~~Ek Koshish... Tujhe Bhoolne ki~~ (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on April 19, 2007, 05:22:09 PM
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तुझे भूलने की कोिशश में,
जब िदल ये िज़द पे आ गया,
मैं आँख मूँद के बैठ गयी,
तू ख़याल पे िफर छा गया...

ये धड़कन कहीं रुक जाए ना,
मेरी नब्ज़ ठहर ना जाए कहीं,
तूने वक़्त िकया मेरा लम्हा लम्हा,
मगर मौत को आसान बना गया...

मेरी ह्र दलील को िकया अनसुनी,
मेरी फ़िरयाद भी तो सुनी नहीं,
मैं हैरान हँू, हाँ कुछ परेशान हँ,ू
ऐसा फ़ैसला तू मुझे सुना गया...

मुझे चाँद की कभी तलब ना थी,
मुझे सूरज की भी ़िफक्र नहीं,
बस आँख खोलना ही चाहते थे हम,
मगर तू रोशनी ही बुझा गया....

बेशक भूलना तुझे चाहा बहुत,
हँस कर कभी, रो कर कभी,
दे कर ये आँसुओं की सौगात मुझे,
तू दामन अपना बचा गया....

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Tujhe bhoolne ki koshish mein,
Jab dil ye zid pe aa gaya,
Main aankh moond ke baith gayi,
Tu khayaal pe phir chaa gaya...

Ye dhadkan kahin ruk jaaye naa,
Meri nabz Thehr naa jaaye kahin,
Tune Waqt kiya mera lamha lamha,
Magar maut ko aasaan bana gaya...

Meri har daleel ko kiya ansuni,
Meri fariyaad bhi to suni nahin,
Main Hairaan hu, haa Kuch Pareshaan hu,
Aisa Faislaa tu mujhe suna gaya...

Mujhe chaand ki kabhi talab na thi,
Mujhe suraj ki bhi fikr nahin,
Bas aankh kholna hi chahte the ham,
Magar Tu roshni hi bujha gaya...

Beshak bhoolna tujhe chaha bahut,
Hans kar kabhi, ro kar kabhi,
De kar ye aansuon  ki saugaat mujhe,
Tu daaman apna bacha gaya ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2007, 12:38:24 AM »
It's Beautiful Shikha..
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2007, 08:57:36 AM »
Bohot pyaara likha hai Shikha.....and so true sad5
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2007, 11:10:50 AM »
haan ye sach hai ki bhool chuka hoon tujhko
lekin mere tute hue dil ko tera intezaar wahi hai
yaad na sahi ab mujhko woh muskurata chehra tera
inn jukhi hui si palko ko tera didar wahi hai
chahe bhool chuka hoon manzil iss safar ki
uss sunsaan raaste per lekin meri raftaar wahi hai
ek saya he to hai apna iss bheed mein
rehta hai saath hamesha bas wafadaar wahi hai
ab jab uthne lagi hai ungliyaan zamaane ki mujhe per
to lagta hai jo bichhad gaya kabka mujhse mera madadgar wahi hai
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2007, 12:02:41 PM »
Accha likha shikha12 ..

7.5/10 !

TDTS .. yours good also..

7/10
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2007, 12:28:18 PM »
Just Fantastic Shikha and TDTS bhai....!!!

Wafa-daar haseenaon ne.....
Kayi AShiQuon ka Dil chalani kia hai.....

Kyu Dhadakta hai tu bhi banke murda seene me.....
Bata aakhir maine konsa Gunaah kia hai.....!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2007, 04:16:39 PM »
roz tujhe bhool jane ka khud se wada karke..
khud roz hi tod diya karta hu..
tu kya jane o bewafa sanam ..
mai tujhe kitna yad karta hu..

sochta hu roz k ek barr tujhse milkar kahi....
bhooljane ka wada le lu tujhse bhi...
magar aapne or wado ki tarah is wade ko bhi roz bhula deta hu..
tu samajh na saki to kya hua mai pyar to tujhi se karta hu..
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2007, 01:30:02 PM »
Excellent Shikha.... har bar ki tarah iss baar bhi bahut achha likha hai....  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2007, 04:47:19 PM »
Good job Shikha ...
Its really fantastic and painful ...
Keep it up ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2007, 04:52:37 PM »
Wo ajnabee nahi thi mere sheher mein,
Phir bhi gali gali pata puchhti rahi wo mera,
Lagta tha jaise mujhe wo badnaam karna chahti thi,
Par phir kyu sabse naam chhupati rahi wo mera ...
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2007, 09:50:10 PM »
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Tujhe bhoolne ki koshish mein,
Jab dil ye zid pe aa gaya,
Main aankh moond ke baith gayi,
Tu khayaal pe phir chaa gaya...

Ye dhadkan kahin ruk jaaye naa,
Meri nabz Thehr naa jaaye kahin,
Tune Waqt kiya mera lamha lamha,
Magar maut ko aasaan bana gaya...

Meri har daleel ko kiya ansuni,
Meri fariyaad bhi to suni nahin,
Main Hairaan hu, haa Kuch Pareshaan hu,
Aisa Faislaa tu mujhe suna gaya...

Mujhe chaand ki kabhi talab na thi,
Mujhe suraj ki bhi fikr nahin,
Bas aankh kholna hi chahte the ham,
Magar Tu roshni hi bujha gaya...

Beshak bhoolna tujhe chaha bahut,
Hans kar kabhi, ro kar kabhi,
De kar ye aansuon ki saugaat mujhe,
Tu daaman apna bacha gaya ...


kya baat hai dil ke kareeb rachna apki...

na tu de saka mujhe koi ek pal
jise yaad karke jindahi gujar du
mein tere liye jo hashu kabhi
yaisa koi na lamha dilaa gya

teri chahat hame bahut rahi
chahane se tujhe kya fayda fayada
meri chahtoin ka hai ye silaa
ttu mujhe aaj itna rulaa gya...

sakhi

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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2007, 11:03:26 AM »
bahut khoob...shikha..chintan....sakhi....aur sabne achha likha hai.....


छलके तो थे मेरी आँखो से अशक़ो के बादल
भीगा नही तेरे दिल का दामन तो कोई बात नही

चले थे एक ही राहा में हम तेरे हमराही बन के
अब तुम देख के अजनबी बन जाओ तो कोई बात नही !!


ranju...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #12 on: April 26, 2007, 08:49:29 AM »
Thanks a lot Aryan, Talat, Chintan, Ricky, Gaurav, Tushar, Jagdish, JHL, Sakhi and Ranju di... Usual Smile


Very Very Nicely written... Chintan, Gaurav, Tushar, JHL, Sakhi, Ranju di... सभी ने बहुत अच्छा िलखा है... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 26, 2007, 09:43:06 AM »

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«Reply #14 on: April 26, 2007, 11:06:49 PM »
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 Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Really nice again..
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