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""
hawaon me kuch Nami si hai
shayd aasaon me bhi kuch Kami si hai
ummeeden bhi hai Thami Thami
saanse ho jaise ab Jami Jami
Thandi si koi aag hai bhadki hui
ruh ka daaman bhi ho jese jalti hui
ntkhat dl mera ab murjha sa gaya
iss qadar wo apna bichda sa gaya
sitamgar ho koi to sitam kare
tukdon tukdon me to yun na zulam kare
kya sach ar kya spna
kya khab ar kya haqekat
kahne sunne ki bate saare
kuch pal ki dewangi me na jane kyn hum apna dil haare
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2011, 06:16:43 AM » |
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hmmm achchi koshish nirala ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2011, 07:06:18 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2011, 09:46:19 AM » |
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wah wah niralaji...
sitamgar ho koi to sitam kare......
tukdon tukdon me to yun ns zulam kare.....
kya baat hai..
dekha dear kaise juban pr aa hi jata hai... kahan chhupaiyega..
bahut khub
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2011, 09:56:28 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2011, 10:00:41 AM » |
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hhehehe sukriya manju aur Rahim ji. " ye to mene comedy me likha tha bas  " thanx " |
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2011, 10:02:47 AM » |
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good....
khuda kare aap yesi baate comedy main likhe hamesha..
aapko dard sahne koi mauka na mile.
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2011, 10:11:47 AM » |
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aameen
aapki iss baat pr 5 cup chai ho jaye 4 cup aapke 2 mere--:)
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ab na to koi khuwahis hai na hi chah
seedha sapaat zindgi hai or bilkul seedhe raah
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2011, 10:18:25 AM » |
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khuda kare...
dekh kar chalie sidhi par bhi kai pagdandiyan hain.
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2011, 10:23:10 AM » |
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thanx " zakhm ka baazar garm hai aansu bhi dekho kaise jagmagaate hain ab kadam pahle bahke the kabhi hardam dekho kaise dagmagaate hain ab " thanx " |
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2011, 10:27:43 AM » |
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hunn..
zakhm gahre lage the dil pe kahin.
kya kya tuta tha hamee yad nahin.
thamks
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2011, 10:31:53 AM » |
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our koi zakham itna tarhpa nahin sakta
tuta dil jeena sikha nahin sakta
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2011, 10:34:46 AM » |
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bina uske ab aur jiya nahin jata.
zakhm sine ka ab khud siya nahin jata.
thanks
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2011, 10:36:50 AM » |
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"
toote dilo ko hum jod denge
gahre zakhmo ko bhi hum sil denge
sharan me to aao humare
pyar hi pyar se tumhare dil ko bhar denge
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2011, 10:37:58 AM » |
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na dekho apne zakham yeh kabhi nahin bhar payenge
jitna marham lagaoge utna hi gehrey ho jayenge
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