iss kadar ban ke bigad jaau

by sunildehgawani on September 29, 2011, 12:11:45 PM

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sunildehgawani

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ji karta hai kahani lahron pe likh jaaon
khayal aata hai na bahti rawani ke sath mit jaaon
jindagi khak kaya hai ek bulbule ke siba
chahta nahi ki iss kadar ban ke bigad jaaon
baqt ke sath mit jayega wazud to apna bhi
ye haquiqat hai isse bhi bachkar kahan jaaon
mohalat bhi kahan hai kuchh kar gujarne ke liye
pahile kasauti pe zindagi ki to khara utar jaaon


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Re: iss kadar ban ke bigad jaau

«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2011, 05:27:21 PM »

Sunil Jee Aadaab!

Janab aapki kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal behad achche
hai.. Kafi achcha sochte hai aap...

Par lafzoN ko parosne meiN thhodi kami nazar aayi..
Likhate rahiye... Maqbul ShayaroN ko padhiye..
Unki soch unke likhne ke andaaz aur bayaaN karne
ke tarike ko samjhne ki koshish karte rahiye..

Aapki kalam meiN bhi wohi hunar aa jayeNga hume ummid
hai.. aapke khayaal kafi achche rahte hai... so koshish
jari rakhiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...