Jhoote Dilaaso Se Kabhi Zindagi Nahi Chalti "Khwaish"

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Teri haar baat ko samaj kar jo chup raha
usne Bahut Mushkil se khud ko sambhaala tha

Duniya Mein Pyaar Woh hai Jo Sirf Lafzon Se Zaahir Ho!!
Par Mera Pyaar karne ka Tareekha Kuch Niraala tha

Yeh Nahi Ke mujhe Andhero mein Chalne ki Aadat Naa Thi,
Par Tu mere Liye, Har Andheri Raat Ka Ek ujaala Tha

Jhoote Dilaaso Se Kabhi Zindagi nahi Chalti Eh Dost!!!
Jo chalta Raha zindagi bhar,Dekho To Uske Paau mein Chaala Tha

Pathar Se Bhi pyaar Karoge To woh Murat ban Jaayega
Patharo ko Bhi Aakhir "Pyaar" Ne Izzat Se har jagah Sawaara Tha..

Haathon Ki Lakeeron mein Jo Naa Mil Saka Naa Sahi!!
"Khwaish" Ne To Usse Apni har Soch-Samaj Mein Dhaala Tha

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2010, 09:47:05 AM »
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Waah bahut khoob khwaish ji behetareen likha hai........
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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2010, 09:54:26 AM »
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Waah bahut khoob khwaish ji behetareen likha hai........

Tuada Bahut bahut Shukarguzaar haan geetji..

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«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2010, 10:39:21 AM »
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Jo Har Baar Tujhse Teri Muskaan Puchta Raha
Kya woh Beraham Sa Koi Awaaara Tha..

Tu Shayad Uske Liye Kuch Bhi Nahi
Par Woh mere Liye Ek Sitaara Tha...

Teri Har Khushi Uss Shaks Ki Khushi Se Juddi Thi
Par Usse Shayad Yeh Mehsoos Naa Hua,Isme Bhi kasoor Humara Tha

Teri Har Baat Mere  Sar-Aankhon Ke sadke!!!!
Woh Insaan Paagal Hi hai Jo Yuhi Dil Haara Tha..

"Khwaish" Ke Dil Mein Kabhi Koi Malaal Nahi Hai!!
Tu Humesha Se Uske Liye Bahut Pyaara Tha..

Bas Yuhi Chalte-Chalte Rishto Ke Naam Badal Gaye!!!
Yeh Bhi Waqt Ka Diya Hua Ek Ishaara Tha....
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«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2010, 02:03:12 PM »
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Bas Yuhi Chalte-Chalte Rishto Ke Naam Badal Gaye!!!
Yeh Bhi Waqt Ka Diya Hua Ek Ishaara Tha....

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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2010, 02:26:58 PM »
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wowwwwwww khwaish ji kya kehne....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj to aapke poems me ek alag si bechaini nazar aarahi hai....
chaliye ise thodasa fresh kar dete hain hum apne reply se....
lijiye padhke bataiye kaisi lagi hamari poem...


Jiske dil me rahi main banke Kasak
Wo tu hi to mera paagal deewana tha

Kaise bhul gya tu wo pal mere humdum
Jab dard me maine sirf tujhe hi pukara tha

Khushi me sath dene ko sab hai sath khade
Tu to meri har mushkil me mera sahara tha

Meri muskaan pe luta dena chahta that u khudko
Lekin ek pal me hi tune mujhse kiya kinara tha

Ehsaas  jo jude hon dil se ruuh se mere humdum
Unn ehsaason se to har ek rishta  haara tha

Main kya kahun k kya khwaish reh gai hai meri
Iss dil ki *kasak* ka to har khwaab hi pyaara tha…!!!




Jo Har Baar Tujhse Teri Muskaan Puchta Raha
Kya woh Beraham Sa Koi Awaaara Tha..

Tu Shayad Uske Liye Kuch Bhi Nahi "Khwaish"
Par Woh mere Liye Ek Sitaara Tha...

