~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~ -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: March 23, 2006, 10:50:48 PM »

Na aise kisi ka dost juda ho
Na aise kisi ko bhi mout aye
Ek kanta zindagi bhar chubhata raha
Lahoo mere jakhamo se, din raat rista raha

Na kabhi araam ayya, na hi kabhi ayega
Ek wo chehra payaara sa, zindagi bhar rulayega!!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #16 on: March 23, 2006, 10:51:08 PM »

Kayun wo aise ho gaya, aise to hona na tha’
kayun wo kho gaya, usko aise to sona na tha
Ankhon mai liye Barsaat, Dil kahin toot gaya
Uth gaya khud se bharosa, sath jo tera choot gaya!!!


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jugnu

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~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~

«Reply #17 on: March 24, 2006, 10:01:42 AM »

wah Pooja ji !! sach mein bahut accha likhti hain aap !! maine aap ki kain post padhi hain !! aapki shayari mein har rang dekhne ko milta hai ! sada yoon hi likhte rahiye !!
aapki post mein do line post kar raha hoon agar pasand na aaye to muaf kijiyega !

Aansoo na ab bahao meri mazaar pe eh sanam
baad muddat ke sakoon se so raha hoon main

zakham jitne teri chahat se mile the mujhko
nahin unka koi gila ke ab so raha hoon main

tere siva kuch or na chaha tha kabhi dil ne
tera bhi sath na mila ab so raha hoon main

umar bhar dekha jo ek khawab woh ab toot gaya
ab koi khawab na dikha ab so raha hoon main

hui muddat ke bhool gaya sara zamaana mujhko
ab tum bhi bhool jao ke ab so raha hoon main

kaun louta hai koun loutega yahan se "jugnu"
ab mujhko na tu bula ke ab so raha hoon main


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waheed_rose2004

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~~~~~~Ek wo shakas~~~~~~

«Reply #18 on: March 24, 2006, 11:01:18 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Bikhare hui wo yaande
Is bikhari zindagi mai, phir se chai
Kaise samjhau Pooja tujko
Meri khud ki samjh main na aai!!

Jo bhi hua wo kismat, kayun teri samjh na ayya
Jaanbujh kar to tune, usko nahi marwaya
Phir kayun ajj bhi, khud ko gunhgaar tune paya
Kayun ajj bhi chal rahi hai, lekar uska saaya!!

Kaise mai bhoolu, wo bari bari ankhein
Hath pakar kar maine tha usko chardna sikhaya
Wo uska hansna, wo uska muskurana
Yaad aa raha hai, wo akhiri pal, jo tha sath bitaya!!

A dost ajj bhi tu, iss dil mai rahta hai
Tarap rahi hu main, aor yah dil kahta hai
Maaf mujko karna, jo maine vachan tha sunaya
Nahi chahiye mujko yah ankhein, kayun tu laut kar na ayya!!!

Sorry dosto, ajj ek saheli ki bahoot jayada aa rahi hai, yah sab ussi ke liye hai… majak mai ek din maine kah diya tha ki apni yah bari bari ankhein mujko de de, aor usne kaha tu kahe to abhi mar jaau.. aor usi din wo accident mai sabko chor kar chali gai…. Kisi ne jab ajj yah pucha ki pata hai kon sa din hai ajj….. mujse raha nahi gaya aor maine yah sab likh diya….

oh........ bahot dukh hua yeh jaan kar sis............. isko kya kahen...shayad yeh ittifaq hai...... ya kuch aur. sad5


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Pooja

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«Reply #19 on: March 24, 2006, 03:00:08 PM »

Thanks Aryaan!!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #20 on: March 24, 2006, 06:54:49 PM »

Thanks Jugnu!! Jo dil mai atta hai wo kalam likh jaati hai. Apko acha laga, yah par kar muje bhi acha laga!! apki poem ke jawab mai kuch likh rahi hu:

Anssoo se ab yah rishta ho gaya hai
Apne hi nahi, doosre ke dard per bhi, bah jaaty hai
Jee rahe hai kuch is tarah se,
Her gum ko apna kiye jaaty hai!!

Zakham milty hai chahat se
Suna karty thy kabhi hum bhi
Ajj sunaane walo mai
Khud ka naam bhi likhy jaaty hai!!
Muddat se tum so rahe ho
Phir bhi mere dil se bol rahe ho
Mana laut kar anna hai mushkil
Per tumko bhool pana hai namumkin!!!


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izhaarkeintzaarmein

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«Reply #21 on: March 24, 2006, 10:13:08 PM »

Quote from: "jugnu"

Aansoo na ab bahao meri mazaar pe eh sanam
baad muddat ke sakoon se so raha hoon main

zakham jitne teri chahat se mile the mujhko
nahin unka koi gila ke ab so raha hoon main

tere siva kuch or na chaha tha kabhi dil ne
tera bhi sath na mila ab so raha hoon main

umar bhar dekha jo ek khawab woh ab toot gaya
ab koi khawab na dikha ab so raha hoon main

hui muddat ke bhool gaya sara zamaana mujhko
ab tum bhi bhool jao ke ab so raha hoon main

kaun louta hai koun loutega yahan se "jugnu"
ab mujhko na tu bula ke ab so raha hoon main

behtareen likha hai aapne jugnu ji

shamme na jalao ki ab so raha hoon mein
aas na lagao ki ab so raha hoon meiin
rahein tak kar kya hai haasil
khud ko samjhao ke ab so raha hoon mein
haqeeqat ki kasauti se dar lagta hai
khwab na dikhao ke ab so raha hoon mein

waqt ki chot badi hi sanjeeda hai
ki kehta hoon ki ab so raha hoon mein
par tumko bhi hain maloom ae humnawaaz
ki tanhai mein ab ro raha hoon mein


