khud se juda rakha hai

Msuhkil hai bahoot tere dil se wapis anna
Iss liye yah zalim nakab laga rakha hai

Teri tasveer ko dil mai saja rakha hai
Humare payar ko dunia se chupa rakha hai!!



Wah wah Pooja............bahut hi accha likha hai.....

Kehte hain sacche pyar ki keemat nahi rahi,
Har roz bhare bazar hai ye be-aabroo bika..

Nazar na lage mere masoom dil ko jamane ki,
Iss liye apne pyar ko dunia se chupa rakha..

Dar hai itna iss dil mein dard-e-muhabbat se,
ki jaam-e-wafa bhi humne dar dar ke hi chakha..
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2008, 03:21:26 AM »
Teri tasveer ko dil mai saja rakha hai
Humare payar ko dunia se chupa rakha hai

Atte ho bahoot yaad her pal is dil ko
Ansuo ko apne ander hi daba rakha hai

Mangi thi judai khud hi, Magar
Tumko kaha khud se juda rakha hai

Msuhkil hai bahoot tere dil se wapis anna
Iss liye yah zalim nakab laga rakha hai

Teri tasveer ko dil mai saja rakha hai
Humare payar ko dunia se chupa rakha hai!!

Her ek line dil ko chu gaya hai. Bahut umda likha hai
aapne pooja di
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honeyrose
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2008, 06:13:30 AM »
Bohat koobh pooja ..

Dunia seh chupa hai mera pyaar..
dard-de-dil ka afsaanah..
Ban gaya hai yeh pyaar..
Tujhe iss dil peh basa kar...
Karthi hoon tumara intezaar..
Dhadkane meri dil ki kehe thi hai.
Bas saath janmon ka wada..
Yeh letey hai mera pyaar
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ajjju.
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2008, 07:17:38 AM »
Teri tasveer ko dil mai saja rakha hai
Humare payar ko dunia se chupa rakha hai

Atte ho bahoot yaad her pal is dil ko
Ansuo ko apne ander hi daba rakha hai

Mangi thi judai khud hi, Magar
Tumko kaha khud se juda rakha hai

Msuhkil hai bahoot tere dil se wapis anna
Iss liye yah zalim nakab laga rakha hai

Teri tasveer ko dil mai saja rakha hai
Humare payar ko dunia se chupa rakha hai!!


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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2008, 08:38:11 AM »
bahut khoob,sab ne khoob likha...

jis dagar pe hum chale the
woh raasta hi dushvaar tha

jab yaad karta hoon usse beete hue waqt ko
to sochta hoon,do kadam chal kar rukh jaana,
kya yehi pyaar tha???

kaash woh samaj jaate chahat hamari
"khwaish" ki har inkaar mein bhi ikraar tha
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lovely_ash
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2008, 02:44:54 PM »
bhoot nice pooja tanx
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2008, 09:03:52 PM »
sagar, shikha, faiiz, Alka, Amit, rosa, honeyrose, ajjju and khwaish ji.. bahoot bahoot shukaria!!!

Good one Amit, Honeyrose and khwaish ji!!!
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