Teri Har Khushi Uss Shaks Ki Khushi Se Juddi Thi
Par Usse Shayad Yeh Mehsoos Naa Hua,Isme Bhi kasoor Humara Tha

Teri Har Baat Mere  Sar-Aankhon Ke sadke!!!!
Woh Insaan Paagal Hi hai Jo Yuhi Dil Haara Tha..

"Khwaish" Ke Dil Mein Kabhi Koi Malaal Nahi Hai!!
Tu Humesha Se Uske Liye Bahut Pyaara Tha..

Bas Yuhi Chalte-Chalte Rishto Ke Naam Badal Gaye!!!
Yeh Bhi Waqt Ka Diya Hua Ek Ishaara Tha....

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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2010, 02:40:53 PM »
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ye to pehle wali se bhi badhiya hai khwaish ji..
aapki fan to main hun hi hamesha se ab aapki ac bhi ho gai hun...
toooooo guuuddddaaaaammmmmmmmmmm
i mean mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmm reeeeeeeee....
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ruka hi nahin gaya likhe bina..lijiye padhiye....


Wo koi aur nahin tu hi mera deewana tha
Jiske samne maine apna har dard keh dala tha

Tu samjhega mere dil ki baat aur jazbaat ko
Yehi soch k maine dil tujhe de dala tha

Pyaar to sirf aankhon se bhi samjhaya jataa hai
Maine to tujhe sab shabdon me keh daala tha

Khudse har bar jhut kehte rahete hain sab yahan
Maine aaj khudko ek sach se saamna karwaya tha

Pathar ki murat hi ban gai hun main ab shayad
Tabhi tut k gir jane par sabne thokar me dala tha

Jise apni ruuh me basa liya hai maine khwaish
Uss pyaar ki kasak ko maine dil me bht sambhala tha…!!!

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Teri haar baat ko samaj kar jo chup raha
usne Bahut Mushkil se khud ko sambhaala tha

Duniya Mein Pyaar Woh hai Jo Sirf Lafzon Se Zaahir Ho!!
Par Mera Pyaar karne ka Tareekha Kuch Niraala tha

Yeh Nahi Ke mujhe Andhero mein Chalne ki Aadat Naa Thi,
Par Tu mere Liye, Har Andheri Raat Ka Ek ujaala Tha

Jhoote Dilaaso Se Kabhi Zindagi nahi Chalti Eh Dost!!!
Jo chalta Raha zindagi bhar,Dekho To Uske Paau mein Chaala Tha

Pathar Se Bhi pyaar Karoge To woh Murat ban Jaayega
Patharo ko Bhi Aakhir "Pyaar" Ne Izzat Se har jagah Sawaara Tha..

Haathon Ki Lakeeron mein Jo Naa Mil Saka Naa Sahi!!
"Khwaish" Ne To Usse Apni har Soch-Samaj Mein Dhaala Tha

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2010, 04:11:35 PM »
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Dost, apki iss nazm kay liye mere paas lavz nahin hai..Dono hi parts bahaut khubsoorat hai..Mere dil ko choo gaye iss tarha kay qaid hogaye ander..Bahaut bahaut khoob..


Tu Shayad Uske Liye Kuch Bhi Nahi "Khwaish"
Par Woh mere Liye Ek Sitaara Tha..

Teri Har Baat Mere  Sar-Aankhon Ke sadke!!!!
Woh Insaan Paagal Hi hai Jo Yuhi Dil Haara Tha..

Bas Yuhi Chalte-Chalte Rishto Ke Naam Badal Gaye!!!
Yeh Bhi Waqt Ka Diya Hua Ek Ishaara Tha....

Yeh teen shaer bahaut pasand aye..

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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2010, 04:37:47 PM »
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Anamika di, Bahaut kamal ka likha hai apne bhi..woh kya kehte ho ap..'Mastammmmmmm'..Bahaut bahaut khoob..

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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2010, 03:31:01 AM »
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wowwwwwww khwaish ji kya kehne....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj to aapke poems me ek alag si bechaini nazar aarahi hai....
chaliye ise thodasa fresh kar dete hain hum apne reply se....
lijiye padhke bataiye kaisi lagi hamari poem...