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Pooja

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«Reply #22 on: March 24, 2006, 11:29:38 PM »

Quote from: "izhaarkeintzaarmein"

Quote from: "Pooja"

Mujh se rooth kar mujko rula gaya
Ek wo shakas, nas nas mai sama gaya

Kahta hi raha, mai chala jauga ek din
Kis tarah se wo, apni baat nibha gaya

Dil mai thi muhobaat, chup magar rahi
Maine ajmaaya usko, wo mujko ajmaa gaya

Barsati hai yah nigahe, tarapti hai yah ahein
Khud ko mitta kar wo, muje zinda lash bana gaya

Mujh se rooth kar mujko rula gaya
Ek wo shakas, nas nas mai sama gaya

adaab pooja ji main bade arse se aapki shayri ka mureed raha hoon aaj pehli dafa aapki khidmat mein kuch pesh kar raha hoon

main aaj bhi wohi shaks hain jo tumko chahta tha
teri ek aansoo par qayamat dha jata tha

mere hathon ki lakeerein sirf tumhari dar tak hi to jati hai
yoon roothne ka ilzam dekar hume paraya na karo
hamari to antim saanse bhi aapko manane mein hi guzarne wali hai

Good one izhaarkeintzaarmein!!! shukariyan apko meri likhi kavita pasand aii!! Sorry muje Mureed ka matlab nahi malum. MERI URDU ITANI ACHI NAHI HAI!!


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jugnu

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«Reply #23 on: March 25, 2006, 07:40:28 AM »

Thanks Pooja ji !! bahut khoobsurat lines likhi hain aapne !!

Izhaar Ji bahut bahut sukriya aapki is zarra nawazi ke liye !! aap ne bhi
bhaut achha likha hai !!

kaise kah doon ke tanha kati zindagi apni,
tum sath na hoke bhi mere sath the har pal !

jo lamhe tere sath gujare the kabhi maine,
un lamhon ki bahaar mere sath rahi har pal !

jo saawan tum chod gaye the in do aankhon me,
us saawan ki barsat mere sath rahi har pal !

tum jo gaye chod kar to loute na phir kabhi,
mere dil ko raha hai tumhara intzaar har pal !

kaise kah doon ke tanha kati zindagi apni,
tum sath na hoke bhi mere sath the har pal !!


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«Reply #24 on: March 26, 2006, 04:42:30 AM »

pooja ji aapke dard per ansoo nikal aaye hai.... kaaash koi aisa koi aisa sabd hota jo aapko sukoon de sakta. kaash koi aisa jariya hota jo aapka dukh kam ker sakta. per humari pahuch bahut choti si hai jo waqt se nhi lad sakti aise hi samay mein hum hum aapne aapko bemaana sa samajhtein hai.us khuda ke aage kisi ka koi zor nhi chalta. lag kahtein hai jo hota hai aache ki liye hota hai lekin yadi ye aacha hai mujhe aapne kisi bhi dost ki aachai nhi chahiye. per aap aapne aapko gunahagaar naa mane ye to sabse takatwar sakqs ki margi thi jo aapko her pal is zaher ko peeker jeene ko kah raha hai.


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izhaarkeintzaarmein

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«Reply #25 on: March 26, 2006, 07:04:08 PM »

chupke chupke dheere dheere is dil mein sama gaya koi
khabar bhi na hui aur mujhko jhudka kar gaya koi
jiski khatir hum lade kiski khatir hum padhe <ji haan padhe bhi lol >
thamkar kisi aur ka daman bhi mujhko jeena sikha gaya koi

ye sher us pagal si ladki ko samarpit hai jisko paane ki chah mein maine khud ko sawara aur jab socha ki ab is layak hai ki unse baat kar sake to unhone kisi aur ka daman pakad liya


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Nino

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«Reply #26 on: March 26, 2006, 08:41:14 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

wah pooja ji bahoot khoob


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Pooja

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«Reply #27 on: March 26, 2006, 08:56:53 PM »

Quote from: "BHONDU"

kisi pal skoon nahi
kisi soch mai dum nahi
her pal yah jakham sath chalta hai
kaise badal du apna wo kal,
her pal yahin kashmkash chalta hai


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Pooja

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«Reply #28 on: March 26, 2006, 09:01:45 PM »

Quote from: "izhaarkeintzaarmein"

khabar hi na hue, kismat wo khel khila gai
na chaha jo kabhi, wo hadsa dikha gai
palt sakti shayad kisi tarah se mai
apni bebsi per, khoon ke ansoo bahati rah gai!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #29 on: March 26, 2006, 09:06:22 PM »

Quote from: "jugnu"

Thanks Nino and Bahoot khoob Jugnu!!! bahoot hi acha aor sucha likha hai apne!!!


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