----- /// Ek ansuni fariyaad /// ------

by klaskar on August 22, 2010, 09:43:47 AM

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main baag ka gulaab nahi, van ka koi phool hoon main,
maathe ka main taaz nahi, charno ka koi dhool hoon main,

kya paoge mujhko paake, ek bhatka hua musaafir hoon main,
apne jeewan ke hi safar me, jaane kahaan aaj gum hoon main,

kaanch ke band botal me sasti si koi sharaab hoon main,
mujhse dil na lagaana tum aadat koi kharaab hoon main,

jiski koi disha nahi, saagar ki aisi lahar hoon main,
suhani si koi shaam nahi, jalti hui ek dopahar hoon main,

mujhse mohabbat na karna tum, bhooli hui koi yaad hoon main,
har kisi ne thukraya jise, aisi ansuni fariyaad hoon main...

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: ----- /// Ek ansuni fariyaad /// ------

«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2010, 10:25:40 AM »

waah ji waah kapil ji bahut behetareen kavita likhi hai apne bahut khoob...


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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2010, 10:37:30 AM »

Bahut Khoob Kapil Ji..


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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2010, 10:57:32 AM »

HMMMMMMM.....

DARD AUR NIRASHA SE BHARI HAI AAPKI YE POST KLASKAR JI....

WORDINGS ..EXAMPLES JO AAPNE DIYE KISIKO DESCRIBE KARNE BHT ACHCHE HAIN...


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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2010, 01:43:08 PM »

Very Nice Poetry... Kalskar Ji ! Very Nice Creation... !


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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2010, 08:51:56 PM »

Klaskar jee Aadaab!

Bahut achchi koshish hai yeh aapki.....
Aur aapke khayaal bhi bahut achche se samne aaye..
Achcha likha hai.....
Daad kabool kiijiye.......

Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye........


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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2010, 09:48:54 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji....!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 22, 2010, 10:25:40 AM

waah ji waah kapil ji bahut behetareen kavita likhi hai apne bahut khoob...


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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2010, 09:49:14 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji....!!!

Quote from: khwaish on August 22, 2010, 10:37:30 AM

Bahut Khoob Kapil Ji..


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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2010, 09:49:43 PM »

Thank you so much Naresh ji...!!!

Quote from: Anshumali on August 22, 2010, 01:43:08 PM

Very Nice Poetry... Kalskar Ji ! Very Nice Creation... !


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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2010, 09:50:19 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2010, 07:21:41 PM »

Kapil Dost, badi dukhi kavita hai yeh..ek aise shaks ki awaz sunayi hai apne jo behad nirash hai zindagi se..daad kabool karein..Dil ko choo gayi.. Applause


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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2010, 02:07:59 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on August 23, 2010, 07:21:41 PM

Kapil Dost, badi dukhi kavita hai yeh..ek aise shaks ki awaz sunayi hai apne jo behad nirash hai zindagi se..daad kabool karein..Dil ko choo gayi.. Applause