Jiske dil me rahi main banke Kasak
Wo tu hi to mera paagal deewana tha

Kaise bhul gya tu wo pal mere humdum
Jab dard me maine sirf tujhe hi pukara tha

Khushi me sath dene ko sab hai sath khade
Tu to meri har mushkil me mera sahara tha

Meri muskaan pe luta dena chahta that u khudko
Lekin ek pal me hi tune mujhse kiya kinara tha

Ehsaas  jo jude hon dil se ruuh se mere humdum
Unn ehsaason se to har ek rishta  haara tha

Main kya kahun k kya khwaish reh gai hai meri
Iss dil ki *kasak* ka to har khwaab hi pyaara tha…!!!






Anuji, Kin Lafzon mein bataye Ke
Humein Aapki yeh Poem Aakhir Kitni Khoobsurat Lagi,
Itna Zaroor keh sakta hoon Ke baar-baar padhte raha aapki yeh poem...
bahut hi anmol jazbaatons se bharpoor yeh kavita
dil ko Chuti hai..Shukriya Aapka..



Chaahe Kitne Bhi Rang Bharlo Apni Zindagi mein
Par Kuch Tasveere Aisi Bhi Hoti hai Jo Bola nahi karti

Ishq Ek Aisa Jazba Hai Jo Mehsoos Kiya jaata Hai
Zindagi Kabhi Isse Lafzon ke taraazu mein Tola Nahi karti

Agar kisi Ka Pyaar naseeb Ho to Woh Bhi kismato Ki Baat Hai!!
Pyaar Kabhi kisi Ke zindagi mein Zehar Ghola Nahi karti..

"Khwaish" Chaahe Kuch Bhi Ho,Rishte To Umar Bhar Zinda Rehte Hai!!!
Kuch Rishte Aise Bhi Hote Hai Jinhe Naam Dekar Zindagi Tatola Nahi karti

"Khwaish" Ko yeh Ehsaaso Se bhara Rishta Bahut Pyaara hai Eh Humdum!!!
Chaaho To Padhlo Iss Dil ko Kyonki Aankhein  Bhi kabhi Kuch Bola Nahi Karti...
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2010, 04:06:19 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KHWAISH JI......


"JHOOTE DILAASO SE KABHI ZINDAGI NAHI CHALTI"
JO KAHETE HO KAR KE DIKHANA PARDTA HAIN
PYAR MEIN WOH AGAR EK KADAM BHI BADE
TOH HAME DO KADAM BADANA PARDTA HAIN....

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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2010, 04:29:50 AM »
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ye to pehle wali se bhi badhiya hai khwaish ji..
aapki fan to main hun hi hamesha se ab aapki ac bhi ho gai hun...
toooooo guuuddddaaaaammmmmmmmmmm
i mean mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmm reeeeeeeee....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ruka hi nahin gaya likhe bina..lijiye padhiye....


Wo koi aur nahin tu hi mera deewana tha
Jiske samne maine apna har dard keh dala tha

Tu samjhega mere dil ki baat aur jazbaat ko
Yehi soch k maine dil tujhe de dala tha

Pyaar to sirf aankhon se bhi samjhaya jataa hai
Maine to tujhe sab shabdon me keh daala tha

Khudse har bar jhut kehte rahete hain sab yahan
Maine aaj khudko ek sach se saamna karwaya tha

Pathar ki murat hi ban gai hun main ab shayad
Tabhi tut k gir jane par sabne thokar me dala tha

Jise apni ruuh me basa liya hai maine khwaish
Uss pyaar ki kasak ko maine dil me bht sambhala tha…!!!

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Haaye!!! Anuji, Naa Aap Mere Fan Ho, Naa A.c,Aap Mere Liye Bahuttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Hi Ache Dost ho..Aur huemsha Rehna..
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne..


Dil Ki Baaton ko Ab Ek Naya Andaaz Doon,
Jab bhi Tanha Rehta Hoon,Tujhe Hi Awaaz Doon!!!!

