Ehsaas-E-Kalam

by @kaash on May 06, 2009, 02:35:39 PM
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Kalam ka kaam hai chalna ye kuch na kuch likhna chahti hai,har ehsaas ko mahsus kar sachha sukoon pana chahti hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 02:42:45 PM »
Bahoot acha likha kaash ji!
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 03:07:00 PM »
Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2009, 04:01:09 PM »
Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2009, 07:09:23 PM »
good collection kaash
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2009, 08:47:15 PM »
Very Good Kaash Ji
But where is the Collection
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2009, 09:14:35 PM »
Thanks Sarvesh ji...these are my shers(two liners),slowly 2 it will become a bunch n a collection of d same..hence i named it COLLECTION
bahut khub kaash ji.
ye to shuraat h abi to apko bahut khuch likhna h.aise hi likhte rhiye.
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2009, 11:50:20 PM »
Very nice ones Kaash Ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2009, 09:34:19 PM »
Good collections @kaash ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2009, 01:24:22 AM »
nice Collection Kaash ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2009, 01:28:10 AM »
KAASH JEE...
BAHUT HE ACCHE COLLECTION HAI...
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«Reply #11 on: May 15, 2009, 02:04:19 AM »
Bahoot he jayada ajeeb mood main hu ajj.. please kuch galat lage to maafi chahugi..

apki sari shayri parr kar ek bahoot suni hui line man main aa rahi hai... sath main kuch mix kar rahi hu

Ashar-a-yaar mere un to jamane ke liye hai
kuch shair fakat khud ka jee behlaane ke liye hai
sun kar kabhi kiya karte the hum bhi wah wah jin per
Ajj lage wo he khokhle, waqat per, waqat ko samjhane ke liye hai

sun kar kabhi beh jaate the ansoo jin shabdo per
ajj wo shabd khud ko hansaane ke liye hai
badali nahi pooja, yah to waqat ki baat hai
dard wahi, shabad wahin, sirf mayne badal jaane ke liye hai

Ashar-a-yaar mere un to jamane ke liye hai
kuch shair fakat khud ka jee behlaane ke liye hai....
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«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2009, 02:10:34 AM »
KUCH BAATIEN KHUDH SE BHI CHUPPAYE BETHI HOUN
MEIN NA JAANEY KIA KIA BHULAYE BEHTI HOUN

ARSA E DARAZ SE MEIN ROZ SHAB APNEY
DAR PAR NAZREIN TIKKAYE BETHI HOUN

YAAD HEE NAI KAB SE MAGAR AAJ BHI
MEIN TERE AANEY KI UMEED LAGAYE BETHI HOUN

TERE INTEZAR MEY KANT RAHEY HAIN DIN O RAAT
MEIN HAR SHAAM O SEHR KA HISAAB LAGAYE BETHI HOUN

KAHEIN KOI TUJH PAR UNGLI NA UTHA LAE
ISSLIYE HAR MEHFIL MEY MUSKURAYE BETHI HOUN

SAWAALAT CHAHE JITNAY HOUN MUJHSE
MEIN KAHAN KOI JAWAB LIYE BETHI HOUN

MERE BHI KITNAY KHWAAB KITNAY ARMAAN THAY
PAR AAJ SAB KHAAK BANAYE BETHI HOUN

EK DIN TUM MILO GAYE TOH DEKHAOUNGI TUMKO
KITNAY NASOOR DIL MEY SAJAYE BETHI HOUN

KAB KHATAM HOGA AYE KHUDA YEH SAFAR MERA
MEIN YEH KISS SHAKHS KI AAS LAGAYE BETHI HOUN??!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2009, 02:49:02 AM »

Waah bahot khoob likha hai Pooja ji aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley yehi to naturality hai aapke likhne me ki har ehsaas ko lafz ki shakl de deti hain aap..aur kai mayno me behad sahi likha hai aapne..koshish karunga kuch antarman se dil se jawaab likhne ki thodi der me

Intzaar rahega apke likhe ka!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2009, 12:52:55 PM »
Nice work Kaash ji
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