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Tere kahne per hum aitbaar to kar lenge
pehle tum apni mohabbat per mujhe ekhtiyar to do
hum jalayenge teri mohabbat ki sham aakhri saans chalne tak
kuch pal apni zindagi ka muje udhaar to do.........
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2006, 05:01:56 PM » |
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Tere kahne per hum aitbaar to kar lenge
pehle tum apni mohabbat per mujhe ekhtiyar to do
hum jalayenge teri mohabbat ki sham aakhri saans chalne tak
kuch pal apni zindagi ka muje udhaar to do......... Marvalous Bhai jaan...Nice to See u back....after a long time |
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2006, 06:00:19 PM » |
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Nice One Waheed... Good to see you back...  |
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2006, 06:24:26 AM » |
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bahut khub waheed ji......
ek umar se khamoshi si hai is dil mein
koi toh aa ke ek dastak ab de jaaye
jee chuke hain hum bahut andhero mein ab tak
koi toh aa ke ab mohbbat ka diya jalaaye !!
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2006, 03:58:17 PM » |
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Gud Job Ranju
Ek Pal ki thi Zindagani......
Isme bhi humne apne Dil se ki manmaani.....
Rutt badli.....badli yeh Fizayen.....
Par Shaam kar gayi bewaqt beimaani.....
Nazaare aur the par Palkein toh jhapkengi hee.....
Phir bhi naa jaane woh Khawaab dekhne ko meri yeh Aankhein na maani......
Ek Pal ki thi Zindgani......
ISme bhi humne apne Dil se ki manmaani.......!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2006, 04:00:59 AM » |
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nice one gauarv
jeene ki chaha mein hum yun hi jee liye
dil ne uthaaye hain jab bhi sawal kai
hamne naam likha tera apne haatho per
aur jaise kai dhokhe apni kismat ko de diye
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2006, 05:49:30 PM » |
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Bahut hi likha hai Waheedbhai, Ranjana and B.Shayar ...
Keep it up ...
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2006, 05:53:31 PM » |
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Dhokhe kayi khaaye hai humne zindagi aur maut se,
Kasoor hamara hai kismat ko hum kaise ilzaam de,
Dil ne utha rakhe hai saare dard apne kandhe pe,
Ab is thake badnseeb dil ko aur kya hum kaam de ...
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2006, 07:11:04 AM » |
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Shukriya Gaurav.....Ranjana.........Aryan,........ JHL...... very nixce Ranjana.....JHL.........
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2006, 09:26:00 AM » |
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shukriya waheed .....JHL bahut khoob ...........
yeh dil bhi ajab se kaam karta hai
jahan na aana chahiye unka khayaal
wahi per bas unko hi yaad karta hai
jo beet chuka us per sochta hai bahut
jo hone wala hai us per yeh yakeen nahi karta hai
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«Reply #10 on: August 13, 2006, 09:38:08 AM » |
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ur welcome Ranjana........ excellent reply.....
Jindagi bhar tere ishq mein khud ko jalaker kya mila
ab sunsaan ghar aur meri tanhayee saath rahti hai..
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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2006, 10:25:24 AM » |
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too good.....
rehne do in tanhayion ko yun hi saath saath
kam se kam koi toh hai jiske saath yeh zindagi ab basar hoti hai
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2006, 10:32:52 AM » |
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gud job Waheed bhai and Ranju
Na badli hawa.....na hee Sheher ka Nazara badla hai......
Dhoondti ho tum jiske Nishaan bas wahi armaan badla hai.........!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2006, 10:48:48 AM » |
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badle armaano mein bhi hum usi khushi ko talash karte hain
jiske naam se hum aaj tak jeete hain aur marte hain
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«Reply #14 on: August 13, 2006, 10:50:36 AM » |
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MArna nahi Jeena Chahate hai hum Sirf tumhare liye.....
Chahe ho Khushi ya ho Dard bas bana ke Jaam peena hai tumhare liye.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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