Sochta Hoon Apni Muskaan Tujhe Somp Doon!!!
Iss Besure Dhadkano ko Kyun Na,Ek Naya Saaz Doon

Meri Zindagi Ki Kitaab Ab Tumhaare Haath Mein  Hai!!!
Ab Bacha Hi kya Mujhe mein,Jo Tujhe Eh Mere Humraaz Doon

Hai Dua Yeh Ke Tu Har-dum Muskuraati Rahe!!
Kaash Main Tujhe Khushiyon Se bhara Akaash Doon!!!

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Apne Dil mein Qaid Dard Se!!!
Saanson Ke pinjre mein  Kab Tak Qaid Rahoge!!
Kyon Naa Main Tujhe Ab Parwaaz Doon
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«Reply #12 on: October 08, 2010, 06:42:12 AM »
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Khwaish Dost, bahaut bahaut khoob dobara se..dono parts bahaut ache likhe hai apne jawab main..
yeh do lines bahaut bahaut achi hai:

"Meri Zindagi ki kitaab ab tumhare haath main hai,
Ab bacha hi kya mujh main, jo tujhe eh mere humraaz doon.."

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«Reply #13 on: October 08, 2010, 07:03:33 AM »
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Anuji, Kin Lafzon mein bataye Ke
Humein Aapki yeh Poem Aakhir Kitni Khoobsurat Lagi,
Itna Zaroor keh sakta hoon Ke baar-baar padhte raha aapki yeh poem...
bahut hi anmol jazbaatons se bharpoor yeh kavita
dil ko Chuti hai..Shukriya Aapka..



Chaahe Kitne Bhi Rang Bharlo Apni Zindagi mein
Par Kuch Tasveere Aisi Bhi Hoti hai Jo Bola nahi karti

Ishq Ek Aisa Jazba Hai Jo Mehsoos Kiya jaata Hai
Zindagi Kabhi Isse Lafzon ke taraazu mein Tola Nahi karti

Agar kisi Ka Pyaar naseeb Ho to Woh Bhi kismato Ki Baat Hai!!
Pyaar Kabhi kisi Ke zindagi mein Zehar Ghola Nahi karti..

"Khwaish" Chaahe Kuch Bhi Ho,Rishte To Umar Bhar Zinda Rehte Hai!!!
Kuch Rishte Aise Bhi Hote Hai Jinhe Naam Dekar Zindagi Tatola Nahi karti

"Khwaish" Ko yeh Ehsaaso Se bhara Rishta Bahut Pyaara hai Eh Humdum!!!
Chaaho To Padhlo Iss Dil ko Kyonki Aankhein  Bhi kabhi Kuch Bola Nahi Karti...


Tasveerein na bol kar bhi sab keh jati hai,
Uski yaad dila kar, mujhe bahaut rula jati hai..

Ishq ko mehsoos iss qadar kiya hai kay aj ankhein iski gawah hai,
‘Khwaish’ teri nazmein mujhe apni hi dastaan suna jati hai..

Jab tak woh shaks saath hai tab tak toh sahi hai yaaron,
Juda hone par yaadein zindagi ko tanha kar jati hai..

Har rishta zinda rehta hai umar bhar, yeh baat kuch hazam nahin hoti ‘Khamosh’,
Aksar zindagi main kuch cheezein [hadse] kayi rishton ko kamzor kar jati hai..

Jo mere dil main hai woh zuban par hai,
Chaho toh milalo nazron se nazrein kyun ki,
‘Khamosh’ ki ankhein hi sab kuch keh jati hai..

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«Reply #14 on: October 08, 2010, 08:33:33 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KHWAISH JI......


"JHOOTE DILAASO SE KABHI ZINDAGI NAHI CHALTI"
JO KAHETE HO KAR KE DIKHANA PARDTA HAIN
PYAR MEIN WOH AGAR EK KADAM BHI BADE
TOH HAME DO KADAM BADANA PARDTA HAIN....



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Caraji..

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