IS BAAT KA MUJHE....................

by Tanha(Saurabh) on September 25, 2008, 02:23:27 PM
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IS BAAT KA MUJHE YAKEEN THA KI WO,
DOOR JA RAHE THE MUJHSE PAAS AATE HUE.

WO SURMAYI SI RAAT AUR FIR UNKA MILNA,
MERA DIL SAATH LE GAYE THE MUSKURAATE HUE.

KYA UNKE IS JAHAAN MEIN DEEWANE BAHUT THE?
BADA WAQT LAG RAHA HAI MAUT AATE HUE.

MUJHE KUCHH YAAD NAHI KYA TUMKO ILM HAI,
HUE KAB BEWAFA HUM WAADE NIBHATE HUE.

YE BHI TO ZINDGI KA ANDAAZ HO SAKTA THA,
GUZAR JAATI YE PYAAR TERA PAATE HUE.

KABHI ASHQ CHHALKEGE UN AANKHON SE YAKEEN HAI,
GUZRE WAQT KI HAR LAKEER KO MITAATE HUE.

NEEND AAJAAYE AB INTZAAR RAHTA HAI,
BAHUT ARSAA HUA NAZAR KO DHUNDHLAATE HUE.

BUJHE AAFTAAB TUM YAAD KAROGE NA KABHI?
ZINDGI APNI NAYE SITAARON SE SAJAATE HUE.

CHALTI RAHI JO KASHTI TOOFAAN AANE PAR,
USE TOD GAYI BAS EK MAUJ JAATE HUE.

'TANHA' LAGTA HAI AB WO MAAN JAYENGE,
BAHUT ARSA HUA HAI MUJHE RULAATE HUE.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)

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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2008, 03:08:25 PM »
bohat arsa hua hai muje rulate hue

subhan_allah bohat khoobsurat ghazal thi allah is ghazal ko bohat shorat bakshe
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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2008, 04:44:18 PM »
IS BAAT KA MUJHE YAKEEN THA KI WO,
DOOR JA RAHE THE MUJHSE PAAS AATE HUE.

WO SURMAYI SI RAAT AUR FIR UNKA MILNA,
MERA DIL SAATH LE GAYE THE MUSKURAATE HUE.

KYA UNKE IS JAHAAN MEIN DEEWANE BAHUT THE?
BADA WAQT LAG RAHA HAI MAUT AATE HUE.

MUJHE KUCHH YAAD NAHI KYA TUMKO ILM HAI,
HUE KAB BEWAFA HUM WAADE NIBHATE HUE.

YE BHI TO ZINDGI KA ANDAAZ HO SAKTA THA,
GUZAR JAATI YE PYAAR TERA PAATE HUE.

KABHI ASHQ CHHALKEGE UN AANKHON SE YAKEEN HAI,
GUZRE WAQT KI HAR LAKEER KO MITAATE HUE.

NEEND AAJAAYE AB INTZAAR RAHTA HAI,
BAHUT ARSAA HUA NAZAR KO DHUNDHLAATE HUE.

BUJHE AAFTAAB TUM YAAD KAROGE NA KABHI?
ZINDGI APNI NAYE SITAARON SE SAJAATE HUE.

CHALTI RAHI JO KASHTI TOOFAAN AANE PAR,
USE TOD GAYI BAS EK MAUJ JAATE HUE.

'TANHA' LAGTA HAI AB WO MAAN JAYENGE,
BAHUT ARSA HUA HAI MUJHE RULAATE HUE.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)



Wonderful Saurabh.....Bohot Khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2008, 04:55:49 PM »
 Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI
TANHA JI...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2008, 04:58:27 PM »
 Applause Tanha(Saurabh)ji khoob likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2008, 05:00:35 PM »
bohat bohat shukriya....sajid ji, Celmira ji, shael ji and Honey ji...
aap logon ne ise saraha.. Thankyou !
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2008, 05:01:07 PM »
Saurabh,

Excellent ! Applause Applause Applause

Bahut he behtareen peshkash aap ki taraf se Thumbs UP

Keep going !
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2008, 05:01:27 PM »
IS BAAT KA MUJHE YAKEEN THA KI WO,
DOOR JA RAHE THE MUJHSE PAAS AATE HUE.

WO SURMAYI SI RAAT AUR FIR UNKA MILNA,
MERA DIL SAATH LE GAYE THE MUSKURAATE HUE.

KYA UNKE IS JAHAAN MEIN DEEWANE BAHUT THE?
BADA WAQT LAG RAHA HAI MAUT AATE HUE.

MUJHE KUCHH YAAD NAHI KYA TUMKO ILM HAI,
HUE KAB BEWAFA HUM WAADE NIBHATE HUE.

YE BHI TO ZINDGI KA ANDAAZ HO SAKTA THA,
GUZAR JAATI YE PYAAR TERA PAATE HUE.

KABHI ASHQ CHHALKEGE UN AANKHON SE YAKEEN HAI,
GUZRE WAQT KI HAR LAKEER KO MITAATE HUE.

NEEND AAJAAYE AB INTZAAR RAHTA HAI,
BAHUT ARSAA HUA NAZAR KO DHUNDHLAATE HUE.

BUJHE AAFTAAB TUM YAAD KAROGE NA KABHI?
ZINDGI APNI NAYE SITAARON SE SAJAATE HUE.

CHALTI RAHI JO KASHTI TOOFAAN AANE PAR,
USE TOD GAYI BAS EK MAUJ JAATE HUE.

'TANHA' LAGTA HAI AB WO MAAN JAYENGE,
BAHUT ARSA HUA HAI MUJHE RULAATE HUE.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)



Waah.. That's perfect..
Very Beautiful Creation Saurabh... Applause

Keep Writing...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2008, 05:06:54 PM »
thanks alot Rajbir ji and Mahiya ji......

Taur tareeka-e-shayari kato pata nahi mujhe,
Yunhi kalam chala ke dil kiya jo likh diya.


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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2008, 05:10:05 PM »
thanks alot Rajbir ji and Mahiya ji......

Taur tareeka-e-shayari kato pata nahi mujhe,
Yunhi kalam chala ke dil kiya jo likh diya.


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Jo likha woh kamaal likha, Aur Kamaal par dhamaal likha..
Bus, yun hi likhte rahiyega humesha.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2008, 05:12:10 PM »
Tumhe shayad kuch inspiration mile likhne ke liye Winking tongue3
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2008, 05:47:27 PM »
again a good creation tanha....

behad sadhi hui aur har sher pahle se wajani....behtreen behtreen aur behatreen

daad kabool karen
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2008, 05:51:19 PM »
Aap sab ka bohat bohat shukriya... bekarar ji..
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2008, 05:55:50 PM »
your always welcome tanha ......
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«Reply #14 on: September 28, 2008, 11:14:00 AM »
bahut bahut khoob saurabhji.. Applause Applause Applause
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