Ghayal kare Ho...............Abul Asad

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Khazaan-e jazbaat chupa-e phire ho
Kuch afsaan-e janhan daba-e phire ho

Koi khanjar se kare waar, to koi talwar se
Tum jo kar-e alfazon se, so ghayal kare ho


Chashm-e nam dil figaron ki baten kare ho
Kiya khoob jazbaton ke apne paun tale kare ho
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2012, 11:20:20 PM »
Quote from: Abul Asad on February 23, 2012, 11:17:59 PM


Khazaan-e jazbaat chupa-e phire ho
Kuch afsaan-e janhan daba-e phire ho

Koi khanjar se kare waar, to koi talwar se
Tum jo kar-e alfazon se, so ghayal kare ho


Chasm-e namm, dil figaro ki baten kare ho
Kia khoob jazbaton ko paun tale kare ho

Abul Asad
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2012, 11:23:48 PM »
Wah wah great creation Asad ji.superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2012, 11:26:43 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on February 23, 2012, 11:23:48 PM
Wah wah great creation Asad ji.superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause


Har lehja Har lamha Dagargunj
Meri pindaar-e kalam pe inayat hai

Shukriya Aapka Madhu ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2012, 02:52:20 AM »
Quote from: Abul Asad on February 23, 2012, 11:17:59 PM
Khazaan-e jazbaat chupa-e phire ho
Kuch afsaan-e janhan daba-e phire ho

Koi khanjar se kare waar, to koi talwar se
Tum jo kar-e alfazon se, so ghayal kare ho


Chashm-e nam dil figaron ki baten kare ho
Kiya khoob jazbaton ke apne paun tale kare ho
Abul Asad


Bahut achche Asad saheb.

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2012, 03:54:14 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2012, 05:00:16 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on February 24, 2012, 03:54:14 AM
Applause Applause Applause

Dr Saheb Bahut Bahut shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2012, 05:29:11 AM »
Very good Asad ji Nice creation
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2012, 05:30:28 AM »
Quote from: pankajwfs on February 24, 2012, 05:29:11 AM
Very good Asad ji Nice creation

Thank you Pankaj ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2012, 05:35:41 PM »
Janaab Asad sahab--
aakhri aashar hum thk se samjh nahi pae sad5
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2012, 07:50:45 PM »
Quote from: sarfira on February 24, 2012, 05:35:41 PM
Janaab Asad sahab--
aakhri aashar hum thk se samjh nahi pae sad5

Sarfira ji,

Aap ki khwaish ho aur use ham hukum na samjhen
kiya kabhi bhi aisa hoga?
Hazir hai tafseer aapki zer-e nazr ke liye



Chasm-e nam dil figaron ki baten kare ho
crying eyes  you talk of broken hearts
 
Kiya khoob jazbaton ko apne paun tale kare ho
How nicely do you stomp on emotions under your feet?

Paun- foot
Dil figaron: in a sense broken heart
Chasm-e nam: chasm, eyes...the root word for "chashma"
Namm: wet

Forgive me if i have made any mistakes
your appreciations are ever soothing
and always awaited.... thank you
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«Reply #11 on: February 24, 2012, 09:17:10 PM »
Wow.. Superb creation Abul ji.. and u have did quite good explained in english Usual Smile U r too good !!!
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2012, 09:20:11 PM »
Quote from: Nysha on February 24, 2012, 09:17:10 PM
Wow.. Superb creation Abul ji.. and u have did quite good explained in english Usual Smile U r too good !!!

Just thrilled to have you comment
and your appreciations are always good
I would be more than happy to explain
translate, explain any of my poems or
any word that you might come accross

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