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by cooljames on April 06, 2005, 01:02:27 PM
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arz kiya hai
silsile to yu hi chalte rahenge;
fasle bhi bhadte rahenge;
aap kya samjho hamari baat ko;
aap ke bina to hum pal pal marte rahenge.


aankho me aansuon ko ubharne na diya;
mitti ke motiyo ko ubharne na diya;
jis raah par the tere kadam;
us raah pe kisi aur ko chalne na diya
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2005, 01:08:22 PM »
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arz kiya hai
silsile to yu hi chalte rahenge;
fasle bhi bhadte rahenge;
aap kya samjho hamari baat ko;
aap ke bina to hum pal pal marte rahenge.


aankho me aansuon ko ubharne na diya;
mitti ke motiyo ko ubharne na diya;
jis raah par the tere kadam;
us raah pe kisi aur ko chalne na diya
well done....nice work.
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2005, 09:39:00 PM »
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arz kiya hai
silsile to yu hi chalte rahenge;
fasle bhi bhadte rahenge;
aap kya samjho hamari baat ko;
aap ke bina to hum pal pal marte rahenge.


aankho me aansuon ko ubharne na diya;
mitti ke motiyo ko ubharne na diya;
jis raah par the tere kadam;
us raah pe kisi aur ko chalne na diya


nice one james ji but u shud mention NM (not mine) if its not urs!

 :D
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2005, 09:45:27 PM »
Gud one james.....well said.......

Tumse mil kar humne jana muhabbat kya hai,
Rahe wafa hai kaun aur ulfat kya hai,
Hum toh irade se nikale the saari umar chale unpe,
Tune saath mera choda ye fitrat kya hai.
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2005, 10:31:43 PM »
wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!   very  nice  cooljames......thy..........bahot khoob...........   very  nice.........
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2005, 10:34:57 PM »
nice createrrrrrrrrrrrrr.............................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ................................................. ..................
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2005, 08:27:23 PM »
Thanx wheed bhai.........aur pandit ji....apka shukriya....

Hamare dil ke iss dard par bhi log wah wah karte hai,
Chalo ye ishq hamare nahi kissi ke toh kam aaya..
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