ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

by soudagar on April 07, 2012, 02:38:57 AM

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«Reply #15 on: April 07, 2012, 09:44:18 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on April 07, 2012, 09:25:11 AM

Sudaagar saheb aaj tak maine jitnee bhee achhee achhee chezen padhee hai aapkee in char lines kaa shumaar unhee men hai daad kaa number aur badhaaai dono qubool kare

aapne yeh shabd mere liye kahe...........isse badi baat mere liye aur kuch nahi ho sakti...jab maine yoindia join kia tab tak mujhe kuch bhi nahi pata tha par main dheere dheere aap sab se sikh raha hoon aur apne jazbato ko shabdo ka roop dene ki koshish ka rraha hoon...


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #16 on: April 07, 2012, 10:18:58 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on April 07, 2012, 02:38:57 AM

Ek samundar hai jo mere kabu me hai
Or ek katra hai jo mujhse sambhala nahi jata
Ek umar hai jo mujhe bitani hai tere bagair
Or ek lamha hai jo mujhse gujara nahi jata

Waaah Waaah Waaah!!!

Bahut Khooob Soudagar Ji...

Vakaai Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Sher..


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #17 on: April 07, 2012, 10:21:54 AM »

बहुत सुन्दर, हमारी दाद कुबूल फरमाइए

Quote from: soudagar on April 07, 2012, 02:38:57 AM

Ek samundar hai jo mere kabu me hai
Or ek katra hai jo mujhse sambhala nahi jata
Ek umar hai jo mujhe bitani hai tere bagair
Or ek lamha hai jo mujhse gujara nahi jata


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #18 on: April 07, 2012, 05:01:57 PM »

Bahut Umda Saudagar jee

Hum bhee Saini sir kee tareef se ittifaaq rakhte hai..
bahut aala darja ka khayaal chipaa hai isme..

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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #19 on: April 07, 2012, 05:18:34 PM »

chaar line me itna kuch kah diya aapne....har lafz har alfaaz ko daad.... Usual Smile


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #20 on: April 09, 2012, 03:17:14 AM »

Aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya................
Bekarar ji, MKV Ji, Prakash meet ji, doli ji , sarfira ji aap sabhi ka aabhar prakat karte hai.....yeh sab aapke hi qalam padhkar sikhte hai jazbat hai par bayani ki kami hai hamare pass.....

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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #21 on: April 09, 2012, 03:19:46 AM »

Khawahish ji aur saini sir.sahil ji..........isme koi shaq nahi yahan jyadatar umda shayar hai.....

par aapki kalam ka bada gehra asar hota hai jis wajh se jazbato ko shabdo ka roop dene ki koshish karte hai.......aapka baht baht dhanywad...... notworthy


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«Reply #23 on: May 04, 2012, 01:32:14 PM »

shukriya hridev ji


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #24 on: April 11, 2014, 01:36:44 AM »

sir bahut khoob likha hai...sir ek request k saath permission leni thi k agar main aapki in lines ko use krke ek agan bnana chaahun toh lyaa is naachiz ko izzazat hai???