Jazbaat Kabhi Marte Nahi "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 22, 2010, 04:08:13 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 09, 2011, 10:57:39 AM »
aapne ekdum sahi kaha khwaish ji

jazbaat kabhi marte nahi

jindgi chalti rehti hai apne hi andaj me
lekin marne walo ke pichhe hum marte nahi
rote hai bilakhte hai hum kisi ke jane par
kyonki jazbaat hai jo kabhi marte nahi


Aapka bahut bahut shukriya...

Aur Aapne Bhi Khoob Kaha.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #31 on: May 11, 2011, 09:01:35 AM »
khwaishji... aapki is nazm ke ek ek lafz main gahrai hai.. ek ek baat dil teer ki tahar jati hai aur wahin rah jati hai... kahin kahin esa laga jaise puri zindi hi bayan ho gai.... sach kahe to jubban band hai kuch kaha nahin ja raha par.... aapne kamaal ka likha hai.. kamaal kamaal kamaal
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«Reply #32 on: September 14, 2012, 10:33:15 AM »
Khwaish bhai bahut sunder kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne. Wah!! Wah!! mazaa aa gaya janab. Bahut achhe subject par aapne apne jazbaat ko ubhara hai....


Thankyou Soooooooooooooo Much drpandeyji.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #33 on: September 14, 2012, 04:17:18 PM »
zindagee ki haqeeqaton ko bohat qareeb se dekhte hain aap khwish ji
har lafz dil ke jazbat ki sachayi kaa aaina daar hai ....bohat khoob
yoon hi sachayon ko dilon par aashkaar karte rahen...........
shaad rahen
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«Reply #34 on: March 03, 2013, 09:33:02 PM »
khwaishji... aapki is nazm ke ek ek lafz main gahrai hai.. ek ek baat dil teer ki tahar jati hai aur wahin rah jati hai... kahin kahin esa laga jaise puri zindi hi bayan ho gai.... sach kahe to jubban band hai kuch kaha nahin ja raha par.... aapne kamaal ka likha hai.. kamaal kamaal kamaal


Aapne Aapna Waqt Diya manjum Ji..Aapka teh Dil Se bahut Bahut Shukriya...Ji Yeh Meri Khud Ki Likhi Pasandida Nazmo mein Ek Hai..JO humesha Mere Dil Ke kareeb Rahegi...

Thanks a Lotttttttttttttttttt icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #35 on: March 03, 2013, 10:05:16 PM »
Khawish ji aapki kalam me vo baat hai ......Jo Bhut kam jagah Milti hai....

Sach me apki Har ek kalam kuch na kuch kahati hai....I am realy thankful ki aap jaise writer ko hume padhne ka muka nasib hota......hamari duaye hai ki aap raat din tariqi kare........yu hi aate rahe.....

Just awsome.....Keep it up khwish ji,
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