ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

by soudagar on April 07, 2012, 02:38:57 AM

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Ek samundar hai jo mere kabu me hai
Or ek katra hai jo mujhse sambhala nahi jata
Ek umar hai jo mujhe bitani hai tere bagair
Or ek lamha hai jo mujhse gujara nahi jata


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2012, 03:23:19 AM »

Wow pahli line bhut jabardast h


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2012, 03:28:20 AM »

waah janab


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2012, 04:53:08 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on April 07, 2012, 02:38:57 AM

Ek samundar hai jo mere kabu me hai
Or ek katra hai jo mujhse sambhala nahi jata
Ek umar hai jo mujhe bitani hai tere bagair
Or ek lamha hai jo mujhse gujara nahi jata

Waaaaah! Waaaaaaaaaaaah! bahut khoob Soudagar Saheb, bahut thode lafzon mein bahut kuch kah gaye aap.

Applause


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2012, 05:02:28 AM »

khub..


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2012, 05:30:16 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on April 07, 2012, 02:38:57 AM

Ek samundar hai jo mere kabu me hai
Or ek katra hai jo mujhse sambhala nahi jata
Ek umar hai jo mujhe bitani hai tere bagair
Or ek lamha hai jo mujhse gujara nahi jata


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soudagar

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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2012, 05:30:57 AM »

baht baht shukriya aap sab ka wave


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2012, 05:45:09 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on April 07, 2012, 02:38:57 AM

Ek samundar hai jo mere kabu me hai
Or ek katra hai jo mujhse sambhala nahi jata
Ek umar hai jo mujhe bitani hai tere bagair
Or ek lamha hai jo mujhse gujara nahi jata

BAhut bahut khoob Acchey khayalat hain daad kabool farmaiye


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Quateel Ahmad

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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2012, 06:00:20 AM »

Bahut Khoob!!


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Jagan Kishan

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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2012, 06:28:18 AM »

great lines, short and effective


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dolly

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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2012, 07:19:24 AM »

waah bahut khoob....


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2012, 07:43:07 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on April 07, 2012, 02:38:57 AM

Ek samundar hai jo mere kabu me hai
Or ek katra hai jo mujhse sambhala nahi jata
Ek umar hai jo mujhe bitani hai tere bagair
Or ek lamha hai jo mujhse gujara nahi jata

bahot khoob janaab--
kamaal ke aashaar kahen hain aapne
daad daad daad
!!
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
likhte rahen


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2012, 08:49:01 AM »

Simply beautiful . Congrats !!


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Re: ek smundar jo mere kabu mein hai

«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2012, 09:25:11 AM »

Sudaagar saheb aaj tak maine jitnee bhee achhee achhee chezen padhee hai aapkee in char lines kaa shumaar unhee men hai daad kaa number aur badhaaai dono qubool kare